XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alice the angel (Bendy's ink machine)]

Very nice black and white

So this was nice and I like the black and white style but like the other one I reviewed you could ad some shine on her back side and with the black and white style it would really come out well so it's something to think about improving on but anyways nice view shot

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her back side

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[Just Coffee]

Beautiful

Wow this one is absolutely beautiful you really outside yourself in this one it's so realisim and realistic style here love the lighting on her face and love the background as well as the realistic expression on her face it just looks all so really I do think you could ad some more light on her face maybe her lips

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting on her lips

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[BAFA Logo Design]

This was cool

I thaught this was cool I like the different variations on it I like the color and black and white style I do think this one could use some borders and frames as it's showcasing some work and would be nice to have some nice and colorfull borders or frames on here but anyways nice work here indeed hope to see more from you real soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this showcase some borders and or frames some nice color ones

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[Psychedelic Self]

Really intense

And so this one was really intense I do love the detail on this one though as it has very nice detail and random gadgets here and there and I like that you put on some borders and frames now as they are pretty thin but some thickness to them would be much better if you asked me but it's just a small idea to try out and see how it works or not

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some thicker borders

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[Lord D-3]

Notbad

Well this was notbad and I like the skull here and it's in some action scene also love the little details like the crown and gem and as for that gem you need to have it glow and shine so that it sparkles it is a gem after all but that's all that this really needs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the gem from the crown sparkle and shine

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jax360chill responds:

Thanks. I just started digital art so my work isn't going to be a 4/5 or 3/5 stars just testing the waters to see where my art can go.

[Dark Side]

This was nice

So this was a nice and cute piece it was almost even abstract in it's own way it has a good style that beak could use more shine to it of course I really like the style here love the color on the beak also you seemed to have a nice drawing style here too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine on the beak

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[BunnieGunn]

Very cute

Well I have to say this one was pretty cute I like the fluff like bunny ears you made them look fluffy and even added some shine you should ad more shine on the ears but regardless of that this was a nice piece of art good facial structure and good style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine on the ears

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[Pizza Box]

Lemon

Well here is another lemon head lol but it's nice and again with this one I think you could ad some shine maybe even some sparkle on the lemon would set the piece as a whole but anyways very nice idea nice work and I was pleased to review this so very good effort here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the lemon

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[Lemon Parade]

Cute idea

Well this has a cute idea of an alurring woman with a lemon head so the idea works I think you could have a good shine on top of the lemon but you tend to see lemons with shine at store but it's just an idea besides that you pulled off a good idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine to the lemon

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[Glamourama]

Nice

So with this one I looked for some way to improve but honestly your so talented that this was more of an artistic and even abstract touch on things it really don't matter it has some very nice artistic value and that's all that matters so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a single thing this was brilliant all on it's own

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