XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just bored, i think im going to the pool.]

Very beautiful

Wow this was very beautiful I am loving your shine work not just on this piece but on all your pieces I do however think that you should ad more shine like on her underwear and more shine on her hair even just a little more would be really good I would think

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added shine

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[Just thinking about greek girls]

Very good

So nice job here very beautiful piece I love the shine you put on her that was very nice I however do think that she needs more shine like a streak of shine on her hair but still you have a good piece of art here maybe ad some background too just a few more scenes or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and some more shine

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[Testing my skills]

This was cute

Well I found this one to be cute the face mainly was well done and I like the background but seems like the background is missing some stuff not sure what but maybe some flying birds or some prop anyways nice work here I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some extra little props in the background like some birds or something

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[Yoko | Gurrenn lagann]

Very nice

This was cool I like the structure here you really do push the level here and have some good charchter design I like the shine especially on the hair but I think you needed more shine on the black sleeves of her arms but other then that this was pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine on her sleeves

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[JJ]

Really nice work

I have to say that your work here is very nice and glad to see you did another one of these two tone pieces and it's very nice would have liked some color in it maybe adding some borders and or frames would be a nice idea but oveall it was a pleasure reviewing your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames

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[Happy Birthday!]

Funny

Well this one was pretty funny and entertaining always good to have a happy birthday but with this comic something crazy seems to happen so it gave me a chuckle glad to see you have a third charchter in here it's always amazing to see some new blood anyways nice job on another great comic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If anything I would color in the text bubbles or maybe a glow around the bubble

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ChazDude responds:

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I honestly fail to see what a glow would add of value.

[Yet Another Day In Littleworth]

Wow

Wow this was really cool I love all the color you put in here as well as all the detail and really made this jump out at you like it's really happening I'm really not sure about changing anything it's so beautiful to touch but if anything I would change up the 2017 make it more bold and maybe some texture in the yellow but overall a beautiful piece kind of like a poster

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above

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[JJ]

Really nice

So you have done some really nice work here this was well done and I like the two tone visual here to make it different from left and right I think as some extra twist on this piece you could ad some blue eyes or hlow in the eyes on both pieces anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color in the eyes

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[JJ]

Very nice indeed

Well I have to say this was very nice some nice work indeed it has a sort of artistic style with the faint blue I like the borders but you need a color border here something more vibrant and related to the visual at hand so other then that this was some fantastic work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more vibrant borders

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JME10135 responds:

Thanks!

[JJ]

Yeah was kind of dark

Yes I think it was a bit too dark so adding some kind of sunlight might be a key idea that could improve on this and maybe more detail in the mountains and such but what I will say it is a nice effort and good build up of something better to come anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sunlight might be nice

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