XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Miss AMERICA p02]

Wow nice

I have to say this is pretty nice the black and white is nice you should think about adding some color though but this is a fantastic comic great charchters great action scenes very good comic you got going on I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be nice

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[Cartoon Practice!]

Well nice job

So you really did capture the cartoon style with all the vibrant colors simple and colorfull that's what I would call this I would still has room to improve on the background it was kind of basic but still could use some effort and detail but keep it real and make for some positive styles of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work needed

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[Pixels]

Creative I idea here

I have to say this was a creative idea here the art is always good the small animation was great and the text bubbles are great you should do all your art comics with this kind of text bubbling the whole piece as a whole is great the pixel form is also a nice touch but anyways very nice work here keep up the great comic making untill next time

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[Shotgun, Redux]

This was nice

I really like the lighting and shadowing effects you do on these you should do more of that in the future just brings out the true color of the effects this particular episode was not bad and I look forward to even more from you but untill then keep up the good work

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[田中陽子 Yoko Tanaka]

Very nice work

Very good charchter the outfit was indeed good the visual here is really good and nice all around I really couldn't find anything to change here but I would ad some more sparkle to her eyes that would be an improved touch or idea but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle from the eyes

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[Sonic sees the Devil]

Wow

Now this is pretty intense you really pushed the envelope on the detail on this one just the deep colors alone are intense the drawings and design of the different characters are very impressive I think that gem in the center is pretty good but also could use more of a shine and glow on it even throwing a sparkle on it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The green gem needs some more glow shine and even a sparkle

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[End Of Time]

Awsome

I just can't get over how good these are even the effects are very good like the shadow of the characters so you really do push the detail on these and that's all ways a plus this story was not the best but still gave me a chuckle it was a nice comic submitted episode

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 18]

Lol funny

It's jail time for you that was a great line and this is what I mean you bring a good story together and make it work for the best the detail and color of the art work is always supurb very nice job here indeed anyways keep up the great comic works just like this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really sure because to be honest you have done these so well

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 19]

Very interesting

So this potato man is really starting to interest me and you can really see where he evolves and such so nice job there and I have no advice for this one because this one was pretty straight forward and doesn't need anything major not of your works does because it's in it's own style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes here

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 20]

Nice work

And once again here was some nice work and a nice part of this great comic series live the detail you put on him as a form of improvement I could see you adding some shaded color to the bubble text but it's just one simple idea doesn't need to be done just throwing it out there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored text bubbles would be cool

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