XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kia AXR-34]

Nice detail

So this was cool I love all the detail in all this from props to expression to the look on the eyes now one thing that is missing from this is much more blood and blood droplets just all around even by hammer and such that would darken this up even more and just an idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood and blood droplets

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[Booty Trio Commission]

Cute

Well this was cute or they are all cute all different skintones too so that was nice this reminds me of a portrait so I think some framed edges are in order to make it feel more like a portrait of back ends lol but anyways nice work here and nice form here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some framed borders of some type to class it up a tad

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[Shapeshifting Shenanigans]

Cute

Well what can I say this is really cute love the color I like the shine and would really like more shine more glossy and besides that all this really needs is a jelly frame on the edges with some shine aswell not sure if that's will be too much jelly but still a cool idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some juicy and jelly framed edges like a portrait

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[Regina Blu]

Nice work

So visually this is pretty awesome and very well drawn color is good lots of backround detail and elements you really put alot into this the one thing I noticed about this was that it could use more facial expressions as the face was somewhat flat and just there give her more emotion to it other then that this was a good art piece because I really enjoyed seeing this and of course reviewing it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More improved facial expression

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[Do you think they Saurus?]

Awsome Dino

So this was both deadly and creative. First off creative for the amusing text bubble and really because we'll this dino is deadly and speaking of the dino I saw two areas where you can improve on for one the hook in his nose have that shine more and the skin textuture could have more of a deeper textuture to it but other then all that this was mighty impressive continue making great stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A couple of things mentioned like texture and shine

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[3d pigeon]

Nice model

Well this one here was a nice model and it seems to have this shine all over or matellic look I think with that style you could put some effects to really make it shine it's a unique charchter and design to it and I like it very much anyways hope you do something with this awsome looking charchter and even better art piece I enjoyed you work here today anyway keep up the cool models

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Use the shine and run with it as mentioned

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[It's war]

Nice design

So this was a nice design I like the fist I actually think if you had a red outline on this it might show off better but for what it is it's pretty nice work here can be great for a shirt maybe even some form of a tattoo just a suggestion though I like it so keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe different variations of colored ones or at least the outline of it

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[Chel]

Nice

This charracter is really good it actually looks and reminds me of the girl kid character from stich lilo was her name and now she's all grown up lol no but really this was a beautiful piece of work here very beautiful lines and with this one I don't see the need to change anything

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome charchter and this one needs no changes or upgraded it's a beautiful structure of a character

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[2B]

Very beautiful

Now this was very beautiful love this back view that you enjoy creating and have to say that it's a very alurring visual I wouldn't mind adding some shine across her hair though like left to right would inprove on this just a tad and that's just more of a suggestion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in her hair like a streak of shine

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[A Shower Show]

Very nice

And here was a nice form indeed I believe you have captured it exactly how a view like this should look love that blue or teal skintone really deep color and works well over the white background maybe adding more shine along the leg from top to bottom

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine along the legs

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