XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Steam Punk]

Very nice work here

I really liked this love her outfit and style you put a lot of detail into this I like the blood stain too but think you need more dripping blood from the head it just seems like it could have more dripping blood all over and such but nice work indeed keep the nice style up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood

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[Witch]

Notbad

Well this is notbad I like the style here I like the background all though you could have added more background more filler spots just saying as it was a tad blank but your charchter work is pretty good nice structure even so nice job on this art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more to background it was a tad blank

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[Eromanga sensei - Sagiri fanart]

Very nice

This was pretty and very nice I like how there was pink but seems like there was too much and maybe to off set the colors a tad but you could have the ribbons her hair red could change it up a bit but regardless this was notbad love the stars in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the ribbons in her hair red

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you for your feedback! You're right, I did overexaggerate with the pink! ^^ I am very glad you find it nice!

[Avatar MKIII]

LOVE IT

I love this guy and the face he is making is one of my top faves. I think that he could use some detail in his hands, a point is fine, but maybe a thumb too or something to showcase him holding the brush. I think you also need to make the canvas a bit longer in height as it seem small or just too low to the ground, plus a background or setting would really work with this to show what he is actually painting or drawing. I think overall tho it is pretty cute and creative with the face and hat too. I love the coloring and shading you did for shadows. The mouth is pretty cute too and made me chuckle. You have shown some good progress on this piece here, and I Applaud you aswell as lots of Kudo's your way, you have good Insight on some good Rapid detail. And in closing you have some good artwork here some decent detail effort, and it shows, dont know if I can suggest any improvments but if I do you will see it, but other then that this was actually notbad and has some good effort behind it so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a background with a setting that shows what he is doing, a bigger canvas, more details in the hand.

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[The Dino & the bovine]

Very cute

This one was pretty cute, I like what you did here and its just a refreshing visual and doesnt really need anything at all, maybe adding more hearts and a sunshine glow from pacman like if he is the sun, just an idea though, but anyways very nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding more hearts and a sunshine glow from pacman like if he is the sun

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[Sushi Flower]

Nice idea

I think this was a nice idea, it almost reminds me of a tulup of sushi, but as some slight improvement on this piece I would say ad some shine to the top of that sushi part that would be nice, maybe as some backround work there could be more sushis in the backround growning.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine effects would be nice.

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[Character Design]

Nice character

So I like what you did here very nice detail you added into this character, love the "BIG" eyes I would ad more strands of purple on her though, and also think about adding some backround just some scene or something but not black, but besides that this was really good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad more strands of purple on her though, and also think about adding some backround just some scene or something but not black

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[Kayleigh Package]

Ok cool

So this was pretty nifty I like all the elements here you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre, those are just a few things I would ad as a form of improvement here but nice work overall. Yes I have to say this was somenice work and some nice efforts, you for sure know what youare doing and it shows, some areas could be better, but you have it down for the most part. So my Insight on this whole piece is that you have Captured something differant and unique. Ok so this is where I call it an end for the review, but may I mention that it was a nice and fun experience reviewing this piece as its a fave of mine. good Polish on this will make it an Extended masterpiece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre.

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[KK Sketch'd]

Cute

So I found this one to be cute love the fresh look about it, it was actually very fresh looking and a nice element here, love the "BIG" eyes and such and really came out well, I personally would ad some more "DHINE" to the eyes or something, but thats just me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine to the eyes.

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[Bad Landing]

Very nice

Wow I must say this one was a pleasure of art you have here, Love how theres a battle here somehow, I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow ofcourse just something to think on with lighting effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow

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