XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[crush me baby-Glaucoma]

Well this was different

I have to say this was very different but you do have an idea here and it seems to work so nice work I would put more glow and sparkle on the green points of this but the visual is not very clear so maybe some polish up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bit of polish is needed

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[Flinthook for real!!]

Nice

So this was a nice charchter design you have here the gems are nice and the gem he is holding should have a much more hlow and shine even some sparkle on it just an idea that could make this one a lot better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the gems shine. Glow. And sparkle

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[Art Trade with Foxluu]

Very nice structure

Now here you have a very good charchter and show them in good expression love the clothing detail and the use of color also having the detail on her clothing is always great to see only thing here I would love to see improved would be that background it's lacking but overall you have a beautiful piece of artwork here and I'm very pleased with the outcome so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The background is lacking so add something back there even a pattern of some sort could work

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KanesakiHyudou responds:

thank you for the feed back...my recent art works have a lot of background art in them but it takes so long to make them! XD!

[3milkT]

Simple

Simple yet not and it has some beautiful colors all themes and her innocence is displayed well live the eyes I think you could improve onto this like the white border or frame could be more of a dark burgandy red just an idea to think about but you have some nice talent on this piece here so nice job indeed hope to see more of your work sometime soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The borders and or frames could be a deeper red not white

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[Funny Webcomic about Adulthood]

FUNNY

I laughed at this one, a very real view on growing up for a girl, not that I know, but it does happen. I think that each pane in the comic is well thought out and the fonts used work well, I just wish you used color here, because black and white works well but color would bring it alive and make it a bit funny, more so the adult content of the art. I love your character design, reminds me of comics I enjoy. A nice piece here not something I see all the time but seems like you know how to set this up just right, giving it the right touches and all. Finally we have reached the end of this review and art piece. And as I end thin I will say that it was a pleasure finding this piece, the portal has many amazing art pieces including what you have created today. but anyways I hope to see more of your interesting creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a bit of color to the character and then maybe some background in each pane.

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[PICO DAY 2017]

Really nice work

Now this was some really nice work I love all the vibrant colors and all the different characters and all the visual effects that jump out at you you have done an outstanding job here and congrats on the award

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a thing this is fine as is

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[Suraki]

Nice character

This was some nice character work you have here, the backround does need some work as this was very bland, you could ad some type of scene there maybe a design or a color based meshed with another color. But i like the character work here and nice structure ofcourse, so keep up the decent work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround does need some work as this was very bland, you could ad some type of scene there maybe a design or a color based meshed with another color.

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[Nessbeatsfox]

Really nice

This was some really nice work the "SKIN-TONE" was very welldone, the beanie was well textured, and everything here was just so realistic I do think some work on the backround could be lighter color tone but you still have a very nic peiece of artwork here, ad some boirders or frames on this aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders on the edges since it is like a portrait.

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[TARBOY]

Wow

I have to say this was wickedly powerful just those eyes alone are great I would even suggest a glow around them also so that more lighting comes out but that's just an idea to think about besides that this was a great art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the eyes but I think it's fine as is

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