XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Moon goddess]

Love the look

You really captured the look as she stares into ones eyes she has that starting motion really deep expression and you captured it all the extras around her really make this as a whole piece this was a very nice work of art love your detail and line work was spectacular so very well done I could see you adding a framed border

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A framed border would be nice

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amandadarko responds:

Thank you so much!!

[Asian Ariel]

Wow amazing

This was very amazing work it's a nice drawing and or painting but it's a very beautiful piece the flow of her hair was nice very textured as a form of improvement you could make the plants glow and surrounding elements glow would be a nice effect for this piece but other then that this was a beautiful piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effects would be nice

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[Its windy out there]

Very beautiful

Now I don't give off fives very often but this one gets my five stars because the art was already good but the ideas like the paper birds the curved borderline and the artistic background color tone so for that alone this is perfect in my eyes anyways very beautiful stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
None what so ever this is a beautiful piece all on it's own

~X~

[Warbled Bubberwing & Sour Jay]

Cute little guys

And here was some cute little charchter work they put a smile on my face lol but anyways adding more shine on there beaks wouldn't hurt and some type of background or back scenery wouldn't hurt either besides that this was a plus anyways nice charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on there beaks and some background detail

~X~

Bertn1991 responds:

I'm happy to hear that this was smile-inducing. Thanks for such a nice review. Some more shiniest would've been a nice touch. Thanks again :-)

[Calm Before the Storm]

Awsome perspective

I love these kinds of perspective views and you did well with this one love the shades and everything fits just right. My only issue here was that for a sidewalk or walk way it should have more cracks more gashes to show time has not been good to it but very nice perspective

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks and gashes in walkway

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Bertn1991 responds:

Thank you much. I rarely ever draw traditional artwork, so this was nice to read. I'm glad you enjoyed my pencil work here. I think you're right, though. Some more cracks and scratches would've been a wonderful touch.

Thank you for the feedback <3

[Simgirls @ Rosebery]

Good poses

I really love this view shot you have going on here the shadows are nice wish the shadows of the characters themself was more dominant the character work is very well done smooth lines and it was just very smooth looking so nice job here very good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dominant shadows of the characters

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[Lineslessness]

Really nice

This was nice very gallery style here seems like that white backing is like a border I wouldn't mind suggesting an idea and it's just an idea but maybe some purple border or frame on the edges to accent the other purple background anyways nice charchter work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra border to accent the focus

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[The Curse Of The Grim Reaper's Axe]

Very nice charchter

Infact this was a really good charchter love the weapons especially the axe I think you could ad a real sparkle to the axe part of things and much more shine to it even but besides all that this was a fantastic piece great charchter design here and nice weapons on that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Shine on the axe and even a sparkle

~X~

[Y E L L O W]

Different

Well this was different I do have to say this was a bit different but I like it it's a creature of some sort seems like you can still do more with it I would start with more texture in the yellow skin tone but that's me you may not want to change anything keep up the good creations

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved texture in skin tones

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[ENTER MY COMPETITION]

Artistic

So I really enjoy this piece love all the meshing of colors and it's just all over the place it's a little bit abstract even so this was a beautiful piece of art with some interesting aspects of art and style etc so you have some good work here keep up the good style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't change a thing it's artistic in it's own way

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