XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phantom Pumpkin]

I like your style

You have a good style and you seem to enjoy the pumnkin style this was a cool drawing you should as an extra effcets have the eyes light up or something might give it that spooky feeling but I will say that it was a nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Light up the eyes

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[Kupomkin]

Nice work

And you have some nice work here I like the color on this I think you should put some cuts and bruises on the pumnkin to give it more of a realistic feel to it but that's my imput on it you have some nice work though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some bruises and cuts

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[Dapper Pumpkin Spriteling]

Really nice work

And here was some nice work I love the structure of this all now I would love some color even if it was just the head part of this or maybe have the eyes glow somehow but anyways you are very talented and hope to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow in the eyes or the head itself would be nice colored

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[Infinite Shadow]

Love it

Very nice I'm a big fan of dragons and this is cool I love the detail and most of all I like that eye that's the part you should have in color like a green and red or one or the other and would really accent the whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the eye

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[Flinthook Illustration]

Very stylish

So this one has a fresh look fresh print and fresh all the way around now I can see you making that green gem in the middle jump out more with some transparency shine and even a sparkle. Just one idea that may work and would make everything else look good too so try it out but regardless love the freshness of this whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shine and sparkle the green gem a bit

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[Vixi]

Very well done

Wow first off the colors here are fantastic and even mystical that deep red is so very nice it allows for the shine to come out a bit more I like it and I would even go with even more shine points and even brighter and as for the background somewhat darker might be better but not too dark but with all that said you have a very good design her nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker backround and more shine

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[Borkshire's Baby Raptor]

Wow

Wow what can I say this one is pretty wickedly good with detail and very nice sketches here love the detail and love the shades aswell you are an outstanding artist I would love to see some color added maybe just the dragon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like just the dragon

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[technoliberation]

Artistic

Well this was pretty artistic I like this and was pretty artistic if you ask me I think there was a lot of stuff here and no real focus point so my suggestion to you is put on some focus points or some lighting effects on a focus point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus point needed

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vinara128 responds:

Hey thank you for the constructive review,will do better next time. :D

[hot key]

Wow

There seems to be a lot going on in this visual so much detail it's hard to really just focus on anything so my advice is have some beam of light on some focus points just an idea though and hope you can pull it off too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[The axe effect]

Very nice work

So I have to say this was very nice work I do think it was too dark and you have to find ways of lighting up things like you do in the center maybe a rock or a plant or just something to light up areas more but that's all really this needs maybe even a beam of light from above but you do have some nice elements here and it all came fourth very nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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