XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Twerk Team Abbi]

This was cute

Well this was cute I like the little animation too it was cute and the fresh colors were pretty good too I think you could ad a window like if it was a bedroom and there could be some on Lookers would be a nice little prop and extra effect anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small window

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WooleyWorld responds:

That's incredibly subjective.

[Mutt and Chopps]

Awesome

This is awesome I love the background too but seems like the background could have had a sunset with a beam of light hitting there backs but the characters are really nice and we'll structure on them but anyways nice job here I like your work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sunlight would be nice

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WooleyWorld responds:

I prefer midday, and there are no sunbeams in this scenario.

[Drawing of a Friend]

Very nice indeed

So I saw the sketch or drawing for this one and here you have the black and white version very nice indeed I think if the hair was red this would almost be perfect you really did a nice job of shading and the black and white style here the color was still very good though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some colored hair or some part of her colored

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[Sketch of a friend of mine.]

Really good drawing

And here was a really good drawing love how the light changes the color on this the drawing itself was really good and a nice style this would be really cool with some nice color and even a backdrop scene of some type but anyways you should push this one forward and ad that full color and background but besides that this was pretty solid

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and background

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[Vodka]

Nice shine

So this one here was a nice shine and had lots of shiny all over you should have her glasses shine or glare a bit those would be the only changes I would do but other then that this was a good piece of artwork and nice charchter she looks like a teacher anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her glasses

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[dead gril]

Glow

Well for a dead girl she can have some glow stuff I actually think you can make the stuff glow even more but have to say that was a huge effect that made it work even better the character work was great and very well structured very nice art piece here I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow and shine from what she's holding

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[wrap up n stay warm]

Very nice

I really like this the lights that light up we're a nifty thing I think you can ad more to that like more glow on the lights maybe some light more then others but for the most part it was a good effect and really nice charchter here very nice indeed I like your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow from the lights some dim some more light up

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[Fluttershy_Gal_1]

This was pretty cute

So this was really cute I love the hair I love the color tones here and like the background but thaught you could have done much more with the background it was somewhat bland but maybe adding some props or a design or some kind of pattern but just something back there also adding a little more shine on her hair too anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in her hair and some background effort and details

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[Old Bat]

Nice detail

This was some nice detail some really good textures to give off that old feel the old bat reference was interesting love how you used color and detail and just make him look older that was all good talent on your part. I would love to see a full body pic if the same reference lol but anyways nice art style here and nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure but I like this how it is

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[Satsuki Kiryuin - Kill la Kill Postcard]

Very impressive

I don't know the character very well but what I see here is some very nice work and some beautiful lines I love the sparkle on the sword you should ad some of that sparkle on the armor aswell but really nice work here even the background was pretty good so the talent shows off well in this one and I was really impressed and can't wait to review more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle in more places

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