XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ducks]

I like this one

This was pretty neat, I like the "SOFT" colors on this it allows for it to be more focused on the whole image as one, and with this one there is some story with all the props and what not going on, very nice indeed, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as its perfect as is.

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BugsAndBooks responds:

Hello there fellow earthling
and thank you very much for those mighty fine celestial fixepoints.
Of course I myself see lots and lots of room for improvement (especially since cartooning truly isn't my strongsuit) but I do love your thoughts about the colours in this one - brilliant :)

Have an awesometacular day :)

[Starship poopers]

Very impressive

Wow must say this one was very impressive, Ireally like what you did here with the "LIGHTING" effects and all, and while there is one tone of color there was still some good stuff here, I really like what you have done here, very detailed and welldone artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some other use of color kind of like what you did there with the hem.

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HeartlessArts responds:

thanks! :)

[Sumerian – Not Babylonian]

Nifty comic

Well this one here was pretty nifty I thought, kinda funny with this one, and the "ART" Style was notbad at all, I like what you have done here, even the characters are pretty good so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good comic here leave it as is.

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InsanityinaBox responds:

Thanks!

[Sucy Manbavaran]

OK so this was notbad I love the color themes you have going on this one's nice shades etc. If anything some shines would be nice like in the hair and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine would be nice

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Pyanny responds:

You know I was actually thinking about how muted the colors looked, some hair shines probably could have helped a bit, along with just brightening up the hair a tad

[Ram x Roswaal]

Wow amazing

Wow this was not what I was expecting but I have to admit that it was pretty amazing the "COLORS" alone are pretty good very nice skin texture it all was a well rounded piece and you tell a story here the outside windows of starrs was nice maybe adding a moon or some distant planet would be awsome too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround extras as stated would be nice.

~X~

[Tall and pretty]

Wow beautifull

I must admitt this really is beautiful and shows off your "TALENTS" very well indeed, just the colors textures and overall design here just amazes so nice work indeed, hope to see more stuff like this from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its perfect as is.

~X~

[Shower Of Juice]

Notbad

Well here is another marketing idea and could work it seems, somewhat "BLAND" but maybe thats the idea, I like backrounds so im thinking that some sort of backrounds would really work here, just something to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround designs would be nice.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Mmm I didn't spend all that much thought on surrounding, which may give it a somewhat bland impression. It was the vending machine idea that was the main thing, though I do agree it could've looked better with something behind it. Thanks for commenting!

[Shield (Green)]

A green ver

So this is like the "ORANGE" one you had in 2009 ? the colors are nice, the design is flashy and it really does speak volumes and jumps out at you, I like it, would make for a good "LOGO" of some sorts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maaybe something a bit in the backround but not much.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Yes indeed, same shield; different color. Glad you like it! :) Looks like you reviewed the other in great detail too.

[Zebras Are Cool]

Not sure whats going on here

Well not sure whats going on here but I still found this to be pretty interesting the "BACKROUNDS" are pretty cool too, the "FONTS" could be styled up a tad bit more but it was an interesting piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved fonts, maybe some texture in the backrounds.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah me neither. XD Thanks for the feedback though!

[Yoshiller Comm]

This is nifty

You have a good design here Im actually wondering if there should be more shade and shine on the trunk of it more but overall it looks pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more shine maybe even more shade.

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