XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[dead gril]

Glow

Well for a dead girl she can have some glow stuff I actually think you can make the stuff glow even more but have to say that was a huge effect that made it work even better the character work was great and very well structured very nice art piece here I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow and shine from what she's holding

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[wrap up n stay warm]

Very nice

I really like this the lights that light up we're a nifty thing I think you can ad more to that like more glow on the lights maybe some light more then others but for the most part it was a good effect and really nice charchter here very nice indeed I like your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow from the lights some dim some more light up

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[Fluttershy_Gal_1]

This was pretty cute

So this was really cute I love the hair I love the color tones here and like the background but thaught you could have done much more with the background it was somewhat bland but maybe adding some props or a design or some kind of pattern but just something back there also adding a little more shine on her hair too anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in her hair and some background effort and details

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[Old Bat]

Nice detail

This was some nice detail some really good textures to give off that old feel the old bat reference was interesting love how you used color and detail and just make him look older that was all good talent on your part. I would love to see a full body pic if the same reference lol but anyways nice art style here and nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure but I like this how it is

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[Satsuki Kiryuin - Kill la Kill Postcard]

Very impressive

I don't know the character very well but what I see here is some very nice work and some beautiful lines I love the sparkle on the sword you should ad some of that sparkle on the armor aswell but really nice work here even the background was pretty good so the talent shows off well in this one and I was really impressed and can't wait to review more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle in more places

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[cookie fox]

Very nice

I like this love the vibrant colors used here even kind of a grunge look and old style there could be some sound marks comming out of earphones just to give off the idea but besides that this was a magnificent piece and very artistic very good style and love your work sofar anyways keep up the great art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some music marks from ear pieces

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[Toriel]

Decent

Well this one almost looks unfinished but anyways like the straps that are covering her nips I think you can have the nips show an indent thru straps and more added shine on the stockings too besides that this was pretty cool and I look forward to even more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nip improvments

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[Free To Draw]

Funny

Well here we have another fun one here this was a good joke I think you could have made the joke better if you had shown him secretly drawing that in his room while no one saw but other then that this was an amusing story great charchter work and just funny stuff

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[Free Toy Inside]

Now this was good

I don't know where you come up with the stories and such but this was a funny one and we'll executed very amusing love the detail too all that color just amazes me very nice work here and bringing the joke together was great stuff

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[10 Things Not To Do In Britain]

Notbad

I guess these weeks some nifty ideas you came up with I really love that ending frame and love all the color in this one I have to say this one was a different kind of comic this time but you still showed some humor in this one so with that said nice job here

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