XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mushroom Kingdom Stand-Up 1]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
so comics are not my best of things to review, but i will do my best in this one, as for the "CHARACTER" luigi he looks pretty good and glad to see that luigi gets some love, now as for the "COMIC" style thats cool, but i am more of the old sunday comics fan so having it in the long way as you do is ok, but why not have it in "TWO" sections that way you could have more to the comic, but if it were me and this is just my opinion i would rather it go from left to right as in sunday comics and or just newspaper comics do, but enough on that, i would love to see luigis sloth, with more texture in theme so the color could really comeout and shine, and as for the "JOKE" itself, you should work on that, i was abit confused at first but i suppose it was funny, Now dont get me wrong i did get a laugh out of this, just could see it being more funnier, so anyways hope to see more comics like this in the future, for now good luck on your next art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Made a few suggestions on some ways the window spaces are placed, making it more funny would be nice, and also mentioned some more texture use, other then that it was amusing.

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Iplaygames responds:

thanks a ton. The two panel thing I completely agree on, and am actually considering doing. I realize it wasn't that funny, but it gave me an opportunity to draw Luigi... I probably should do shading too.

Thanks again.

[Land of the Walking Plants]

Awsome world

~~REVIEW~~
So here is another great piece by you, not my fave but still something pretty awsome, the reason i like this one, is because you have a full landscape with lots of imagination and once again some "CREATIVENESS" about it all, and thats what i like about your style, is the creativeness and you create these worls and color and so on, that really jumpout to me and i hope to others, so really some awsome work there, i would love to see you bring some stuff like this into a more computer art program and really make the colors "SHINE" and really just standout, and even with that you could really amke more detail show off on this, the colors you have now are notbad but, but would be much better and show more detail with photoshop detailing and effects, just something to think about, but i was really impressed with it all, now things to improve on, well i would love to see some people or some other type of civ in this scene living walking or even battling, again just another idea that could show off the world more, anyways good stuff once again i enjoyed it, keep up the good work, and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some things like more effects on color with a computer art program, also some extra detail touces with the world you created like another civilsation of some sort.

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Merol responds:

I know It would look more shiny and clean if I use photoshop, but I just don't enjoy doing this kind of stuff using a computer program as much as I do using paper (also, I'm a photoshop noob). But I will give it a shot sometime, I don't know, maybe making the sketch in paper and add color with photoshop or flash.
About the another type of civilization, yeah, maybe it would be pretty cool if there were another species wandering around... actually there already are, if you take a closer look at the river, you will see some fishes.

THANKS A LOT MAN!!!

[Spirals!]

Creative color

~~REVIEW~~
Love the color on this one, you have some pretty good work here as i was looking through your other stuff, this was pretty good, but im one about "COLOR" and here with this one you have put fourth lots of color, if i may ask what did you use to do this, the "TEXTURE" is pretty amazing and i really like this stuff, awsome stuff, and you have a good sense of "CREATIVITY" by creating something that is not exactly anything but it becomes something so awsome with the finished project so really awsome job here i enjoyed it, i would love to see more work from you like this piece its my fave piece of all your work, and you reall put all this color fourth with such creativeness, and thats my fave part of it all, Keep making stuff like this and you will do fine here on NG, but anyways if i can suggest anything on this delightful piece, i think i would say, make it larger ad even more twists and turns, but mostly ad even more color and creativity in designs, it truly is an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it larger ad more color and more twists and designs, even brighten up the color aswell

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Merol responds:

Hey! Thanks a lot!
I made it with flash, I used the brush, nothing special about it I think.
Actually, I don't use to make lots of draws with flash or another programs, but if I ever make something like this again I will take your recomendations.
THANK YOU!!! (Also, glad you like that thing so much)

[Jokette]

Sexy

~~REVIEW~~
Heh now here was something really neat but yet differant, now this could be a female joker or could even be the jokers girlfriend or something along them lines, hehe, but anywyas, you reall did well on this with awsome use of "COLOR" and good detail all around right from the start and it seemed to come out well, I wouldnt mind seeing more of a backround detail work on this, but this border type thing was notbad either, maybe some sorta cty drop or alley, since it is in joker theme, and you did make her all sexy, only one thing o thought could have been better and that was the shoes, are they shoes or heels cant really tell, might be even sexier if it was heels, but ohwell, anyways it was a really good piece and i have enjoyed seeing this aswell as reviewing it, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe sexier shoes, also some sorta backdrop, like a city scene or something

[Walk of the Mammoths]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece, with lots to see, all sorts of stuff, tobad you didnt ad in a differant tone of color though that might brig more focus to stuff, like this man, which he was part of the whole story like with the frogs and all, it all makes sense though, i really love all the differant characters like the ones that make the whole border of the windo into this story of all sorts of random and strange characters, so really awsome job on this one, i had fun reviewing this one and other pieces, just love the detail, so for this one if i was to suggest to improve on anything it would be again to be the bland spots, amybe even make some thicker borders, something along them lines, so that the art piece is more of a full art piece. but for what it is, its pretty awsome and very well detailed. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add to the bland spots, and make the borders abit thicker aswell.

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[Jesu Christos Fungus Experimen]

Awsome once again

~~REVIEW~~
Wow awsome indeed, every piece you make is full of awsome, so much detail, and love how you give it an old style feel, it really works well, the "BORDERS" here also give off the old feel, and the sephia tone really brings in that old style, which i really love, but i have to say its not even that, its the style, creativity and all the little stuff you ad in, such as this one the "STAR" on the middle of the head, or the guy in the one eye, and also you think outside the box which is again another awsome thing here, now im thinking you could even go more, like where the bland areas of the page are you could have "CRACKS" so it looks like its aging paper or something along them lines and all, something to try out anyways, so give it a try sometime, but anyways keep up the awsome detailed artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the bland parts of the paper or page look more aged, maybe even put some cracks in the borders aswell, to also give off that look.

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