XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Captive Mermaid]

Very beautiful

This was a very beautiful piece I love the bottle with the ship I think that's an area of focus and I think a nice effect change would be to have the bottle glow more with more light up around it as well an idea that will let it shine all on it's own maybe even some sparkle on the chains

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on the chains and some glow on the bottle

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[Lanterns in the night]

Well this was nice

I really like the lanterns that was a really nice touch and a nice charchter you have here good structure so the thing about the lanterns they should be light up even more like with some sort of glow effect but that's just an idea this does look good as is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light up glow on the lanterns

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[Rain]

Really deep

So this one was a nice and deep piece I love the rain dropping down I think some drops of rain should be on her hair falling off somehow but also more water all over but those eyes you did amazing wouldn't mind if you made them sparkle a bit more also I like this piece very realistic and very stylish anyways great work keep at it and make more for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More water dripping and a more sparkle in her eyes

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[Girl portrait]

This was nice

I like this because of the light effect off to the right there I do think that you could have it more as a beam of light comming down on her face but that's just an idea of effect other then that this was pretty good I like it very much and glad I had the chance to review this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of a beam of light rather then a shine of light

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[Stradivarius]

Nice detail here

I really like the detail you have here and wouldn't mind some more lighting effects to bring more of this out like more glow on he eyes and some sparkles off the strings as well so that's a good idea for some small additional details with lighting and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting details

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[Eleven fanart]

Nice

This was cool I wouldn't mind more beam on his face even some brightness to the right of the canvus to show where that light is comming from but have to say you have done some amazing work here great structure and live the meshing of color and textuture

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More beam of light and source of light

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[Itadakimasu]

Very nice

I like this I love the connection from the fish to her face and ears to what she is eating it's all a circle of progress in a way I think the only thing here that could be worked on would be some more shine on her hair but maybe not too much anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bit more shine on her hair

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[O-hanami]

Nice

I know her face is supposed to look like that but just wish there was more emotion in her face but anyways this was notbad of a piece of art you have here very nice detail on clothing and just all the little details so very nice work here anyways keep up the great details

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[A Pretty Face]

Beautiful

And another beautiful piece you have here the stern face is great gives her that alurring look the hair flows perfectly and the dark shades really work for this kind of reminds me of an old black and white 20s styles but anyways really nice work this is one of those pieces that could use a frame or border along the edges like a portrait might have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders

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[Raneem]

Beautiful

Wow I have to say this was beautiful and almost perfect piece not sure what you need to do to make it even better because it's pretty solid and love what you do here if anything I would put some frame around this might be the one thing missing to make it that much better but nice work indeed here and I look forward to more artistic styles like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a frame and or border along the edges

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