XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Christmas 2017]

Very sharp looking

Wow I must say you really outdid yourself here with this beautiful piece a very nice piece the reds really stand out and everything has come to light and the shine is very impressive as well some nice points here and you even made it to be funny and amusing as for improving on things I would say maybe more shine but you really covers it all in this absolutely beautiful creation very cute as well nice job all the way around here so other then the shine on some points like lips it doesn't need much more if even that so anyways it was a pleasure to review this it's a positive piece all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine would be nice on lips maybe but probably not needed

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kyllaandotto responds:

Wow!!!
Thank you very much for this review!!!!
It is always nice to read comments like this :D
Thank you so much!!!

[Adult Tav / RP gift]

Nice design

And here was a nice characters I do think you should work on some backrounds here it was nifty with everything else though the wings the horns all came out pretty well and nice design over all so in a magical sense the wings should glow a bit and the horns could be light up a bit more maybe even have some more sparkle and shine to them just something to think about. But anyways hope that helps

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects and shine ideas

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[Drowning]

Very deep

I sometimes find that depression hightens my ideas and thoughts on writing for me but as for your art work here it has a few meanings it seems very nice use of colors and it tells a small story here those lights at the bottom of the ocean or lake should be light up even more and maybe go as far as have the skyline light up as well but overall this was a nice bunch here of artistic style and deep thaught

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting up of some spots

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[Happy Holidays! (2017)]

Notbad

Kind of like an animated card with some soft and appealing artwork. A nice little animation I actually think there should have been two bulbs dropping one drop and break and the second drop and bounce off like you had it there already just something nice to do a little extra there anyways nice art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a small improvment

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[Forest Monster]

Very intense

Well with this one you were very intense the texture and skin tones alone we're pretty impressive stuff the backround with the fog was even better and really made this look like you have created a world and such I could see you adding some eyes in the fog looking on just as there might be other hidden creatures and such but it was a great piece well defined with some nice little details and all the elements that come with this so nice piece so anyways hope you keep making mysterious stuff such as this one because it was a pleasent suprise anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some eyes in the backround lurking on would be one idea

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[Advent: Day 21]

Wow very impressive

This was very impressive the in your face style was very effective I love all the little detail you have put into this piece the sketching the shading the detail the style just all around good stuff here very intense stuff and I was pleased to have check this out. So nice work indeed hope you keep making stuff like this just as good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could totally see the eyes just the eyes colored here

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[Sketchbook 06]

Very nice

I love how you did this and the black and white is nice I am thinking that the frames here should have a solid base color or something it allows for more focus but I do like your style here and the black and white really stands out so nice work there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored frames would be a nice addition here

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[Zoinks Season]

Nice work

Scooby would be proud but anyways the pose she is in seems off like where her left hand is it almost seems like she's holding on to a wall or something. And you could work more on the shine on the hair it could be better in that aspect of things and back to the hand maybe you should make the backround a wall or some leverage point so it doesn't just look like there was a wall or something these are all little things that could greatly improved on an already fine piece of art work here so I hope some of these suggestions and ideas help in this or future projects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas in the initial review

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[Shiro NGNL]

Nice lighting

I like the lighting beaming off this. With the purples and such it really radiates the color well so you did well in that aspect of things it's a picture that tells a story of fear but that could just be me other then that I think this came out well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't see any changes that really need to be made here on this lovely piece

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[Catgirl]

Very nice

This was nice. A nice burst of light comming through and presenting on the character there's something about her arms and hands that could be missing some texture or tone maybe too light there but over all a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe too much light beating down on skin tones

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