XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wonderful Day]

Haha nice

And so this was nice I like the language at the end I have to say this one was funny but not as funny as some of your other ones but still gave me a chuckle so the humor is there but anyways a nice piece of the comic here hope to see more from you soon

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Could have a better joke theme but it was notbad

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[Carl v.s Litterbot]

Nice entry

So here was another nice submission of this comic and I have to say is that that robot like charchter could have more shine to him or some rust or something just a small detail that would look nice but other then that this was a cool entry so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small shine and or rust on the metal parts of the robot like charchter

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[Playing For A While]

Haha a purpose

So his fingers and hands have a purpose and they are put to good use lol the ending was funny but this whole piece made me chuckle I have to say that small animation was cool and made the comic more alive you should do that more in your comic series here

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More small bits of animation would be cool in other comic entries

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[Retro Goat Girl]

Very nice

I love the color the drawing of the character itself is pretty good and had a nice style very smooth art there that color triangle in the background was a nice touch I do think you should ad much more glow with that one as it was just a beautiful color theme and you could really light it up so nice work indeed but anyways it was a pleasure to review hope I can even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some hlow on the color in the background maybe even some glow

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[Fox girl]

Subtle

This was a subtle piece but I like I love the apple I do think you could have more glow on the apple just Abit and some background color would be another plus as well but other then that this was a nice drawing you have here glad to have seen your work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effect around the apple and some background design or color

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[girl playing video games]

That's about right

So this was about right the colors are great even in her hair and she's focused on the game just like a gamer girl would be it's pretty nice work I thaught so nice job indeed the back wall seems bland though wonder if you could fill that up a bit not much though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some filler in back wall

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[Minit (female) morning!!!]

Interesring

Well there's her backside again but it was nice to see some color backround and a nice back side view always alurring this one don't really need any changes or upgrades on things I still found it to be a nice and alurring art visual so nice entry here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[She Hulk Relax]

Wow amazing

I have to say you do some of the most amazing work here on the portal of art you bring so much charchter to your art so much detail and in your submission you tell a small story I will suggest on addition is on the turtles glasses there should be a small glare or shine but with how well this is you probably don't need it so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the sunglasses

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[Wifi Password]

Amusing

This was amusing I like this one it is so colorful and the detail is just so amazing it's vibrant with color and detail I think I liked that more then how funny it was it's an amusing piece though love the ending just classic right there wonder if you will ever ad another charchter might spice things up a tad but anyways nice work once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You really have these down if anything I would make them a tad bit longer

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ChazDude responds:

Can only fit so much on a sheet of A4 paper :/