XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Broken Heart]

Very good

I would personally remove the eye patch and put a shine in her lips maybe even a shine on this version color of hair but other then that this was another good version you have I like your style here very good work indeed hope to see more like this from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there

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[Scene]

Very good

This one is simular to the one with the girl and white puffy hair and I have to say this one was pretty good the colored hair here look good and love what you did with the eyes on this one the paw prints are a nice touch wouldn't mind if they were a bit lighter color maybe even red to standout more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The paw prints could be lighter or red

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[Gatling Nurse]

Colorfull

So this was cool I like this love all the vibrant colors and such and like her attack pose even the background was pretty good nice and colorfull so nice job there only change I would make would be to ad a sparkle and or shine on her chainsaw or weapon so it's shining and ready to take damage but anyways nice work here very good detail I really enjoyed this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some shine on the metal weapons

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[Show Me Your Moves]

Nice view

So this was a nice view I like the color and the heels and her ankles look Abit off but still are ok maybe adding Abit more shine to the legs would be a nice effect addition but really this was pretty good scene of some comic and a nice detailed drawing so nice work all the way around I really like it and hope you keep making more sobuntill the next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the legs and heels

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BigBoxs responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I could see I could use more shine to help contrast certain parts.
I often feel that my line work is usually better than my coloring. Though recently, I've examined how others done their, so I'll be experimenting.

Thanks for scouting me. Cheers!

[Lesser Vampire]

I like it

This was nice I love the darkness here I would love the eyes to glow a little bit more with more darkness around the outter part but it would allow for a more glow but anyways nice work indeed your detail is pretty amazing with a very good style and a nice drawing here the texture is beautiful very good work here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes glow

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[JellyFish Hat]

Nice detail

I really like the detail with the hat her eyes and skin details and nice skin tones also very nice work now what I do think this needs is some background detail some scene or something maybe even a design and or color pattern but you do need something more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work needed

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[I'm sleeping with octopii]

I really like this

This was nice work I love what you did with the hair but some extra texture in the hair would be nice too on this everything else looks pretty good and a nice art piece here I enjoyed your work here and look forward to even more so keep doing what you do best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra texture on the hair just a tad

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[Vampire Love]

Interesting

Well this was interesting I like the pose here and the teeth I do think that there should be shades on her hair at least another tone but regardless this was a good piece this is another one that could use a more frame and or border type but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shades in the hair and the borders and frames

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[Me & my dad]

Colorfull

This was some cool stuff here very colorful and artistic very nice style this just has an article style that speaks volumes and I am pretty impressed with it I think you can ad some borders and frames as an art piece it would look good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders would be nice and even artistic for this piece

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[I wouldn't touch.]

Live this

This was very good I really love the dark feel and touch of this I like the darkness of it all you have some good textuture on this one I like your work I think you can ad some dripping blood to give it that gore feel

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood would be nice

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