XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[D.Va From Overwatch]

Well that was vibrant

You have some very nice use of color here and very vibrant in color really like her pose too her face looked a little flat looked more like a plastic doll so maybe giving her some emotion in her face that would be one suggestion of improvment the gun was another focus point you should put some sparkle on it anyways nice charchter and detail here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more facial expression and some sparkle on the gun

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[Dee Dee (Dexters Lab)]

Nice

So this was a good charchter I am not familiar with her or where she is from but she is well made the shine is very well done and I have to say maybe with a little darker skin tone the shine would really reflect well off the skin tone but anyways nice work here I really enjoy this piece and hope to see your work in the near future keep it real

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas but not necessarily needed

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 16]

Nice

And here was another nice entry this new character here or just his element is nice and you seem to always bring out some nice detail like this on with the trees and background really nice background work here I love the detail and nice adventure here for this charracter it's always nice to see what goes on and what happens next so nice work indeed

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[The Santa Snatcher]

Very nice

A holiday one cool I love the santa sled that was cool and wanted to say congrats on the front page that must be very rewarding so congrats on that this entry was pretty funny really do like that sled and nice lighting effects on this one anyways keep up the good work

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[Tiny RWBY Jobs Crossover (Batch #9)]

Ore great stuff

And here are some more great charchter work here lots of detail very nice use if colors and once again nice borders maybe this time a hlowing border might be kind of nice too just a suggestion though but besides that this was a nice art piece you made here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the border lines would be a nice touch

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[Tiny RWBY Jobs Crossover (Batch #10)]

Very nice work

So this was cool I really like all these characters very well detailed and color all around so some very well designed charchter work the interface of the layout was nice too I would go with thicker borders honestly but this was very good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The border lines could be thicker

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[Cupid Arrow Problems]

Very nice

So first off that weapon of the demon I like the blood effect it's pretty realistic you should have it dripping even more but for what it is it's a nice visual as for the comic it was nice and nice idea too so it went off well for the Valentine's day moment anyways good art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood

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[White Devil Mask]

Awesome detail

So this was awesome I love the detail here the mask itself was really good love that texture on the mask and the linework is amazing my advice or suggestions would be have both eyes red and have them brighter just an idea though anyways nice design here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter on the eyes and both redish

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[Critical Role - Glaive Sale]

Nice

So the comic itself was really nice love the dark and deep colors in this one I think the story was notbad either and kind of funny too a good comic here and wouldn't mind if it was a tad bit longer more depth into the story or something but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A longer story so more frames in the comic

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[Abaporu]

Wow amazing

This was very good I love the view of this and that sun could shine more on the stone and have a glare comming off of the stone from the sun it would be a nice effect on a beautiful piece the border was ok but I would ad a real border or frame not as think but something with a little depth besides that this was a plus and I enjoyed reviewing it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border or frame and some shine from the sun

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