XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Teeth]

Purple madness

Ok not sure whats going on with this one but what I see is part of a comic then this huge purple thing blocking the rest of the comic not sure if that was the intent or not but maybe its just an error I saw it once before but still would be nice to know more about this particular entry.

~X~

[French fires]

Interesting

Well This one was interesting has a a simple idea here the black and white is notbad, the face and expression is kind of a sad face but it is what it is, seems like this one could use some color and some backround details, these are just a few ideas that could make this work a little better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This seemed kind of small in scale so why not make a larger scale size of the canvus, and allow for more focus on detail and more little details here and there a larger canvus will allow for more of that detail to show up and its easier to see for everyone. Some color ofcourse, and some backround details,

~X~

[Inside the mind of SBC]

Very artistic

Wow this one is very artistic very beautiful in color love all the amount of color and design you have here lots of rainbow color and the drawings with in are very beautifull aswell this was a very nice piece here of color, it almost seems like you can ad some type of border on this one or a frame along the edges.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some type of border on this one or a frame along the edges, something thick and with texture.

~X~

[Zom-Dave]

Ohmy

Wow now this is an art piece for sure its a bit brutal but maybe thats the idea I love the full color and some nice deep colors at that, the head on the sword was pretty intense but I think as a suggestion much more dripping blood and more blood on the ground even but anyways great art piece here.

~X~

[Majin 21]

Pixel fun

I love your coloring here for pixels. The blues purples and pinks really shine here like an effect but it is just pixels being placed in a good use of space and color. I love the DBZ charater outfit and hair. I love the background. The entire piece looks like something out of a video game and captures what pixel art is all about. and you have made some very nice pixel art work here and I was very pleased with the style you gave it a nice vibe. Well this Concludes my review but there is such Exhilaration and you bring a certain Mythical and even Grand visuals here on this piece and I was pretty impressed with all that you have done here, And I will look for more of your work for sure, But before I go I do wish to say you have some decent talent here and it shows off very well, so keep on doing what you do its pretty awsome stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much here to change. I like it as is.

~X~

[Heaven's Lair main menu]

Nice vsual

This was a nice art piece here I like the texture and shading in the red trees or thorns, the clouds are nice too the "BAT" could use some detail and the "FONT" used could also use more fancy style and such, but other then that this was a nice art piece, so keep doing what you do its a beautiful style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some lighter greys to the bat would be nice, and some fancier font type for the tit

~X~

[Girl on chair DOT JAYPEG]

Nice drawing

I have to say this is a very nice drawing I love the paper and pen work here love that added color you have like a glow, and bound up it seems another nice touch makes you wonder what kind of story is going on, but anyways nice drawing maybe even more color or even a color backround for extra measure and extra effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some color base backround would be a huge plus here or the whole piece being colored.

~X~

[2018 Naked Terrier]

Neat

Ok this one here is neat and different. I do think you need work with anatomy of you are going to be adding arms to a basic human shape. The blue hair and skin are colored and drawn out very well. I would like to see more of a background from you instead of just black. Maybe some effects around her arms like casting a spell. This is neat overall And really liked what you did with this one, so keep that kind of work going strong. So I was pretty pleased with this you have outdone yourself, on this and this one has all the great elements in the right places, you do good work. maybe adding a Twist here and there would give it a more unique feel and look, but might be nice with some extra changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Take a look at other 4 armed creatures anatomy and how to place the arms in a morw fluid way. Also get a nice background in there with effects.

~X~

[Package]

Haha cute

I like the ending when he is running away but have to say this one was a good idea really funny and amusing but then again all your work is funny and its my kind of humor just like this comic stip is so props to you on a beautifull piece here, really good stuff indeed.

~X~

[Anxiety]

OK

I can see where you were going with this, the feeling over anxiety with overwhelming amount of things going on here and there. It is like a choas in your world and the painting shows the chaos of their life. The cat has that calm look on here that the woman does not. You can tell with all the colors and patterns how much is going on in your head. I love it all and think it is true art. Your painting style and use of colors brings out a good story here. Keep it up, because its really good what you present us. And so I was pretty pleased with everything, I liked your ideas and concept with this piece, There could be be some extra details, but I will get into that later, So you have some nice work here and I do look forward to seeing what else you can do here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I love it as is, maybe some small polish here or there, but not by much.

~X~