XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kayleigh Package]

Ok cool

So this was pretty nifty I like all the elements here you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre, those are just a few things I would ad as a form of improvement here but nice work overall. Yes I have to say this was somenice work and some nice efforts, you for sure know what youare doing and it shows, some areas could be better, but you have it down for the most part. So my Insight on this whole piece is that you have Captured something differant and unique. Ok so this is where I call it an end for the review, but may I mention that it was a nice and fun experience reviewing this piece as its a fave of mine. good Polish on this will make it an Extended masterpiece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre.

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[KK Sketch'd]

Cute

So I found this one to be cute love the fresh look about it, it was actually very fresh looking and a nice element here, love the "BIG" eyes and such and really came out well, I personally would ad some more "DHINE" to the eyes or something, but thats just me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine to the eyes.

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[Bad Landing]

Very nice

Wow I must say this one was a pleasure of art you have here, Love how theres a battle here somehow, I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow ofcourse just something to think on with lighting effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow

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[We See It Our Own Way]

artistic

Very artistic style you have here I like the style, I love all the different color you have here and love all the "VARIATION" of elements here its a really nice job here and comes off well on the eyes, I wouldnt mind more texture in the details of things but overall this was nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind more texture in the details of things

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[Walteh Woite]

Very good portrait

This was a good portrait of Walter white and I like the paint style on this it has a strong likeness of him so that was a plus of things and I really like your paint style I do think you could have put something in the background maybe Jessie Pinkman or the rv itself like in the far distant but adding some small props like that would be really cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small props in the distance

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MeGummyBall responds:

those are some good ideas. haven't been on newgrounds recently but it's good to be back and finding out i got feedback, thanks.

[Shadow Hawk]

Nice artistic style here very beautiful

A very beautiful piece here love all the different color here love all the different styles but I do think this could use more shine to it it just needs a tad more to it some sparkle on the silver parts of it all all the colored parts are very nice and make it jump out at you with artistic color but anyways nice work here really loved this so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine

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[Marie Antoinette (Vigée le Brun)]

Very nice

So you do so well on these characters the structure just so well done and so nice in detail color and textuture just seems to come together very well and your back round is fantastic only thing I would suggest changing is putting some glow on the flower but that's really about it anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some hlow on the flower

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you! Your comment is very much appreciated! :-)
I am very happy with your feedback and with your help on how I can improve!

[portrait]

Nice drawing

So this was a nice drawing here I really like the hair as for some advice the shoulders seem like they could be more spread out and the facial features. Need more emotion in it's face like a smile a smirk etc those are just a few ideas to really improve on but nice overall job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More emotion in the face and spread out shoulders more

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Ahh I really don't love this one! ^^ I worked a lot on my portrait since this one, hopefully I improved a little! Thank for the feedback!

[Leopard]

Nice

This was a beautiful I really love how you match up the skin tone or in this case the furr with the lighting I could really see uou make that light shine like a beam his fur is very luminating so works well with a beam anyways really nice work here subtle and just pleasent on the eyes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light like a light beam off the animal

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you for your help and advice! ^^ It's very cool you took the time to help me so much with this drawing and with the other drawings!

[Rouquine]

Smooth

So this was a smooth piece it's like a portrait so with that style I really could see you adding a border frame on this one maybe a deep border with some wood like textuture but nice charchter here very smooth colors and lines made it very beautiful

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some wood like border or frames

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Drawwithyuna responds:

You're right, I also think it would have been nice to add border or frames because right now this portrait seems unfinished... Thank you for the feedback (and once again thank you for all the other feedback)
:-)