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[Toriel]

Decent

Well this one almost looks unfinished but anyways like the straps that are covering her nips I think you can have the nips show an indent thru straps and more added shine on the stockings too besides that this was pretty cool and I look forward to even more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nip improvments

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[Free To Draw]

Funny

Well here we have another fun one here this was a good joke I think you could have made the joke better if you had shown him secretly drawing that in his room while no one saw but other then that this was an amusing story great charchter work and just funny stuff

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[Free Toy Inside]

Now this was good

I don't know where you come up with the stories and such but this was a funny one and we'll executed very amusing love the detail too all that color just amazes me very nice work here and bringing the joke together was great stuff

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[10 Things Not To Do In Britain]

Notbad

I guess these weeks some nifty ideas you came up with I really love that ending frame and love all the color in this one I have to say this one was a different kind of comic this time but you still showed some humor in this one so with that said nice job here

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[Outfits, Mouths, and Hands]

Nice

So this was cool all the different parts that make up these characters besides the comics you could really make something of this like in some game or something but I like your drawings here and shows how each detail is put together but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love all the parts a colored version would be nice too

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[Whale Guy]

Very artistic

I really like the detail here and all the artsy style the paint in the background and the character itself was a good little charchter to represent the theme of color I would love more shine on this charracter more texture in the skin tone also it was a nice piece here besides that this was a nice piece of art very nifty work here keep up all the artistic style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in skin tone and some shine on his head

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[Lanaaa]

Nice work

So this was some nice work I like the shine but the one on her front thigh seemed Abit too much and for some reason her head looks rather large not sure if that was the intent but I will say that this was a good charchter design with lots of appealing visuals

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A little less shine on upper front leg

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[Raffle: Junketsu No Maria]

Some more shine

So you really used shine well here and it shows but I think adding some more shine and some sparkle like the metal buckle and more shine on her legs would be cool too just little stuff like that would be a huge plus of things anyways hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra sparkle here and there

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[Hushabye Valley]

Very cute

I like your work here and have to say that this one was very cute I really like the color and use of color you are a pro at this and I have to say this was not perfect but you don't need to change a thing it was pretty solid work so keep up the positive vibes an art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Buffalo Bell]

Very nice

So this was very nice I really love the balance of your use of color it's really refreshing to see stuff like that so nice job there and I like your shine but wouldn't mind more shine on her legs and arms just more shine and even sparkle to it just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle

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