XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's never too late to give up]

Amusing

Well this one not sure what to think but that background needs more but it's a cute saying with a nice phrase good fresh charchter and just amusing and funny so keep up the good work and I look forward to more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something in the background like a pattern or design

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[Summer Nurse]

Very cute

And this one is another cute girl with a good structure she has cuteness written all over her the line work is smooth even the background is nice as I said in the other one I think you can have some bright stars and dim ones and some shiny ones and even glowing ones but those are just a few ideas that would be nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some star effects with glowing and shine ideas

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[Wallpaper sharing!]

Nice and simple

So this was nice and simple but it's also bland in that background now this is one of those I would put a beam of light or sun burst from behind the heads and have it come forward would be a nice filler and nice effect overall

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunburst or beam of light from behind heads

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[Vocaloid Usagi]

Nice and soft

So this was a soft piece here I love your charchter here very simple and cute very good structure and the clouds are nice but I think you should have more layers of clouds so that it does have that real effect of a cloudy feel of things but nice clouds regardless anyways good work here I look forward to even more. Fantastic work here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More layered clouds more fluffy look

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[Our journey starts here!]

Entertaining

Lol this was funny I like the comic style here and you would really do well with a comic style of sorts here I like the ending and what the bird says lol I think as a form of improvement you could make the border frames thicker just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Thicker borders frames

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[I'M HIDING FROM......]

Haha cute

Well this one is pretty cute I like the little pun joke at the viewer or me lol love the close up shot too I would like to see a sparkle on his goggles though it's a refreshing look and shows his goggles are shiny but nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small sparkle on his goggles it's just a small detail that would stand out

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[YES, WEEKEND IS COMING!]

Nice as always

And I love that little bird I could really see you making a comic out of this whole thing and making it work well you have the characters and the flavor of style this particular piece could be enhanced with a beam of light behind them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it is he weekend have a beam of light behind them shine on them from behind

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[Snuggle it Out]

Cute girl

So this was cute I like this cute girl she is sleeping peacefully those stars in the background are nice I would have the stars hlow and shine some brighter then the others that an idea for you to think about the character here was really good and I enjoyed it very much so that's my review for this lovely piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some stars can hlow and be brighter not all just some here and there

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[Who love doughnut as much as i do?]

Doughnuts

So this was a nice random one now for some improvment on this one I think you can have the doughnuts glow on the bottom would be a nice little effect that can enhace the quality of this art piece just an idea to think on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the doughnuts glow

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[Don't judge me!]

As always cute

And here was another cute one these characters say the darkest things and I have to say that the don't used is basic I could see you using a more fancy font for more quality but that's just an opinion and idea to try

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better don't in this one

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