XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Wars]

Love it

This was pretty good I like the whole piece as you filled the whole area and I do enjoy the small details here and there the light sabres could have more of a glow on them but other then that this was a good charchter I love the structure you put on her anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow on the sabres

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[El]

Beautiful

Now this was a beautiful piece of art here and really nice charchter work here all the lines work well colors work love her expression too the one thing I would change would be the white backing it needs a tint of color or something along them lines or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color on the white backing

~X~

[Sexy Pkachu]

Very nice

I have to say this one was pretty good I have to say you have really gave her an alurring look and that's the best part of it some more shine on her bottom side would be a plus more streaks of shine but other then that this was pretty good form of pika choo

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine on her backside

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bxBLAZExd responds:

Thank you for your input, although this is an older piece(I would like to i have improved since this 1 lol well I'd like too) i still take any critique with open ears Thanks.

[Miss AMERICA p01]

Love it

Well this was cool I love the added color but you artwork alone is so well done smooth lines and all comes together pretty well I really like your style here but would love more colored versions but it was a good story too very well done here keep making these

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More added color needed

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[Miss AMERICA p02]

Wow nice

I have to say this is pretty nice the black and white is nice you should think about adding some color though but this is a fantastic comic great charchters great action scenes very good comic you got going on I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be nice

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[Cartoon Practice!]

Well nice job

So you really did capture the cartoon style with all the vibrant colors simple and colorfull that's what I would call this I would still has room to improve on the background it was kind of basic but still could use some effort and detail but keep it real and make for some positive styles of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work needed

~X~

[Pixels]

Creative I idea here

I have to say this was a creative idea here the art is always good the small animation was great and the text bubbles are great you should do all your art comics with this kind of text bubbling the whole piece as a whole is great the pixel form is also a nice touch but anyways very nice work here keep up the great comic making untill next time

~X~

[Shotgun, Redux]

This was nice

I really like the lighting and shadowing effects you do on these you should do more of that in the future just brings out the true color of the effects this particular episode was not bad and I look forward to even more from you but untill then keep up the good work

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[田中陽子 Yoko Tanaka]

Very nice work

Very good charchter the outfit was indeed good the visual here is really good and nice all around I really couldn't find anything to change here but I would ad some more sparkle to her eyes that would be an improved touch or idea but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle from the eyes

~X~

[Sonic sees the Devil]

Wow

Now this is pretty intense you really pushed the envelope on the detail on this one just the deep colors alone are intense the drawings and design of the different characters are very impressive I think that gem in the center is pretty good but also could use more of a shine and glow on it even throwing a sparkle on it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The green gem needs some more glow shine and even a sparkle

~X~