XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hellraiser]

Love it

Wow this is pure awesomeness very deep detail I grew up with this series and you doing this on wood was even more impressiveness so props to you on such a beautiful piece of art love it from wood to paint

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I could really see you paining some borders on this piece

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[Some broad]

Decent

Well this was decent but could use some work on it. Like the shades and lightning effects need to be more better and adding some texture in props and backrounds would be a plus as well just a few ideas to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I just stated a few things can be improved for a better outcome

~X~

twobyfour responds:

Yeah... I'm not fuckin Picasso, I know :|
Thanks for coming!

[Lord Skrolk]

Awesome

This here was awesome and dark very deep in texture and scary at times and that makes for a good piece here I really like what you have done here and bringing out the dark element textures are deep and detailed. So very nice work here

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Not sure it needs anything it has come around very well if anything some small lighting effects

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[Inktober Day 29]

Very nice

And this one very nice work I like the blood on this but think you should ad more blood and have it drip downwards more. Other then that this was notbad I did like what you have here though a decent art piece if I say so myself

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood

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[Inktober Day 27]

Another fine piece

And here you have another fine piece kinda funny too you seem to have lots of these but they are all different in there own way so they are a unique style and I like what you did here I would love some frame or border

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above just a little something to bring it out more

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[Inktober Day 25]

Notbad

So here was another nice piece in the bunch would have loved much more color and more use of the backround but you had a goal I understand so that was cool anyways nice job here keep up the good efforts and good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail ofcourse and more color all around

~X~

ChazDude responds:

It's a sketch. It isn't SUPPOSSED to have colour.

[Ikarusu]

Notbad work

Well here was notbad work at all the sketch itself seems to be well done some nice shades nice detail and all around good effort, Now I love some black and white art work here but would be a huge plus if you added some color or even just parts of color that could make this stand out more, but other then that this was notbad.

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Now I love some black and white art work here but would be a huge plus if you added some color or even just parts of color that could make this stand out more.

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[Reaper OW fanwork]

Wow

I love this piece love what you did with this the darkness and the "EYES" I do think you should have added more glare and shine to the eyes but you have some nice work here very well designed and created. great shades and depth all the way around, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. because they will help of course and bring some better resluts all around.

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more glare and glow on the eyes would be nice but maybe not your direction.

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JessxJess responds:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful response! Good eye too, near an end of a personal piece I always think about another and want to move onto the next xD Criticism is always welcome!

[Yearning for An Other]

Dark

I like the dark theme here the dress was well done as was the character she is very dark and is alluring to the viewer and the darkness of her really makes you wonder if she can be real so you did give off that effect so nice job there

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Maybe to keep up the darkness some mystic clouds floating around

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[Are you determined to give us candy?]

Nice job here

And here was a nice work of little tid bits of characters and they look pretty good very fresh looking and something that would be nice if newgrounds pushed them forward so nice efforts all the way around love them

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Maybe more color additions but they are pretty good as is

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Each sprite only has one color in vein of Undertale fyi. I've seen some people attempt to color the battle sprites for their fan game.