XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ME WHEN I AM STARVING]

Nice animation on this one

And this was another cute one and I like the drooling animation on this one you should have a puddle of drool though that would be a nice effect but anyways this was great stuff you have here great little character you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more drool like a drool puddle

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[Wallpaper]

Now this was cute

I like this and love what you do with these characters always putting them in some funny moments and they are very fresh looking some background scene backdrop is needed but it is what it is so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background backdrop scene

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[what day is it today?]

Nice

This was cool I think you could do more with the don't and adding more splashy effects behind it like a big yellow star then the don't but for what it is this is a nice piece of art here and hope you keep up the funny moments here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More spalshy effects as mentioned

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[Halloween Wallpaper]

This was cute

Now this was pretty cute with the Halloween theme you have here but something should be done about the background like some spooky ghosts and such maybe some trees or houses that kind of stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background spooky scene stuff

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[Rosalina]

Really lovely

Wow first of all this was a great charchter portrait anyways but I can see you adding some shine on her crown and even the gems from it it's a beautiful focus point to have some more shine and sparkle come off of and that's just an idea to throw your way but anyways great line work nice charchter here hope you keep making great stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle off the crown and gems

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[captain jebus]

Nice pirate

So this was a pirate I take it not ad at all you should form him better and ad some color even adding some background like a scene of some type but it's a decent effort of a sketch and I have enjoyed reviewing it so nice effort here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and some color

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[dr. hoffnar turning to tricky]

Not a bad sketch

Well this was not a bad sketch you have here I like the scene here like something crazy is happening but I wouldn't mind you refined your work a little more and some color but anyways nice work here hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color more refined sketching etc

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[beateful nevadean landscape]

Notbad

So this was notbad not sure what this is but I do like the scene here I like the background you could probably use some background like a sun setting or something that would be a plus but overall a nice scene you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sun set in the background

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[tricky killed jebus]

Different

Well I have to say this was different more of a sketch her but there's something going on in this like a little story so some improvement idea here ad some background and some color in your sketch and that head could have some dripping blood on it but those are just a few ideas that could improve on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas here

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