XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lemon Parade]

Cute idea

Well this has a cute idea of an alurring woman with a lemon head so the idea works I think you could have a good shine on top of the lemon but you tend to see lemons with shine at store but it's just an idea besides that you pulled off a good idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine to the lemon

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[Glamourama]

Nice

So with this one I looked for some way to improve but honestly your so talented that this was more of an artistic and even abstract touch on things it really don't matter it has some very nice artistic value and that's all that matters so nice work indeed

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Not a single thing this was brilliant all on it's own

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[Broken Heart]

Very good

I would personally remove the eye patch and put a shine in her lips maybe even a shine on this version color of hair but other then that this was another good version you have I like your style here very good work indeed hope to see more like this from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there

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[Scene]

Very good

This one is simular to the one with the girl and white puffy hair and I have to say this one was pretty good the colored hair here look good and love what you did with the eyes on this one the paw prints are a nice touch wouldn't mind if they were a bit lighter color maybe even red to standout more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The paw prints could be lighter or red

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[Gatling Nurse]

Colorfull

So this was cool I like this love all the vibrant colors and such and like her attack pose even the background was pretty good nice and colorfull so nice job there only change I would make would be to ad a sparkle and or shine on her chainsaw or weapon so it's shining and ready to take damage but anyways nice work here very good detail I really enjoyed this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some shine on the metal weapons

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[Show Me Your Moves]

Nice view

So this was a nice view I like the color and the heels and her ankles look Abit off but still are ok maybe adding Abit more shine to the legs would be a nice effect addition but really this was pretty good scene of some comic and a nice detailed drawing so nice work all the way around I really like it and hope you keep making more sobuntill the next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the legs and heels

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BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I could see I could use more shine to help contrast certain parts.
I often feel that my line work is usually better than my coloring. Though recently, I've examined how others done their, so I'll be experimenting.

Thanks for scouting me. Cheers!

[Lesser Vampire]

I like it

This was nice I love the darkness here I would love the eyes to glow a little bit more with more darkness around the outter part but it would allow for a more glow but anyways nice work indeed your detail is pretty amazing with a very good style and a nice drawing here the texture is beautiful very good work here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes glow

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[JellyFish Hat]

Nice detail

I really like the detail with the hat her eyes and skin details and nice skin tones also very nice work now what I do think this needs is some background detail some scene or something maybe even a design and or color pattern but you do need something more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work needed

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[I'm sleeping with octopii]

I really like this

This was nice work I love what you did with the hair but some extra texture in the hair would be nice too on this everything else looks pretty good and a nice art piece here I enjoyed your work here and look forward to even more so keep doing what you do best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra texture on the hair just a tad

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[Vampire Love]

Interesting

Well this was interesting I like the pose here and the teeth I do think that there should be shades on her hair at least another tone but regardless this was a good piece this is another one that could use a more frame and or border type but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shades in the hair and the borders and frames

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