XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trooper]

Cool idea

I love things like this. It is very artistic and has good use of coloring and the background makes it all come together in a scifi way and artistic way. Your background was good but a bit blurred and perspectives seemed off, but I did like your blending. The robots facial and detailed eyes really were good. I loved the added touch of a lightning rod in one eye behind the eye. I would recommend more sharpening of the image and more perspective and depth to the background but good job overall.

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I would just make things a bit sharper.

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[Inktober #11 50 Second Challenge]

Notbad

So this was cool I like that this one only took you a solid 50 seconds and you still managed to come up with something that looks decent. I do think the lines are a bit all over the place in size veriations, so maybe that's something need to watch out for next time you go to do a fast drawing, but I do like the style here and for something that was going to be done so fast, it is not bad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved lines for consistency

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well 50 seconds was a challenging time limit. XD I plotted the motive before I started the clock, though. Pretty happy with how it turned out all things considered, but do agree, with time maybe I'll get both faster and better. Thanks!

[Insanity Box 2 chick]

Interesting

Ok this one is not bat and interesting, you have gone for some pixel art again and this time you've included a background to have more pixel type items from the food types of burgers and pies to apples and shakes, and I think that was interesting because it isn't always done like that. You often see other types like flowers or items of weapons when doing a background like this but you took that old way and made it work for the theme you have here. The theme seems to be health and fitness as the women is wearing workout clothing and ready to go work out and train and maybe she is a fitness freak who isn't going to let you stop till you drop or drop dead from over working. I like the way you have her hands doing that peace sign and the way her other hand rests on her hip. This type of body position shows she is ready to go and ready to get to work but also have fun. The blonde in her hair is nice and the the way she smiles was drawn really well for pixel art. I think also the work out clothing was a good choice to make her look and the feeling she wants to give you that you're going to have a good workout. I would like to see more of her body next time, maybe her feet as those seem to be cropped out but that is fine for now, but try adding more of her body next time so we get the entire picture of this girl. Overall great stuff and hoping to see more soon from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of her body in this next time, zoom out to include feet and the rest of her but good job on this one right here.

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[Bestfriends]

Very romintic piece

this was a delightfull piece and shows off some really nice elements of detail, my tip is I wish the rain was more domminant but I guess its a light rain, These types of pieces are always artistic and they brings something new to the table, thats why im a fan of these types of art and skill types, and seems like you did put fourth some effort and bringing some good creativity to the boards, making for a decent and artistic piece. My thaughts on this are that its a slick and beautiful piece and on my ending thaughts you really did bring out the creative mind though otherwise feels it might have looked nicer with less, but you have a great piece of work here.

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my tip is I wish the rain was more domminant but I guess its a light rain

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[Cool.. a turtle]

Notbad

A good cartoon look on your art here. I like the overall unique style and the character has a good face. I dont see why you have a 3 rating when this is something very good. I think you could make a full animation out of this but dont hurt the turtle, the green color over the turtle and only the turtle is very unique and makes a statement but you could use more shading if you are keeping this black and white everywhere else. The tree in perticular looks bare but overall I think you have something good here.

THINGS TO IMPROVE ON
just add more shading to the tree and others places and maybe turn this into an animation at some point

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[Inktober #12 5 Second Challenge]

Simple

So this was cool I like the simple nature of this one and it seems to be another one of your faster drawings, this time at 5 seconds. I think for 5 seconds this is actually pretty decent but too simple. I think you could have set the background color quick to be blue and then did a bit of green on the bottom portion. I bet you could save time by not signing the piece to give it a little extra. I mean, for a 5 second drawing, do you really need to have the signature?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort and detail

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Cyberdevil responds:

The signature's excluded in the time above, as mentioned. :) Just feels like it's a signature thing, you know? Glad you're appreciating even these rushed ones!

[Father's Day]

Very entertaining

Very nice wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit, What I love the most about these are that you can make them entertaining even with this one started out average but you really bring a climax to it making it pretty fun and entertaining so I thank you for that effeort and energy that you bring across the table. so keep it real and keep making these awsome pieces.

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wouldnt mind some color though or a little bit

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[Metal Detector]

You have a good Envision

haha great joke here and well executed I love your envision on this piece you make a simple thing look great, And basicly with this episode you made these characters really jump into action with this one, the story really comes out well, And Im impressed not just with this but with everything you do to make this a success.

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these jokes are really good you should really make more extended jokes like this

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[The Gas N' Gouge]

This was nifty

I like the perspective of this and all the "VIBRANT" colors it really made it look very nice, all the little details also look very good made it look like a real world and was pretty nice and nifty so nice job on this one, hope you make more stuff like this one very nice work.

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very nice work here didnt find anything at all that really needs any changes on this one.

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[Inktober #18 Cryptic Ink]

Very nice work here

Well I was really pleased with this piece the leet moris code was nice to see after all these years, and the way you included the pen itself was a nice detail that gave it some depth and realistic appeal. The only thing is this seems it's lacking some sparkle and shine, you could give much more shine and a sparkle in the corners and on the pen. But anyways nice job on this great language and I wonder what it all says?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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Cyberdevil responds:

It's binary, if you want to look it up. ;) Maybe some shine on the pen yes... but overall not sure I'd go for that style here! Thanks though.