XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hole]

Always nice

It's always nice to see what comes out of this comic with all the use of color you do so well with the different view shots and really make each frame come alive and that's what I have come to enjoy about your work and you have so much of it. But anyways nice work here nice color nice story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing with this one you are pretty solid at this

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[Inktober Day 4]

Lol

So there's something in each of these characters and it makes the whole piece pretty fun and entertaining I like the added color and the backround work is not bad either as well. I could see you putting a lil more detail in that backround wall maybe some cracks and more bricks but you have outdone yourself once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra backround work would be nice

~X~

[Italian ...Dude]

Simple

So here with this one I found it to be simple but was pretty stylish and while it's bland it still shows off some entertaining value the smooth lines are nice though and I could see you adding some more shadowing here or there just for that extra touch and whatnot but I like what you have so far it's simple and fun

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Simple and fun piece could use more shading

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[Gyaridos]

Love the color

So here I'll first discuss the color you actually have great use of color here and make it work well these two colors work off of each other's other like light and dark do. You can actually brighten up the yellow areas and make them shine off very well with the red would create a great light effect off the yellow and onto the red. On another improvement option you may even want to think about adding some yellow to the background. Maybe just some pins or postits in the corners like it's a poster of some sort but anyways those are just a few ideas that may help and improve on a nice piece here great design though it's very cool indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some brighter points and some extra yellows

~X~

[Frank Sinatra]

Wow nice job

Now this was perfect you have captured it as it was in it's time and showed that old style really making it very realistic even the post you had on him and great face expressed was perfect and just so realistic it was great work here and I was very pleased with this outcome very nice work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This one gets a perfect review score because it's just that good and doesn't need any upgrades and changes

~X~

Kouta99 responds:

My friend thank you for your review I very much appreciate it

[QUICK PAINT - Pizza]

Wow very good

Now I must say this was a very good piece of painting and looks very realistic to a nice hot slice of pizza I think you could have made a plate under neith it as well for that extra touch the plain backround is not bad but could use more depth to it as well just an idea to think about in the future projects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround extra props

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VaporNinja responds:

Thanks a lot! Yeah I didn't really add a background cuz I didn't really think it would be necessary. I painted this one day when I got bored and didn't really think about adding a background lol.

[Madness.jpg]

Wow

Wow very nice work here I love how everything just jumps out at you in a dynamic form of things with the style and the wording comes out at you that should have some streaks in it as well. Colors were just right too and some nice textures as well so nice job here just ad some streaks to the bottom wording

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some streaks added to wording would be nice

~X~

[Inktober #3]

Very nice

Wow I must say the fine line work here is pretty powerful very detailed and every fine point reaches another and comes together in a very detailed way you have also created something that is pretty interesting and tells a story here wish there was some color in this as it would present more to this and even tell the story of what's going on but for everything done here you have done a fantastic piece and all the talent shines high on this one very nice indeed but again adding some color would be a plus even if it's just parts of your drawings like the flag or the helmet or just small focus points that will focus it as a whole better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color here and there would be a huge plus

~X~

[Diidarikia - Battle Mother of the Lupinossai]

Very nice

This here was a very nice design. The amount of time seems like it has took forever to etch all these little pieces here and there and pushing forward all the fine line work now this could be so much improved with some color or even parts of color within the detailed work you already have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color here would be a big plus here

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[April and Carp]

Fantastic piece

And here was a fantastic piece it really jumps out at you and you added some really nice shine in all the right places especially the hair very well done there and props to you. I think with the eyes and how shiny you have them you could really sparkle them up have them really glow and shine and just sparkle off that green one can really stand out your character design is really good and you show some nice detail here so just want say nice work nice eddort and just overall a really good design here so I'll end this here but keep making more great stuff like this so nice job all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some.more sparkle in the eyes

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Namenloose responds:

Thank you so much for the critique!
yeah, the way other artists can make the eyes very reflective and colorful at the same time is always really nice to look at. I'll definitely try and experiment with a way to get that in my illustrations.