XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Radio Fantastic!]

Ad a frame

So this is something you can really ad a nice frame too or border basically the same thing but it's like portrait and could use a frame to accent the main focus of things here just something to think about in future projects or if you redo this anyways good efforts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frame or border

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[Tally Yoshikawa]

Nice charchter

Now here was a nice charchter the size could be taller but the yellow background needs some work some type of meshed out mixture of texture would be key but something more then just the yellowish backing just feels like it needs more it's a nice piece though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Yellow background needs more meshed texture

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[McAlister House]

Love your style

I have to say I love your paint style you really push forward some nice detail I think as an idea of suggestion you could throw in a dog or even cow just to make it look more the part of the element other then that this was a solid piece that came out pretty well so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra anamals

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[Drunk Lexi]

Ok

So this is drunk Lexi. It's notbad she don't really look too drunk I could see you changing her expression on her face maybe show more havoc in the background like broken bottles maybe misplaced clothing etc just a few ideas I am throwing at you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra expression and background detail

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[panther]

Very deep

Now this was some very deep shades of shading and the eyes really came out very well the eyes really draw you in and on that note I think a form or suggested idea would be have the eyes colored and the rest black and white also adding some borders and or frame on your canvus would be another positive suggested idea but you do have a nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra elements of color and or frames

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[my alien]

I really like the color

The color was really nice work here but it's also all the energy that you put fourth into each item and prop to make it all come together and the color adds to it adding some sparkle to different points to this like a bottle or aliens eyes would have a nice ending effect here and I suggest these as ideas only for you to decide what's best anyways nice art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine points

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[Hyper Piper]

Wow intense

Wow this was intense the character it self is a beautiful drawing and the light up points are really good very amazing lighting effects even in the background I think with those light up points you should ad much more glow to them more dim and brighter points just a suggestion to think about and well that's my review on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dim and lighter points of hlowing effect

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[Standhouden Forest]

Creative

Now this is a bit different then some of your other work this one is Abit more dark I like the green light you should ad some eyes back there that glow would give more scary effect and feel to things but overall this was a nice backround scene I like the darkness

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing eyes would be really cool

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[Release the Quacken!]

Nice

Well this was cute now if it's a rubber ducky maybe ad a bathroom scene in the background now if it's out in the ocean maybe some type of sunlight would suffice these are just some suggestions and ideas though overall all it's a cute little drawing anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background settings as suggested

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[Name That Hat]

Nothing but cuteness

And here was nothing but cuteness very stylish I like the little details that you put on your character work like this one those gold wings on the hat could have a shine to them though a sparkling shine that glitters that's the only suggestion I have for this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some sparkling shine on the wing pin

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