XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[money shot]

Entertaining

I have to say that this one was rather entertaining the little animation that you added to this art piece was nice the quality was really good and the little animation was smooth as for a form of improvment I really wouldn't change anything it's a solid piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed on this piece

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[SUKEBAN]

Hmmmm

Well notbad work here and a nice charchter here good structure even the background was decent now this one does tell a little story even the blood on the stick shows something happened so my suggestion is more blood on ground maybe even the can just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a few suggestions with blood and such

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[Rival Schools]

Oh very nice

Now this was cool I like the variety of things on this one lots of charchter styles and even a nice border I was not fond of the border being white you could really spice that border up with a design and a pattern within it but anyways nice work here I enjoyed this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some depth in the bland border

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[Kiss]

You have good talent

So you have some really good talent the color just meshes so well and the texture is just beautiful especially on the skin tone I really think you should make more then one piece because this is a beautiful drawing and colorfull but anyways untill next time keep up the positive vibes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like this

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[The Witch from Summer Cliffs]

Very nice detail

So this one was very cool looks like a lot of action going on and you can really see it in the storm and flame now as a suggestion the flames could be much brighter and much more flame on cause it could use more light up other then that this was really solid piece and I do look forward to more of your work so keep making fantastic pieces here on the grounds for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Light up the flame brighter much brighter

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[Lady Justice]

I like this

So this was very nice I really like this I like the blindfold and the sword and the other justice goblet now those two pieces I could see you adding some some shine glare and even some sparkle let the light reflection off them and let them shine but other then that this was a well made charchter very nice details anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sword needs some shine and the justice goblet needs some sparkle

~X~

[Daphne]

Smooth

Now this was a very smooth piece it has a very realistic like-ness to the real Daphne very good charchter and also the background went very well even came off very well with nice detail I think you could ad more to the background design more shapes and or pattern styles but that's just a suggestion for improvement on this already beautiful piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more design and pattern in the background

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