XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tiny RWBY Jobs Crossover (Batch #10)]

Very nice work

So this was cool I really like all these characters very well detailed and color all around so some very well designed charchter work the interface of the layout was nice too I would go with thicker borders honestly but this was very good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The border lines could be thicker

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[Cupid Arrow Problems]

Very nice

So first off that weapon of the demon I like the blood effect it's pretty realistic you should have it dripping even more but for what it is it's a nice visual as for the comic it was nice and nice idea too so it went off well for the Valentine's day moment anyways good art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood

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[White Devil Mask]

Awesome detail

So this was awesome I love the detail here the mask itself was really good love that texture on the mask and the linework is amazing my advice or suggestions would be have both eyes red and have them brighter just an idea though anyways nice design here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter on the eyes and both redish

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[Critical Role - Glaive Sale]

Nice

So the comic itself was really nice love the dark and deep colors in this one I think the story was notbad either and kind of funny too a good comic here and wouldn't mind if it was a tad bit longer more depth into the story or something but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A longer story so more frames in the comic

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[Abaporu]

Wow amazing

This was very good I love the view of this and that sun could shine more on the stone and have a glare comming off of the stone from the sun it would be a nice effect on a beautiful piece the border was ok but I would ad a real border or frame not as think but something with a little depth besides that this was a plus and I enjoyed reviewing it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border or frame and some shine from the sun

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[IM BACK BABY]

Nice

Wow I have to say this is pretty impressive the helmet face guard the yellow part should have a glow on it maybe a sparkle too that would be the only change I would upgrade on this piece the pixel work here is pretty awesome though the it's a good charchter you have here and hope you can ad some shine on this anyways keep up the good efforts

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow and shine changes would be nice

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[Kylo Ren Fanart]

This was cool

So this was cool I really like the work here you really did a good job here and with the light sabre I wouldn't mind an even better glow on it like it's vibrating the glow off and more red beam reflect off the helmet that would be a nice job and a nice touch with lighting and glow just a suggestion and idea here for you to think on anyways keep it real

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the sabres and reflection on the helm

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[Spilled Milk]

Entertaining

So here was another entertaining I love the sayings on the red wall or building nice work indeed the characters funny and this was pretty good of an entry just another great comic strip you have here not as funny as some of the other ones but was still good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The ending could be better maybe more humor in this one

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[Knife Etiquette]

Cute

This was kind of nifty the characters are cute the comic is nice but wish you had it run longer seems like you could have extended it Abit but the characters were well structured I didn't understand the comic as it was confusing but still nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the comic longer

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Wowie, a comment on an oldie, you pleasantly surprised me there. Not to make your criticism invalid, but in this short comic, it's more of a funny one-off comic Theodd1sout esque where it's to entertain but with no story.
But if you do want a longer comic, see me recent comic "Girlfriends", definitely longer

[Dance]

Very nice

Well this was very nice work I like the character work here the hands are not too bad the nose on the male looked Abit off but maybe I'm seeing things I don't a moonlight setting would be nice though and that's about it for this one it was a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A moonset would be nice

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