XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Satsuki Kiryuin - Kill la Kill Postcard]

Very impressive

I don't know the character very well but what I see here is some very nice work and some beautiful lines I love the sparkle on the sword you should ad some of that sparkle on the armor aswell but really nice work here even the background was pretty good so the talent shows off well in this one and I was really impressed and can't wait to review more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle in more places

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[cookie fox]

Very nice

I like this love the vibrant colors used here even kind of a grunge look and old style there could be some sound marks comming out of earphones just to give off the idea but besides that this was a magnificent piece and very artistic very good style and love your work sofar anyways keep up the great art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some music marks from ear pieces

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[Toriel]

Decent

Well this one almost looks unfinished but anyways like the straps that are covering her nips I think you can have the nips show an indent thru straps and more added shine on the stockings too besides that this was pretty cool and I look forward to even more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nip improvments

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[Free To Draw]

Funny

Well here we have another fun one here this was a good joke I think you could have made the joke better if you had shown him secretly drawing that in his room while no one saw but other then that this was an amusing story great charchter work and just funny stuff

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[Free Toy Inside]

Now this was good

I don't know where you come up with the stories and such but this was a funny one and we'll executed very amusing love the detail too all that color just amazes me very nice work here and bringing the joke together was great stuff

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[10 Things Not To Do In Britain]

Notbad

I guess these weeks some nifty ideas you came up with I really love that ending frame and love all the color in this one I have to say this one was a different kind of comic this time but you still showed some humor in this one so with that said nice job here

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[Outfits, Mouths, and Hands]

Nice

So this was cool all the different parts that make up these characters besides the comics you could really make something of this like in some game or something but I like your drawings here and shows how each detail is put together but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love all the parts a colored version would be nice too

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[Whale Guy]

Very artistic

I really like the detail here and all the artsy style the paint in the background and the character itself was a good little charchter to represent the theme of color I would love more shine on this charracter more texture in the skin tone also it was a nice piece here besides that this was a nice piece of art very nifty work here keep up all the artistic style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in skin tone and some shine on his head

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[Lanaaa]

Nice work

So this was some nice work I like the shine but the one on her front thigh seemed Abit too much and for some reason her head looks rather large not sure if that was the intent but I will say that this was a good charchter design with lots of appealing visuals

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little less shine on upper front leg

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[Raffle: Junketsu No Maria]

Some more shine

So you really used shine well here and it shows but I think adding some more shine and some sparkle like the metal buckle and more shine on her legs would be cool too just little stuff like that would be a huge plus of things anyways hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra sparkle here and there

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