XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[OC Commission]

Very nice charchter

So this was pretty good I like your character work here we'll designed very good form and a nice pose I think you can improve on this piece like have the gun smoking as if she just shot off a round and a sun light from behind her would be another keep effect especially with that background color and shadowing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a sun beab from behind her and a smoking gun effect

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[new and classic]

Very creative

This was nice and creative I love the transition from classic to new so very good idea there and love all the colors and such all the vibrant colors and charchters made this really fun so nice job indeed you should ad some frames and or borders

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe ad some frames and or borders like a portrait

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[Where is Billy?]

Another cute one

This was pretty cute you have some real talent here on your work the tree alone is well done the character was good as always I wouldn't mind seeing more of a background here like other distant trees or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenery in background

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[High Five!]

Lol cute

This was pretty cute I like these things you put them in these funny situations and the frsh colors and a nice look on these so nice work and good looking characters I am guess these are for a game or a flash movie of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this was pretty good

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[How do you think...?]

Very cool

This was another cool piece not sure what all this means but it was nice work love the character detail like goggles gloves etc the word don't could be better but besides all that this was pretty good very nice work here and cute

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved fonts

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[Wallpaper-friends]

Very cute

Well this was very cute I like how they are just sitting and looking out but I do think the background could use a sunset then it would be perfect but overall nice moment here nice charchter work too all pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunset

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[scythaunther]

Love the design

Well I love all this the dark detail is very nice all though I think you can do more with the background it's a little bland you could put some background scene there and as for the eyes you should have some red or green eyes and have them glow even but I have to say that this was a nice design of a creature and could see some changes for the better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Suggested a few ideas above

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[YOU LOOK SO GOOD]

Very nice

This was very good I love all the shine and sparkle on this and you have her very happy and a good possibility but as for the shine and sparkle I think you should have much more shine and much more sparkle and let that hair glow even more but anyways those are the ideas that could make it better hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more shine and sparkle and make the hair glow a bit

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[tradigistanlee 4]

Cool beans

So this one was pretty cool and it was nifty how you put all these in the other one so that was a nice touch lots of good use of color here and lots of fine details and that really makes up for alot of stuff this was just an overall nice design but anyways congrats on the energy here but I will suggest adding some fancy effects in there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy effects maybe some lighting effect

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[You Are Already Dead]

Nice

So this was very cool I like the in your face attitude here the goggles could have a shine on there goggles glass maybe even a sparkle and some background work would be cool too but anyways this is a nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and some shine on the goggles

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