XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Simgirls @ Rosebery]

Good poses

I really love this view shot you have going on here the shadows are nice wish the shadows of the characters themself was more dominant the character work is very well done smooth lines and it was just very smooth looking so nice job here very good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dominant shadows of the characters

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[Lineslessness]

Really nice

This was nice very gallery style here seems like that white backing is like a border I wouldn't mind suggesting an idea and it's just an idea but maybe some purple border or frame on the edges to accent the other purple background anyways nice charchter work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra border to accent the focus

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[The Curse Of The Grim Reaper's Axe]

Very nice charchter

Infact this was a really good charchter love the weapons especially the axe I think you could ad a real sparkle to the axe part of things and much more shine to it even but besides all that this was a fantastic piece great charchter design here and nice weapons on that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shine on the axe and even a sparkle

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[Y E L L O W]

Different

Well this was different I do have to say this was a bit different but I like it it's a creature of some sort seems like you can still do more with it I would start with more texture in the yellow skin tone but that's me you may not want to change anything keep up the good creations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved texture in skin tones

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[ENTER MY COMPETITION]

Artistic

So I really enjoy this piece love all the meshing of colors and it's just all over the place it's a little bit abstract even so this was a beautiful piece of art with some interesting aspects of art and style etc so you have some good work here keep up the good style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't change a thing it's artistic in it's own way

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[Kouhai V-day]

Nice

This was good and once again I want to say that the art color here is beautiful and done well I think as a form of improvement and a suggestion only you could have more drool and some depth in the white borders more detail in it but a nice art piece regardless of what is said

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more drool and more depth in the outter border

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[Trashtastic]

Amazing work

Well this was some amazing work the colors on this alone is pretty good love these faint colors it almost seems like this needs an outter norder or frame to accent the rest could be an idea to work on in the future but with all that said this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of outter border

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[A Pixel Grunt]

Awsome

Well I have to say that this was pretty amazing the pixel looks distorted in a way but that purple on the side is nice and I think there should be some kind of shine on his head since it's so large and up in your face so adding shine would be a huge plus on things other then that this was pretty cool anyways keep making art for the art portal it's different but nifty

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine on top of his head

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[Liberty]

Beautiful

Now this is beautiful wow I absolutely love this and love the view shot you did this you are a talented painter and it shows deeply I would like to see that flame on the torch be more flame like and really light up with a sort of glow to it just an idea to improve though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let the flame have a more flame and glow

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Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, thank you so much for the kind review and for favoriting. A glowing torch would've been nice, but I'm happy you like it overall.

Respect <3

[Sleepycat Dreams of Mars]

Meow

A nice art piece the texture is very rich and we'll detailed so you did hood with this one I like this because it reminds me of my friends cat and she lost it one day but anyways very nice work here I would suggest something but I find this to be just right

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on this beautiful painting

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Bertn1991 responds:

Meow indeed.

Beautiful painting is quite a compliment. Thank you so much as always. I'm happy this one needs no changes :)