XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magnus' Regret]

DEEP

Looks like a story is here about a man and a lost love. Lost loves really hurt and you showed that pain with the tears in this mans eyes. The reaching out with one arm is a great touch to show he is indeed in pain. I think the shift in animation from one ghost apperition to the next is an interesting idea. I am not sure who is meant to be dead or if they both are. Maybe this is them reliving the past and his regret for his lose? I love the full coloring and full background with a room setting and all those little details. It is the details that matter in art and you have got that down here. his was an impressive piece of art, it has some nice detail, and an overall good visual effect, so very nice work here, maybe some extra enhancments here or there, but illadd some more info to that later. you have alot of Flair with this, so keep that going aswell. Now before I go, I do wish to say this was a pleasure to view and review, its stuff like this that keep me interested in reviewing awsome stuff just like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would improve on your feet, just the way you draw them.

~X~

[The New Americanna]

Very artistic

And here was a nice and artistic style. I really like the idea you have pushed here it really makes for a good element and thats what you did here. You added meaning with this one, the whole idea with head hunter is crazy but seems to work well, And so thats that you have made something special here with a unique style and the energy comes thru pretty hard, So I really enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love much more color into this but I understand you have a inspiration for this one.

~X~

AdventVoice responds:

You are right about the color. I just improved on this one https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/adventvoice/mary-magdalene cause of the color issue.. Now I am satisfied and feel I can sleep, having done a job well done. LOL. Thank you for your insight and please feel free to look around. My gallery is always open.

[Decayed Guardian]

Beautiful

So this piece right here was pretty awsome live the stand still form and really seems to come alive even though it's stand still the blade he carries could have a shine to it and I think by adding more shadow under him it would look even more better and last but not least maybe some color background or a scenery of some sort it was a pleasure to review your work here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and shadow additions would be nice

~X~

Borington responds:

Thank yo so much for the reviews!

[Skeptic]

Very nice

Wow this was great you have captured the expression just so perfectly and it truly comes off well the "nah" was a nice little touch and made it all the much better so for these portrait styles I always suggest a border or frame type to it would make a beautiful gallery style piece just an idea for you to think about but with all that said it was a pleasure to review this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some type of galley border or frames

~X~

[Flamethrower]

Realisim

So this was very realistic so damn real it's wickedly cool you do some amazing work just the texture alone is killer I personally wouldn't mind more shine and or sprakle on the flame thrower and mask maybe even some shine on the water even but this was a wicked sweet piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight more shine and sparkle here and there

~X~

[Static]

Very nice

That's very nice I like the black background seems like it's missing something maybe a small sun beam in background would suffice but the character was great and very cute so props to you on this piece I like it keep up the fantastic work I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of light beam in the background

~X~

[Pete]

Cute

And another cute piece this was simplistic but that's what I like about it and I think the only thing it really needs is some background maybe a pattern or design if you wanna keep it simple but does need something back there anyways keep making great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a background or design

~X~

Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, so many notifications. Thank you so much for all these reviews. You are the best <3

Yes, Pete's design is very simplistic since he's the main character of my cartoon show, Yonder Ho. He's super simple to draw. Yeah, a background would have looked nice, though :)

Thanks again.

[Marleen-San]

Nice

This was a nice piece like the red flowers and the background was nice just nice and simple and a nice looking charchter and with this one you don't need any suggestions for improvement so keep up the nice work and keep up the energy and style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pleasure to review this no need for changes

~X~

Bertn1991 responds:

Ooh, no need for changes. Such an honor. I'm happy you like it ^_^

Thanks for reviewing <3