XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gone Shopping]

Nice

A nice design here it allows us to see what's really happening in the underworld of the water lol no but really some nice job here I like all the details of this and all the focus points I could see you adding some more little detail stuff here and there making it even better nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few little more tid bits of detail items would be a plus

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[Raven]

Fine work

A fine piece of work here with some amazing shine texture and detail just overall great designs here with a realistic design it's a plus on all fronts with this one love the deep colors and textures I would not suggest any improvments at this time as this is great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a backround scene

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OddmireAsh responds:

Thank you! I agree that I do need to work on designing backgrounds, most often I just draw the character and have a simple colored background.

[Notebook 04]

Very nice drawings

And here we have some very nice drawings good linework not too fancy but you gave us a good idea of your style and it's very well done. Now I personally would love more color and more fine detail within the drawings but that's just me. Some color would be very nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some color. And some more detailed lines

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[Slash]

Notbad

This was notbad, a sketch of sorts here with some interesting line work, but that line work is pretty impressive, and while its just a sketch and such I could see you improving this a great deal, like adding some color and such, but anyways nice effort sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be great maybe just a tid bit of color.

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[Slappin Da Fin]

Cute

This was a cute little flash you have here, the art is fresh and bubbly just smooth colors and it all seems to come around very nice here, Only thing I could see changing up would be maybe a glare from the sun. Keep up the awsome work this was a great drawing nice effort shown some decent detail, and was glad I had a chance to review this very nice indeed, hope to checkout more of your work soon. but anyways keep up the great efforts and nice work you put out. Hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing I could see changing up would be maybe a glare from the sun.

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[Infinite Red Bulls]

Impressive

This was impressive and creative, Nice use of color here with the styles and unique textures and there is a story going on here love all the detail that this has to offer, you really made something here so nice job all the way around, as for an improvment point maybe some glare from the tv but thats about it I would say. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far. keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare from the tv.

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[i google you]

Intense

Wow this piece was very intense and while its just a few colors and such you still showed some nice style here with whats going on, I feel like you should have the "LIGHT" reflect on more. but its a really nice piece and I really enjoyed it dark and light.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more light reflecting off areas maybe shoulders.

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[Lost in the dark]

Darkness

I like this for the darkness, I love what you have done here with the backround too, that "MOON" is really good and seems to set the tone for everything else so really nice work there the detail here really sets off things , the Character itself was pleasently done with nice detail. so props to you on a great dark piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it just as is.

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[First painting attempt]

Very nice work

You have some very nice work here, the sketch and style seems to have come out very well, and It is very life like so you did something realistic and it shows, so nice work there ofcourse. This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and stuff but have suggested a few ideas to improve on it, and if not just keep trying new stuff and see what works, but with that said this was pretty good I thought. so just keep what you do.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I would change was add some pattern in the backround or something.

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NavrcL responds:

Thanks a lot.
Yeah, some background might actually help. I'll try something next time.
Thanks

[bioshock fan comic book pg6]

Nice

Nice comic style work here it should have some more "FRAMES" though as this was pretty good and you make it come alive, but adding more comic like frams allows us to see more of whats going on, and sofar you seem to have a good story going on here so nice work and I look forward to seeing more of what you have in store for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More comic frames.

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