XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Parody (D&C 'Xmas' Special)]

Wow

Wow this one was by far the best one I have seen for one it had lots of dialog and that alone made the story have a deeper depth and you went and made this one a long deep one with all sorts of stuff going on so for me the story was my fave and all the little effects like the glow on the sabres and just everything that I saw was well detailed very nice indeed on this very well made and detailed comic wish all of them were like this

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Love how this one was long and deep wish the others were a little more deep like this

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[pretty smile beppler]

Nice drawing

So the drawing here was pretty good nice shading on the skin tone and the hair was not bad and I like what you did with the background it was simple but then it was not it was a good piece of art here as a suggestion I would ad deeper color tones maybe it will come off better but other then that this was pretty good work keep making great art pieces

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker color tones and textures would be a nice suggestion

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[badass finn]

Nice work

Well this was really nice I like the shell or bubble he is in like he's been captured in time the outter white parts of the canvus can be filled in or you can use that to make some type of nifty border or frame but nice work on this and really nice charchter I enjoyed this and your style of art here hope to find more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nifty border or frame to make use of the bland spots

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[Pencil meet Stylus]

Amazing

And the finished product is amazing work love your talent and love how the progress shows off the final touch in this one and you really can see the transition it really came off well colors and designs just amazing work here so nice job on this if anything I would ad some sparkle to the stylus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some sparkle to the stylus

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[Mid way point ( Pencil meet Stylus]

Very nice

Wow I have to say this was a solid piece of work you have here I like the progress of it it's a very good work in progress I can't really suggest any changes because it is a work in progress but what you do have here is pretty good work I like your style I do wonder what art program you use??

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it's a work in progress

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[Hitting the books? Or streets?]

Awesome

This was awesome I love your use of color here the reds and darks really came off well and the glasses was a nice touch too I think you can go one step farther with ad a sparkle and shine comming off the glasses that would be a nice effect just something to try out

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A shine an door a sparkle

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[Dark days ahead]

Very dark

So this was pretty dark I love what you did with the eyes and I think if you light up the eyes with some glow it would give off a more scary feel and visual the rest of this was fine and we'll done so adding some lights in the eyes would be pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light in the eyes or glow

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[Psytly]

Decent

So wish you could have finished this looks really good I honestly think you could still work with this the bland spots could still be filled in maybe stars or layered colors or something along them lines but I like you style here and the suck was cute so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in the blank or in finished points

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[Change]

Amazing

I really like the idea on this one from old to new and you really transitioned it well I would love to see a frame on this like a portrait and you could have the same transition but anyways nice job it was pretty good art piece and the contest shows off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frame with the same transition style

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[Star Pones - The Last Senpai (TeamKP Print)]

Good idea

Wow I have to say I would have never thaught of that idea and you put it up well love the texture on deep colors on this it's pretty amazing if you ask me and this is another one of your pieces that needs no upgrades or changes what so ever it's solid work

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No changes or improvments needed this was all around a solid piece

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