XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Knife Etiquette]

Cute

This was kind of nifty the characters are cute the comic is nice but wish you had it run longer seems like you could have extended it Abit but the characters were well structured I didn't understand the comic as it was confusing but still nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the comic longer

~X~

Triple-Stabber responds:

Wowie, a comment on an oldie, you pleasantly surprised me there. Not to make your criticism invalid, but in this short comic, it's more of a funny one-off comic Theodd1sout esque where it's to entertain but with no story.
But if you do want a longer comic, see me recent comic "Girlfriends", definitely longer

[Dance]

Very nice

Well this was very nice work I like the character work here the hands are not too bad the nose on the male looked Abit off but maybe I'm seeing things I don't a moonlight setting would be nice though and that's about it for this one it was a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A moonset would be nice

~X~

[Fran Bow]

Wow impressive

Wow this was really impressive the texture is deep I like the dragon and this was a great visual you should have the dragon steam from his nose in this visual also I would change the background so there's not all red from background and dragon just a suggestion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my suggestion here is some background change and steam from the dragons nose

~X~

[Armin Arlert]

Beautiful

This was beautiful I really love the texture in this especially the green portion of this even the background was a good detailed one I looked and looked where this can be improved but this really does not warent any changes it's a quality piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes or upgrades needed

~X~

[Star Parody (D&C 'Xmas' Special)]

Wow

Wow this one was by far the best one I have seen for one it had lots of dialog and that alone made the story have a deeper depth and you went and made this one a long deep one with all sorts of stuff going on so for me the story was my fave and all the little effects like the glow on the sabres and just everything that I saw was well detailed very nice indeed on this very well made and detailed comic wish all of them were like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love how this one was long and deep wish the others were a little more deep like this

~X~

[pretty smile beppler]

Nice drawing

So the drawing here was pretty good nice shading on the skin tone and the hair was not bad and I like what you did with the background it was simple but then it was not it was a good piece of art here as a suggestion I would ad deeper color tones maybe it will come off better but other then that this was pretty good work keep making great art pieces

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker color tones and textures would be a nice suggestion

~X~

[badass finn]

Nice work

Well this was really nice I like the shell or bubble he is in like he's been captured in time the outter white parts of the canvus can be filled in or you can use that to make some type of nifty border or frame but nice work on this and really nice charchter I enjoyed this and your style of art here hope to find more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nifty border or frame to make use of the bland spots

~X~

[Pencil meet Stylus]

Amazing

And the finished product is amazing work love your talent and love how the progress shows off the final touch in this one and you really can see the transition it really came off well colors and designs just amazing work here so nice job on this if anything I would ad some sparkle to the stylus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some sparkle to the stylus

~X~

[Mid way point ( Pencil meet Stylus]

Very nice

Wow I have to say this was a solid piece of work you have here I like the progress of it it's a very good work in progress I can't really suggest any changes because it is a work in progress but what you do have here is pretty good work I like your style I do wonder what art program you use??

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it's a work in progress

~X~

[Hitting the books? Or streets?]

Awesome

This was awesome I love your use of color here the reds and darks really came off well and the glasses was a nice touch too I think you can go one step farther with ad a sparkle and shine comming off the glasses that would be a nice effect just something to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine an door a sparkle

~X~