XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bed]

Entertaining

Really yellow backround on this one very nice And another entertaining comic series entry, you really know how to puch these forward and I was really impressed with all that you did here and the comic series as a whole, but focusing on this one these characters are great a lil crazy but very fun to see evolve and such.

~X~

[Jail]

Build onto it

And here you have something that you could really build onto, I mean dont get me wrong you have a nice piece here and the comic really comes alive but I could see you building onto it even more with much more action and maybe some other characters aswell, that would be a nice option.

~X~

[90s Girls]

Wow 90s

Okay, this does remind me of the 90s. Very good use of fads that were current then in your drawing here, such as the plaid and baggy clothing, ripped jeans, the glasses, the look of uncaring to be "COOL". I think your coloring is also very good here and uses a good light and shadow source. I wish the background was more than gradients and the color pink, but it does work for this 90 theme.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give us a background here, maybe some TMNT or Simpsons

~X~

[Hungry for Love]

Very colorfull

So this was a very colorfull piece I love the vibrant colors here, and love the character work here aswell but its the color that really drives this and it shows very artistcly, Maybe if you added some type of "BORDERS" that could reflect off of that aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is something of an idea, This was a pretty neat art piece, you should think about adding some Borders, you can even go all fancy and stuff with some design and color to them, or even related to the art piece and such, so its something to try and would bring more quality to the art piece. just an idea.

~X~

[Knife & Fork]

Nice job

So nice job indeed, this comic series is just a brilliant piece and this one at hand was not the best but it still has some good humor these characters are always great and make even the most bland of moments into something good, So good humor on this one, I look forward to even more.

~X~

[Oven]

Interesting

And in this comic you made an interesting one come alive with some adventure and the characters are great as always, and again the jokes are great, I can never get enough of this series, I had a rough time getting into it before but really have enjoyed it now onto the next one.

~X~

[Sleepy]

Cute

awww what adorable little creatures of bunny and cats you have here. I love the use of pink pixels for their bodies and the squinty eye looks they have on their faces. The overall look is good for pixels and I can see why you are showing all three in one image with a white background, but maybe next time move them around and make a full setting with a background and some interaction between creatures. I love it for the design, but wish it had more going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, mainly a background

~X~

clarigaricus responds:

Thanks for all your feedback. I made this very quickly and focusing solely on AA, that's why the final result is so empty.

[girlface.jpg]

Nice drawing

So here was a nice drawing or sketch, you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, And I would even throw in some color on this one, then some backround would be a huge plus also, but other then that this was notbad, I like your work here, so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should give her more expression on her face it looks a little flat, I would even go as far as to put some color into this, these are just some ideas.

~X~

[Dexter]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the red and black style here the backround could use more "TEXTURE" and more depth of color maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus. but other then that this was a nice art piece that you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding a few different reds in the backround to give it more depth to it would be a plus.

~X~

[Bellybutton]

Cool and nifty

And here we have once again another part of the comic and this entry really just jumped out at ya and really makes some good story here very amusing as always, and once again I will mention that you bring in some good humor thats always a plus especly for me anyways keep up the good work.

~X~