XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bedtime Stories]

Cute

Haha well i was not expecting this but i did think it was kind of cute, it has a nice and pinkish color so nice theme there, It kind of reminds me of Dolly parton with the whole hairdo and such, but anyways this was all pretty good even nice backrounds, and is, so as for improvments i think its just right if anything maybe add some nice fancy borders to go with the pink theme, but besides that this was pretty good and it was unique and in an ending note it was cute and silly, But anyways keep up the good work, hope to see more newre stuff from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent piece here, Try adding some nice fancy borders to go with the pink theme,

[Apple]

Nifty

Ok so this was nifty kinda differant it almost has a sort of abstract kind of art style, I love how the colors blend into eachother, i can see you using some filters in the program while thats ok you want to try and use more natural styles and not crowd it with the art program filters, but its decent and as for improvments i suppose you can add more of a realistic feel to the apple like maybe some aged color tones and much more texture within it, as an idea you can even throw in a worm or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you can add more of a realistic feel to the apple like maybe some aged color tones and much more texture

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you.

[St Patricks Day]

Greenish

This was very greenish and its decent for st patricks day, it was kinda small though so first thing i can say would be better is to make the canvus much larger then you can add differant designs of clovers and such, maybe make the backround green a much lighter version then you have, and this is one of those types that would really work, with some borders and you can make some really fancy one to really spice it up. anyways theres a few ideas there to try and let it shine from there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above i suggested a few ideas to make this much better like, Bigger canvus, more clover designs, lighter backround texture, and some fancy borders.

[Trees]

Needs more effort

Now this one was toosimple it was more cute then anything else, the sidewalk cameout ok and the trees were cute, the backround seemed almost too sloppy once again, so this is another one that needs a dash of quality, and theres a number of things you can do to fix ur up, more shades and texture in the trees and much better backrounds could also need some help, so put more effort and take your time with the drawings, anyways keep practing it gets better after time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some quality issues but most of all the drawings need to be fine tuned and practice makes perfect.

[St Patricks Land]

Colorfull

Well this was colorfull but could be better, some of it seems kind of sloppy and the quality was slightly low so you may want to work on the quality more, maybe use a better art program, give the sun some lighting effects, and brighten up the rainbow aswell, these are all things that could make it have abit more quality, and while you are at it you can make the clouds more visable. nice job though and nice idea with the clover trees.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This one could use alot of work, with quality and more lighting effects and larger scale.

[Canubus plant]

Nice

This was differant but it was kinda neat, the whole plant was neat and i like how you changed up the colors and matched them aswell on the plant aswell, One thing i have noticed is that you use alot of the backrounds you may want to change, them abit maybe add some design to it and such, also you should make the plant bigger but again you may need to make the canvus size bigger, anyways nice job.

So again as i go through your art there could be some better backrounds and the canvuses could be larger.

[Box]

A box

Ok so not sure what you were trying with this one, It is a box and hasall the sides but im thinking with a little more practice this can be even better, the backrounds really look nice and some nice effects were used, i think that the darwing skills need to be fine tuned better though as this was, so some things to work on would be start more practicing with the drawings take your time and just keep at it, other then that this was ok, but could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more effort on the drawing part is needed, maybe lose the borders and let it be more of the page and such.

[Sunset]

This was better

Ok so this was better, alot better then your other stuff and with this one you can see you putting in more effort with shades and lighting, the view screen is kinda small so thats another area you may want to work on, so a few things here first the size could be larger, and more stuff like props could be in there, these are a few things that could be better, so put in some more effort and such, other then that it was pretty decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The size of the canvus could be much larger, that way you can show more detail and even add more stuff in the drabwing itself.

[NBA Strike 2011]

Oh this was neat

Now this was kind of neat, The art style seems kind of plain though and could use better detailing and texture, i like the idea and the meaning is sorta neat and i remember this on the nba so that was a nice gesture and all, but again the art could be better needs more fine tunning and much more detail and ofcourse more effort on your side, so try a lil better with this, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said, needs more effort needs more art color and texture, and just more overall detail about it.

[Comic Book]

Really nice visuals

This was nice and i really like the visuals in art here and it is like a comic, and really love how you give this some suspense and emotion in each frame, onething i thought could be better though was that the frames are too close together, the linework and shading cameout well and also has a dark feel and touch to it that was all pretty good, now as an idea for improving, spread out the frames some maybe even put some bars in bewtween, kinda like sunday comics of sorts, but anyways good comic here hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the frames abit more so its not all so bunched up, other then that it was pretty good.