XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[St. Cerise's Offering]

Creepy and dark

So I say creepy and dark on this one, But thats what I love about this piece and thats what drew me to it, I really love the touch of light from the candle but wouldnt mind more "LIGHT" and more glow effect from it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effect more glow effect.

~X~

[Wii Sunrise]

Notbad

This one is bright and sunny like, and that is a nice sun comming about, almost seems as if you could possible make some glow effects in the white line areas, but other then that this was a pretty good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow in the white break areas of the sun would have a more focus on the brightness of the sun.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Seems like you've been looking around for Wii-related art? ;) Glow effects could be cool, as with the other one there's not much depth here either, so that might add some of that. Will give it a try if I ever remake this, thanks!

[Wii]

Nice

Nice shades of color in the backround, the fonts seem simple and the main colors are alright there was not much depth but maybe this was more of a simple style and those are still pretty good, overall nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the color tones but wouldnt mind more "DEPTH" of color with more shades and deeper textures almost.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

The 'Wii' was actually made with vectors as well, so no font. Good feedback, thanks!

[Itching your brain]

I love these types

I really like these types here they really have imagination and show the inner mind, this one really shows the detail and i also like it that its black and white, now adding an ounce of "COLOR" wouldnt hurt.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color here would be a plus even if its just a piece area or part of the visuals.

~X~

[Linear]

Life

Well its exactly as it says "LIFE" and that describes it clearly, there could be some splash effects thrown into this like some ripped open area with color comming out expressing life can be anything. but just an idea i like the meaning here though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, break the norm adding some color or splash effect could be that area of effect.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

That would be cool. :) Thanks for the feedback, and sorry I didn't respond earlier, for some reason this didn't show up in my feed back in September.

[Picasso Face]

Hmmm notbad

Well this was notbad, kind of interesting, I like the color tones and shades, even the outline seems to come together all in its own cute way, would have loved some "SHADES" in the backround but other then that this was notbad. will have to check out some of your other stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here, nice basic tones but all came together, maybe some extra shades and whatnot.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I wasn't really going for 'cute'. XD Thanks for the comment though! Always fun to read your reviews.

[Send in the Clown]

Nice

Another nice piece and this one has a nice "COMIC" style about it so you really made it feel like the joker and all his crazyness, so nice work here and props to you on some good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice comic style would love to see you expand on that more blocks or something.

~X~

[Abandoned]

Wow

Wow I love it, this is awsome and this is going o be a saved item for me you have really showed another world here a world into darkness but its a beatuifull piece and glad to make this a fave of mine, so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like what you have done here and wouldnt change it.

~X~

[Shadow Bane]

Dark

So this is dark but thats what I like about it, and the color in there makes it standout even more aswell, even the backround was notbad, the "DETAIL" was top notch so nice work all across the board.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some cloudy smoke effects in the backround to give more of a dark feel.

~X~

[Zombie Bats]

Wow nice

Wow I will say one thing you have a nact for these kinds of things I think you have done very well with this piece nice detail decent backrounds would love to see some blood maybe drops on the ground or some open wounds. nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love to see some blood maybe drops on the ground or some open wounds.other then that this was decent work.

~X~