XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober Day 3]

These are cool

Well I have to say that these are really cool, I have never been too familuar with all the contests that go on here on the grounds but guess this was one of them and have to say this was nifty and kinda interesting to see differnt styles of drawings and whatnot, anyways nice work here.

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[Marauder MK 2]

Funky

Nice robot you have going on here, but it does need a bit of work. I mean it is obvious you can draw and your robotic elements and parts you have put into this robot are very good. I just find the transfer of this to digital means a bit OFF. I mean, the background looks like you just dragged some lines around it with photoshop but didn`t actually use photoshop to digitally color in your art. I think next time you should give a try at more digital work if you are going to try to mesh them together. I love the sword and the glow it has drawn, but maybe put a shine and glow effect into that sword to really give it some pizzaz.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just try making more of a colored piece with photoshop

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[Tricky in the Sun]

Very nice sun

Wow I have to say that this was pretty good, that sun beam is really bright and you have it beam down pretty good, I think more "CIRCLE" glares could be more spread out and such, but other then that this was a very good "3-D" piece anyways keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra glare circles around would be nice.

~X~

[Toxic Cloud]

Cool

And another entry of this fun yet emtertaining comic series how long does it take you to make one, I can imagine with all the color ones takes a bit anyways nice work here on this on those crazy characters of yours alwas in some moment or another lol, but anyways nice job as always.

~X~

[April Fools]

Beautifil piece again

And here we are with another great piece to the ever growing comic series you bring out the humor in every one including this one as I go thru these they get better and better so very nice work here and I really do look forward to even more from you on this fine and dandy series.

~X~

[Hands Practice]

GREAT

I think you are a very talented artist, don`t be so hard on yourself, your description sounded like you didn`t like this, but I did enjoy it. I think the hand was drawn very well and the other person taking it was drawn good as well, and the body you have drawn with it has great details, textures, and good line work. I do think it is a bit blurry from how you are showing this to us, so I would think maybe next time scan this art, do not take a picture of it, as the work is getting a bit lost in your camera`s blurr.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Scan this next time, and maybe add some color.

~X~

[Sloane Warrik]

Very nice

So this was a cool face or portrait I like the scar and the blue eyes, I think you should darken up the skin tone just a tad and show more blemishes and more "WOUNDS" and such just something that will represent a warriors face if you will, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should darken up the skin tone just a tad and show more blemishes and more wound and cuts.

~X~

[Birdsong]

haha nice

Well I do have to say that these mini comic ones are kind of nifty again it reminds me of that old style stuff from newspaper comics but very nice use of color and well executed joke even so anyways nice work and I do think you should make more of these mini ones they are fun.

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[Flare Gun]

Very nice

Wow I have to say that this one was really amusing and funny, it actually does remind me of those old sunday comics on the newspaper the way you have it set up, so good toon here nice color and good characters as always and well executed joke even, so nice joke here.

~X~

[Random Guy]

Dark

I love the dark and lonely feeling that this gives off, you can see the pain in his eyes and more so when you add the coloring in there of the `RED`. I love your wings in the red too, but I think they need a bit more polishing, more shaping, this part feels a bit rushed. I do think it is good overall and having the original beside your try at coloring with photoshop was a nice touch. The BLOOD here and there over him also worked out well and gave this its darker element. I love the flow between the before and after art and it all works good. I wish there was more color, maybe more line work over the greys, darker elements here and there. I do love this though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More colors, more work on the wings, good job for coloring though.

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