XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[girlface.jpg]

Nice drawing

So here was a nice drawing or sketch, you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, And I would even throw in some color on this one, then some backround would be a huge plus also, but other then that this was notbad, I like your work here, so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, I would even go as far as to put some color into this, these are just some ideas.

~X~

[Dexter]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the red and black style here the backround could use more "TEXTURE" and more depth of color maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus. but other then that this was a nice art piece that you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus.

~X~

[Bellybutton]

Cool and nifty

And here we have once again another part of the comic and this entry really just jumped out at ya and really makes some good story here very amusing as always, and once again I will mention that you bring in some good humor thats always a plus especly for me anyways keep up the good work.

~X~

[Zeta portrait 1 : Chill]

Nice portrait he

So this was a nice portrait you have here the hair almost seems like flames and if that's the case make them more light up and if they are more like leafs then put some green in there but other then that this was a nice drawing a good portrait indeed I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some change or not change on the hair

~X~

[Imperial Road (Speed painting)]

Pretty amazing

So this was pretty amazing work here very nice view the grass and view itself looks very realistic I think some lighting effects could come in order on this like adding light hitting the edges of little cliffs and edges of the grass that would give off a more realistic feel of the light hitting the grass

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects to hit the grass would be nice

~X~

[Cute Goop]

Cute

Well the good sure is cute I do wish there could be more good dripping and some dropped on floor that would give off more of a nice effect but the character work is really well done here I like the style here and goop is always good especially when it's pink

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More goop falling down and dripping

~X~

[spoops]

This was cool

I really like this the art style is colorfull looks like lots of demons and or fish not sure thats a good combo lol but its still pretty nifty work. So with all that said I cant wait to see what else you showcase for us, but do want to give you a big pat on the back because in all honesty we the viewer never see what goes on behind the scenes of making something like this, and for that alone you deserve all the props in the world.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
But anyways no need for any changes on this beautiful piece.

~X~

[Renamon a Final Pole]

Nice

This was cool I like the artwork here the character is very well and a nice structure the pole she is on could have more of a glare to it just an idea also love the lighting in the background make it brighter if you can anyways good art piece here hope to see more soon

~~Things to improve on~~
Some brighter lighting from background and some glare from pole

[Laketown Bar]

Beautiful

Wow this is some real amazing work I love the black and white style here and with that moon setting you could really beam some lighting effect off of it and onto the scene itself that's just a suggestion what you have here now is very impressive and very well done I'm impressed this is talent on the canvus right here so nice work indeed I hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra lighting effects from the moonlight would have been nice

~X~

[When you're out of this world]

Very creative

Wow I have to say that this alone was very creative a very creative style that you have her with some really nifty imagination that went into this I added this as my fave because it has such great creativity and style you have much flavour and it shows off well I would live to see some small changes like have some stras brighetr and some dimmer anyways think about that suggested idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some brighter and dimmer stars

~X~