XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 43]

Love the detail

He is kind of mean but he needs to get something done I lik how this one is going. So again very nice detail, the story on this one really took off, you really made the story jump out at you, you have a nice art style you have a nack for putting in some good detail, Love how this one starts off infact I love the ending even, so that is based on the story here keep that going its really solid stuff.

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[Oh Mai!!!]

Very cute

Now this was cute I like her expression but seems like you could have done more with her expression the light from the arcade could be brighter and beaming on her and maybe her skin tone could have more of a tan these are just suggested ideas it's actually pretty beautiful as is now so good charchter work here I enjoyed it hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things I suggested and may help improve on this fine piece

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[Connie the Street Fairy]

Amazing work

And once again you have made some amazing work some amazing drwan detail the wings are a great touch but maybe you should have some light come down and sparkle off the wings seems like it would work with all the dark and light effects in this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting comming off the wings to sparkle them

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[Commission - Armoured Renamon]

Wow just wow

Now this is just something really crazy good I love this gold look but you should give it a much more shine and glare and even sparkle to it it's just so well made the armor looks wickedly cool and you did an outstanding job on this charracter anyways ad more shine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine and sparkle to all that gold armor

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[Foot care]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the splatter and splash color drops that's a nice effect the character work here or portrait is very well done great look on her face too it's a beautiful piece all together so this was a great piece it should have some type of borders or frames though and that's just an idea for improvement anyways keep making artistic stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders for the edges

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[mr.gaspacho]

Really cool

I like this and think this was really cool I like the planets and sun but you have a very artistic style about you especially with this piece of art I like the texture of the paint style now what I would love to see you improve on would be the sun have it shipped and glow more maybe even a few other areas but really uou have an artistic style about your work and it's brilliant

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more brightness on the sun

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[Mario]

Love it

I'm a big fan of Mario so this was a delightful Mario entry and a good visual of him loved what you did with the stasch but also love the deep colors now as a suggestion I think you can ad onto this with a frame or border like if it was a gallery piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad frames and or borders

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[GoooOOoooOOOoo]

Wow love it

Have to say this one was really good love the good and shine on this makes it very juicy i think as an added improvment to the invirment your could add some good dropping on growing just as an extra effect or something just thaught I would throw that in

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some good dropping around

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[Dinky The Minotaur]

Really great charchter

Well this was a really great charchter I think the rings on the nips should have a shiny sparkle to them though but besides that this was a well done charchter of design very nice stuff indeed and I will look forward to even more so keep making great charchters

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and or sparkle on the nips rings

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[Commission - Free Milk]

Very nice

And here was something really nice the white furr is cool but you have a background that is white too and that doesn't seem to work all that well and I think you can improve on it with a different color base of background just some advice or an idea to help

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the color base of the background so it don't cross with white over white

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