XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Y E L L O W]

Different

Well this was different I do have to say this was a bit different but I like it it's a creature of some sort seems like you can still do more with it I would start with more texture in the yellow skin tone but that's me you may not want to change anything keep up the good creations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved texture in skin tones

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[ENTER MY COMPETITION]

Artistic

So I really enjoy this piece love all the meshing of colors and it's just all over the place it's a little bit abstract even so this was a beautiful piece of art with some interesting aspects of art and style etc so you have some good work here keep up the good style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't change a thing it's artistic in it's own way

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[Kouhai V-day]

Nice

This was good and once again I want to say that the art color here is beautiful and done well I think as a form of improvement and a suggestion only you could have more drool and some depth in the white borders more detail in it but a nice art piece regardless of what is said

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more drool and more depth in the outter border

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[Trashtastic]

Amazing work

Well this was some amazing work the colors on this alone is pretty good love these faint colors it almost seems like this needs an outter norder or frame to accent the rest could be an idea to work on in the future but with all that said this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of outter border

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[A Pixel Grunt]

Awsome

Well I have to say that this was pretty amazing the pixel looks distorted in a way but that purple on the side is nice and I think there should be some kind of shine on his head since it's so large and up in your face so adding shine would be a huge plus on things other then that this was pretty cool anyways keep making art for the art portal it's different but nifty

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine on top of his head

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[Liberty]

Beautiful

Now this is beautiful wow I absolutely love this and love the view shot you did this you are a talented painter and it shows deeply I would like to see that flame on the torch be more flame like and really light up with a sort of glow to it just an idea to improve though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let the flame have a more flame and glow

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Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, thank you so much for the kind review and for favoriting. A glowing torch would've been nice, but I'm happy you like it overall.

Respect <3

[Sleepycat Dreams of Mars]

Meow

A nice art piece the texture is very rich and we'll detailed so you did hood with this one I like this because it reminds me of my friends cat and she lost it one day but anyways very nice work here I would suggest something but I find this to be just right

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on this beautiful painting

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Bertn1991 responds:

Meow indeed.

Beautiful painting is quite a compliment. Thank you so much as always. I'm happy this one needs no changes :)

[Pringles the Musical]

Nice painting

So here was a nice painting you have here very simplistic style but works well I think you should have some lighted up windows or at least be one or two lighted up windows I would even ho with a sun set in background too just as an extra little detail anyways nice painting

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some little things that spice it up like a lighted window

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Bertn1991 responds:

I suppose the church looks a bit dead since there are no lights in the windows. You're right. Thank you for the feedback as always. I'm surprised no one ever mentioned the title of this one. It has nothing to do with anything lol

[Maudeville - The Last Day]

Nice work for the band

So this was a nice cover photo for the band I like the soft color theme you have on this it really comes out well and looks good I wouldn't mind putting some crazy border or Slash's along the edges just for something to jump out more but anyways nice submission here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some element along the edges something similar to a frame or border but more like slashes or jagged frame

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Bertn1991 responds:

I very much appreciate that. I like the constructive criticism you give. Very kind and helpful. Thank you.

Also, the link in the description is to the actual album I recorded for them :)

[Delcoy The Pirate]

Color is amazing

So the color is amazing I love the color theme going on here the character is in a fun attacking pose love that sword you should think about adding some shine and sparkle to the end of that sword or some colored sparkle of some sort to reflect the color theme you have going on here anyways nice work here keep doing what you do best and that's brilliant art and color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine on tip of sword

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