XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maudeville - The Last Day]

Nice work for the band

So this was a nice cover photo for the band I like the soft color theme you have on this it really comes out well and looks good I wouldn't mind putting some crazy border or Slash's along the edges just for something to jump out more but anyways nice submission here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some element along the edges something similar to a frame or border but more like slashes or jagged frame

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Bertn1991 responds:

I very much appreciate that. I like the constructive criticism you give. Very kind and helpful. Thank you.

Also, the link in the description is to the actual album I recorded for them :)

[Delcoy The Pirate]

Color is amazing

So the color is amazing I love the color theme going on here the character is in a fun attacking pose love that sword you should think about adding some shine and sparkle to the end of that sword or some colored sparkle of some sort to reflect the color theme you have going on here anyways nice work here keep doing what you do best and that's brilliant art and color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine on tip of sword

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[Squirrel]

Very nice

I love the dark shades and colors here that really gives it that dark feel to it so nice touch there the little creative creature was a nice design and you gave him all the right expression so that worked out well maybe a light of beam could be pointed on him or something but other then that this was notbad at all very good drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above

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[Radio Fantastic!]

Ad a frame

So this is something you can really ad a nice frame too or border basically the same thing but it's like portrait and could use a frame to accent the main focus of things here just something to think about in future projects or if you redo this anyways good efforts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frame or border

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[Tally Yoshikawa]

Nice charchter

Now here was a nice charchter the size could be taller but the yellow background needs some work some type of meshed out mixture of texture would be key but something more then just the yellowish backing just feels like it needs more it's a nice piece though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Yellow background needs more meshed texture

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[McAlister House]

Love your style

I have to say I love your paint style you really push forward some nice detail I think as an idea of suggestion you could throw in a dog or even cow just to make it look more the part of the element other then that this was a solid piece that came out pretty well so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra anamals

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[Drunk Lexi]

Ok

So this is drunk Lexi. It's notbad she don't really look too drunk I could see you changing her expression on her face maybe show more havoc in the background like broken bottles maybe misplaced clothing etc just a few ideas I am throwing at you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra expression and background detail

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[panther]

Very deep

Now this was some very deep shades of shading and the eyes really came out very well the eyes really draw you in and on that note I think a form or suggested idea would be have the eyes colored and the rest black and white also adding some borders and or frame on your canvus would be another positive suggested idea but you do have a nice drawing here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra elements of color and or frames

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[my alien]

I really like the color

The color was really nice work here but it's also all the energy that you put fourth into each item and prop to make it all come together and the color adds to it adding some sparkle to different points to this like a bottle or aliens eyes would have a nice ending effect here and I suggest these as ideas only for you to decide what's best anyways nice art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine points

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[Hyper Piper]

Wow intense

Wow this was intense the character it self is a beautiful drawing and the light up points are really good very amazing lighting effects even in the background I think with those light up points you should ad much more glow to them more dim and brighter points just a suggestion to think about and well that's my review on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dim and lighter points of hlowing effect

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