XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[10 Things Not To Do At Halloween]

Impresionisim

the ten things are amusing nice choices, Impresionisim thats what I would call it you have impressed me upto this point and I see no stopping to that this entry was good with humor and you can never go wrong with these characters, they are always upto something or into somethig strange and odd lol, anyways nice efforts here.

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[Voltergeist!]

A great masterpeice

Lots of great color in this one even a long one nice, And here was a great masterpeice of a comic probably one of the better comic pieces of comics as this was just brilliant on all fronts the art for one is great, the story you bring is fantastic and the characters you bring to life making them all work as one in a great story just as this one ended so nice work indeed.

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[It Hurts Here]

PAIN

A great way to showcase your pain and torment when stressed and sad. The red is always a good use of color for red. This overall is really original, the use of simple lines to show your style with some colors here and there, then backgrounds of white lines over black. It all comes together well and beautiful. The small blues inside the blacks also are a nice little touch of color. I think your ability to draw human forms in your own unique way is very good. You said you've not drawn in a while but I think you still have it. Alright well this Concludes my review, So with this you make things jump out at you, And I cant describe it all in just words here because you made the little things work, and you make them work very well. but this is my last words on some Critique, So there are a few things that I really enjoyed with this piece of art, I like the way it all manages to flow right together and blends with the elements around it, Its stuff like this that makes it a joy to review this kind of stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just more lines around the piece to make a border, just to close it up with a flow

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[Dave's Pixel Problem Pt.2]

Good stories

More pixel yay, So even with these stories being short and part of a comic you really do make them come alive with color or black and white and the characters and humor really does come alive and those are the little things that I really enjoy with stuff like this one and how it turned out.

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[Naomi waitress Lingerie]

SEXY

I love love love your choice of red underwear here for a redheaded girl. You know how to draw a body accurately and with good details. The slight shines off her skin and shades in her body are perfect, just like in an anime. The wink and eyes are great and draw you in to her innocent but seductive nature. She wants to fill you with beer and you want to fill...nevermind. It is a good piece overall and even the beer was drawn in an acurate and well manner. The background is good too but keeps your focus on character as you intended....I think the boobs are the best as you have rounded them out in realistic and sexy way. Well hope you like my Critique of your work, it was an Exhilaration and I enjoy reviewing your art pieces, And I have really come to enjoy art pieces like this, Its art pieces like this that truly amaze me because they bring on so much detail and quality. with a style and unique creativity of there own. This Radiates with Polish and I really like the energy you have put into this, really shows off well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really, I mean you could add a border but honestly this is great as it is

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[Dave's Pixel Problem Pt.1]

Underappreciated

Dave became pixel haha thats a great idea So I think sometimes your work is Underappreciated because the work you do is well deserving of so much more When i first found your work it was notbad but over time this stuff is awsome stuff and I cant seem to get enoough of it so very nice work here.

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[Potatoman Regrown Chapter 1: Pen Foes]

Good comic

Wow this story really gets deep especially with potato man And another good comic entry, Its not a bad one at all some nice detail and the humor is always great just as this one is here love the detail of this though, those characters are just so amusing and all the stuff that happens, but anyways nice work indeed, and I look forward to even more.

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[Potatoman Regrown Poster]

Wow

Wow this was nice kind of like a promo of some sort, But its a good one and it shows some good wording and a good logo very red ish and seems like people are mad or on the hunt, but regardless this was still pretty impressive, I do like your work here though and hope to see more.

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[Swump]

Nice swamp

Well what can I say this is entertaining and trump brings some entertaining elements and while this one had lots of detail I think adding some color to this you should ad more to it all those little details really come out well but its a nice little piece of art you have here.

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[Building the Great Pyramid]

Good

This is something interesting and good. I think you choice to color this for black history month was a good pick. I love the emotion you captured here, you can see the struggle they had to face building this and the fact the musician is trying to make the entire process more bearable is very human and real. It gives a story and I like when art tells a story. I could see you making an animation out of this work, but I would try to improve your use of backgrounds for your sky and some of the coloring could use textures and shadows. I think overall tho it is a good piece and creative. I think this is creative for blending the styles of art and design, there is a lot here This really captures the aspect of this piece It is very subtle but apparent at the idea and concept of this entry, A very acurate idea and design, you have done here, some very good energy you put fourth into this one and thats what I have really enjoyed about this one, so nice work here indeed, so keep up the interesting and artistic work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some clouds in the sky, effects and textures in your coloring on some parts.

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