XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Comic Book]

Really nice visuals

This was nice and i really like the visuals in art here and it is like a comic, and really love how you give this some suspense and emotion in each frame, onething i thought could be better though was that the frames are too close together, the linework and shading cameout well and also has a dark feel and touch to it that was all pretty good, now as an idea for improving, spread out the frames some maybe even put some bars in bewtween, kinda like sunday comics of sorts, but anyways good comic here hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the frames abit more so its not all so bunched up, other then that it was pretty good.

[chinese zodiac]

These are differant

So these were all pretty neat, and you have a decent idea here, great textureand color aswell as some nice creative ideas here, kinda reminds me of some cut outs with a mix of pokemon in there, so that was a nice feel to it all, and the art was fantastic with some good quality detail and texture, nothing else i can say about that, im think as any kind of improvment though you should put them on a larger canvus with some backrounds kinda like a group just an idea though, anyways decent work here, keep it up, i look forward to more of your creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of the "LONG" board stle give it a more group style with some nifty backround.

[a-voiding kassadin!]

This was nifty

This was pretty nifty. great designa nd drawing on the character, even love the backround you worked with too, The pink was kinda neat but seems like you should have put a little more detail maybe some more shades on the "GLOBE" and the other pink slashes and such, and you may also want to give the "HORNS" some shine and even some glare of some sorts it would be a nice little effect, You have a great drawing here just wish there was more effort on some effects and so on, but besides that this was notbad at all. but great piece regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a few suggestions as mentioned above, some more shades on the Globe, give the Horns some shine and even some glare.

[The Wild Hunt pg.1]

This was decent

Wellthis was a decent little strip here,it seemed too bland in some of the "FRAMES" though, andwould really be nice to see some color, now if you arenot all for color thats cool, but even just a touchof color here and there would be nice like say a tree or a light post etc while everythingelse is kept black and white, but as for the comic itself it was pretty interesting just seemed blandas there could have been more drawings and linework in some of those bland areas, i guess what im saying is fill in the blank areas abit more, anyways you have a decent piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i mentioned some tips on making things better like,some added color or just some focus points of color, And also there were some bland frames that could be filled abit better,

[Paper Mario]

This was pretty cute

Now im abig fan ofmario and such and this was pretty cute,the characters were "FRESH" looking and really just looked great fresh and smooth design on them you really gave themthat whole mario feel, The only thing i thought could be better or improved was the font of text maybe it could be more toony like or maybe it was the bubbles but something there was abit off, regardless the whole scene was amusing and love the backround detail of differant products and also i like the little pun of joke in there, anyways cute piece i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated above the font was the only issue really, butother then that it was a cute piece.

[The Cupboard]

Fantastic

So i looked at what the art portal had to offer today and this one is the one stood out to me, maybe it was thepurple or thesefunny looking characters just jumping out of the page but regardless it was cute, i like all the little shines and details and you really gace this art piece some character and brought it to life almost like outside of the box so nice efforts there, the balls at top with shine could use more of a shine maybe even some glow to it, but besides all that this was pretty cute and i found it to be a pretty fantastic piece.always looking forward to see what new artists bring to the table, this reviewer enjoyed this piece today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned maybe abit more shine and even some glow on the "BALLS" at top, butother then that this was apretty cute piece.

SplendidDevil responds:

thanks for the review, it is an awesome review and i appreciate the criticism :3

it's like my first photoshop piece, im still getting used to photoshop and it's mindfuckery :)

[ATTACK OF THE CALAMARIBOTS]

Wow this was very impressive

This was pretty impressive, Seems like this should be a poster though one of those long posters, but there was alot to see here and all the little detail. kinda like watching a whole bunch of windows of differant stuff happening and all the differant situations were funny and amusing so props to you on making some nice drawings and designs here the art was smooth and you even gave a small story as there was something always going on in each little piece, so nice job there, anywayskeep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make this into a paost of somesort other then that this was pretty good.

[Assorted jelly beans flyer]

So this was differant

Ok so this was differant the art style was differant aswell, now i must say there was alot of detail in this maybe too much at times, and some way it was hard to see everything that was going on, The drawing was good, and was abit dark, love the detail dont get me wrong just seemed like there wastoomuch of it, maybe if the view screen was larger you could spread it out better somehow, maybe it was also because everything was so packed in, but anyways this was a nice art piece i liked it, keep up the decent artwork and i hope to see more in the near future, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread things out abit and even light up the detail just a tad, other then that this was pretty good.

[Oceans Appart]

Amazing

This was pretty amazing the color alone was awsome not just because its my fave color but you really set this one up right, with the lighterpurples and pinks comming through, and the ice like pillars was a nice touch aswell,i think its perfectin its own right, i suppose if any improvment was to be made, you could add some more pillars around and in the distant, maybe some more blending in the sky aswell, but other then that this was pretty good and a fantasticview, hope to see more of your work soon, and i really liked what you did here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more ice pillars might be nice, and maybe some more blending with the sky

[Happy Halloween]

Wow Awsome indeed

So here i find myself loving this every detail and every ounce of color, i added this as my fave, so awsome job, here, now im one all for color and you really splashed this one with some great color, the drawing itself was amazing and there are not words for this one all i know is that this was fantastic i also like some of the sparkles and shines allthough this could use some more "SHINE" and more sparkles in other areas, the idea of this was great aswell, allthough its not halloween it was still pretty amazing so for this one you get my vote, brilliant job here, keep up the awsome work i love it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can i say this was already a fantastic piece, amazing from color to idea to the initial drawing, awsome stuff here, i love it.

xxanemia responds:

Thank you! I'm always told off for doing too much shine and sparkles haha...