XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Milkman]

Nice job here

I like this if that's fire on the milk nice idea but my suggestion for this piece is that the fire or flame should be more vibrant and flame more maybe even some smoke but for the most part I liked this so nice job good design here and nice idea I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved flames

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[Horse]

Really nice work

I love the design here it's also cute and well textured a very good design here and think you don't need any of my suggestion ideas because you did very well on this piece and I was happy with this and the texture of it all so nice job hope to see more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on this beautiful piece

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[Airplane]

You know your stuff

You really know your stuff here this was another amazing piece where you design some very realistic pieces and with this one was some extra shine on the plane where the lighting comes it but besides that this was just amazing work and I look forward to even more from you so keep doing what you do I'll keep an eye out for more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine off the plane

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[Leaf Frog]

So real

I am just amazed on how realistic your work is must take you a long time to really get this done but the progress of this must be amazing I am really impressed with all that you do here it's just very intense very real love it all very nice work I really have nothing else to say or even suggest because this is some beautiful work anyways keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nope because this is too good

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[Notebook page front - betrayal 1]

Nice work

I really like these types the black and white is very nice some good detail would love to see the full page filled maybe even some borders and frames to accent it better but it's good stuff and I enjoyed it very much so keep up the good effort very nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some black and white borders and or frames even some color ones would suffice

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Doomroar responds:

Thanks man, yeah i have been considering drawing on the frames too, but always get worried of smearing the ink and making a mess out of the page, so i never know if i should do the borders first or last, and i end just avoiding them.

[Ryan the fire guy]

Kind of simple

I have to say this was kind of simple but it was a nice idea I like the fire theme here and the eyes look cool I really wouldn't change a thing on this as it's pretty good and well drawn very cartoony like maybe that was the intent but overall a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice and simple no changes needed

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[Black Tunnel Web Spider]

Wow

Wow I have to say this was really a beautiful piece here it's so realistic and very lovely to see all the realistic details it's just so real and that is amazing in itself love the style love the lighting and it's a bit scary as I dislike spiders but you did a very nice piece of art here and I'm pretty impressed my suggestion for improvement might be some more light beam comming through

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light beam comming through

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[Sargent John Mullins]

Very intense

Wow I have to say that this was very intense very detailed love the grind that is going on her like a real battle that one guy with red eyes or sheilded eyes you should have more glow off of that and more lighting come off the back end too but besides that this was a beautiful piece and I'll have to check out morenof your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some lighting and glow issues

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[Pot Head]

Love this

I have to say that this was pretty amazing and pretty good drawing the shades are well done and just love the detail and the title and idea work so well just a beautiful piece that you have here I really enjoyed this for the simplistic design yet it's unique style I would suggest adding some color or dull color just an idea though but anyways good stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be nice
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[Gun Maiden- Timesplitters 2]

Very nice

So this was another good charchter I really like the pose here and am enjoying the background and just really enjoyed this for the beautiful design don't have any suggestions for any changes as I found this one to be pleasant to the eyes so very nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a thing no changes needed on this beautiful piece

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