XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Endroskeleton's ass]

Nice side

This is a nice side view and nice pose now that leg and upper back portion of the body could use some shine and the background needs some color the whole piece needs some color actually but overall this was a beautiful design and can't wait to see even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background design and color and more sparkle on her leg

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[Madness girl in city]

Much more shine

And this is one of those that really needs much more shine on the back end it has a nice visual but much more shine needed I like the form of the body and as always great job on the drawing here now just ad more shine on her backside anyways that's all I have for today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more shine and glare on her backside

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[[C] Jasmine]

Tribal

This was cool a very dark touch here I like the the style here I like the arm cuffs and wrist cuffs and there was a little shine on them and that was notbad I do think you could have them shine much more especially with the dark backround it could even sparkle somewhat but you did good on the character drawing here nice design all the way around I like the style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the cuffs sparkle

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[(atp girl) hotline miami]

Interesring

So this one was interesting mainly her back foot looks odd and different it's the form of t the colored face and the rest not almost like an unfinished project but still a good piece here and a nice art submission I think you can work on the foots form a bit better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
That foot could use some work

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[morning duties as atp (madness combat)]

Notbad

Well another decent visual here her upper body is really hard to see it's almost like it was unfinished with it and the background could be more appealing it was kind of dull in a way but I do like the effort on this entry so more background detail and better upper body form

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More upper body polish and some background detail and polish

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[Oh boy!]

Very nice charchter

So this was a very nice charchter I like the longness of him and being a top head heavy type of charchter and good work as he is freshly looking good and maybe some small shading here or there would be a nice improvment as well as asking some type of backround work here maybe a sun set maybe some city scene or even some base color besides white

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work some extra shading here and there

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[Man in the box]

Nice and fresh

So this is some nice and fresh art here I like the idea of on a box just simple idea and the character work is really good I do think you should have more shading in his hair and even some background detail or scenery you have some but other then that you have some nice work here great looking charchter very well drawn keep drawing and making fun art for us all to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scenery and some extra shading is all this needs

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[Tajie]

Very nice

I really love this you do some nice charchter work here very well done very details love the shine on his face I honestly think the only change this needs is some blood running down his mouth maybe teeth it would be a nice touch to who this charracter is but nice work I like your style here and hope to see some more from you here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood

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[dumbledalf]

Very nice

I really like the top view here that was hard to do with all the detail you have it's very good stuff here the amount of detail in this one is pretty solid and the graphics are just deep in texture you have some very good fine detail here the small line work that make up shades came out well I wouldn't more lighting effect from the top anyways nice stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting would be nice

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