XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fading Away]

Intense

Wow this was very intense the details just amaze me with the deep views here and a look into a falling city but still with a bit of hope like the lighted up city I think you should have more light and a fog of myst the steps of the gardians but have to say you have some beautiful skill here very well done work must have took you a long time to do this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fog and Myst with lighting reflect

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[xxx1234's oc ready for takedown]

Another nice sketch

Here is another nice sketch I like how you did more with this one then the other sketch this one too needs some enhanced effects but most of all needs some color to it you have some nice work here and I look forward to even more as I have enjoyed this work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and more detail

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[madness girl sleeping in valentine's day]

Strange one

This was a strange one it was hard to view what was going on and looking like something was in her backside the background was not very high quality so some parts could be polished up a bit nice work though I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some polish needed

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[drunken agent girl just glazing]

Nice view

Very nice view I love this front view the black and white is a nice touch only one thing I would work on would be that right hand it looks backwards almost maybe it could be fixed up anyways nice art style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
That right hand could be reversed

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[Endroskeleton's ass]

Nice side

This is a nice side view and nice pose now that leg and upper back portion of the body could use some shine and the background needs some color the whole piece needs some color actually but overall this was a beautiful design and can't wait to see even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background design and color and more sparkle on her leg

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[Madness girl in city]

Much more shine

And this is one of those that really needs much more shine on the back end it has a nice visual but much more shine needed I like the form of the body and as always great job on the drawing here now just ad more shine on her backside anyways that's all I have for today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more shine and glare on her backside

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[[C] Jasmine]

Tribal

This was cool a very dark touch here I like the the style here I like the arm cuffs and wrist cuffs and there was a little shine on them and that was notbad I do think you could have them shine much more especially with the dark backround it could even sparkle somewhat but you did good on the character drawing here nice design all the way around I like the style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the cuffs sparkle

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[(atp girl) hotline miami]

Interesring

So this one was interesting mainly her back foot looks odd and different it's the form of t the colored face and the rest not almost like an unfinished project but still a good piece here and a nice art submission I think you can work on the foots form a bit better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
That foot could use some work

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[morning duties as atp (madness combat)]

Notbad

Well another decent visual here her upper body is really hard to see it's almost like it was unfinished with it and the background could be more appealing it was kind of dull in a way but I do like the effort on this entry so more background detail and better upper body form

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More upper body polish and some background detail and polish

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