XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monday.......]

Another fine piece

And I have to say your character here is fresh and simple but always seems to be in a situation again maybe some background work some scene back there would be better but still a nice charchter you have here but still nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Once again some background or design or pattern

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

This was cute

This was a cute piece I like how this one was more basic style art and not so 3d but you have a nice charchter here I do think the background could use some work though some scene or just something back there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be nice

~X~

[Angry cute girl]

Beautiful

This was a beautiful piece love everything about this and honestly I didn't see anything that really needs fixing or changing as this was well done not perfect but almost there but it was very good charchter design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well done no changes needed

~X~

[Portrait of a girl]

Wow

Wow I must say you are beautiful at this portrait stuff the color the texture the lines the background work just so detailed I do think you could ad a nice frame on this or border to give it that portrait feel but every thing else on this is pretty solid and a great quality bof art here so keep up the great art style I look forward to even more because this was fantastic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders or frames on the edges

~X~

[Opal from Steven Universe]

Lovely charchter

You have some really good skill and the detail and textuture really shows in the deepness of every little detail point and for that I give you a pat on the back she does look a little stiff though maybe it's the expression in her face also some props like a bird or flock of birds would be nice in the background but anyways nice art piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props in the background and more emotion in her face

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

Cute

Lol well I found this one to be really cute him not worrying about anything all though alot is going on this one is pretty funny and cute I don't think anything needs to be changed on this it's a perfect visual so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

Nice charchter

So this was very fresh looking I really like the fresh look here I think he could use much more shine and sparkle on a few points like his beak his medal and his captains hat just some ideas I'm throwing out at you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine points

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

Very good reaction

So with this one there was some good reaction and I could see some more effort like have spit come from his mouth and even more shine on the goggles those are just a few ideas to improve on anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few improvments like spit from his mouth as it seems like he's yelling and ad more shine on his goggles

~X~

[Maka Alban in Real Life/ Soul eater in Real Life]

Very nice

And here was something very nice the hair is fine but yes she does need more expression on her face more emotion and the background could use a prop or two like some birds a sun or something but other then that this was a very nice piece of work and I really liked it so keep making great charchter portraits

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and more emotion in the girl's face

~X~

[City Street Under Attack - Background Art]

You do amazing work

You do some amazing work the background detail of broken pillars bent lights very nicely done I think a blinking light and sparkles here and there would be a nice touch on this but I understand it's for an ongoing project but regardless very nice work on this one the shading and details are very well done very visually beautiful and very nice all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects but maybe not

~X~