XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pete]

Cute

And another cute piece this was simplistic but that's what I like about it and I think the only thing it really needs is some background maybe a pattern or design if you wanna keep it simple but does need something back there anyways keep making great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a background or design

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Bertn1991 responds:

Wow, so many notifications. Thank you so much for all these reviews. You are the best <3

Yes, Pete's design is very simplistic since he's the main character of my cartoon show, Yonder Ho. He's super simple to draw. Yeah, a background would have looked nice, though :)

Thanks again.

[Marleen-San]

Nice

This was a nice piece like the red flowers and the background was nice just nice and simple and a nice looking charchter and with this one you don't need any suggestions for improvement so keep up the nice work and keep up the energy and style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pleasure to review this no need for changes

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Bertn1991 responds:

Ooh, no need for changes. Such an honor. I'm happy you like it ^_^

Thanks for reviewing <3

[Hermit]

Love the texture

You went all out on this the texture on the furr and clothing is some of the best I have seen on this site so deep and layered it's just uncanny so props to you on that element the character design is awesome and we'll done as a slight change I think more glow from the eyes would be a plus but even without that this is a spectacular piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small change but not needed with the eyes

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[Moon goddess]

Love the look

You really captured the look as she stares into ones eyes she has that starting motion really deep expression and you captured it all the extras around her really make this as a whole piece this was a very nice work of art love your detail and line work was spectacular so very well done I could see you adding a framed border

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A framed border would be nice

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amandadarko responds:

Thank you so much!!

[Asian Ariel]

Wow amazing

This was very amazing work it's a nice drawing and or painting but it's a very beautiful piece the flow of her hair was nice very textured as a form of improvement you could make the plants glow and surrounding elements glow would be a nice effect for this piece but other then that this was a beautiful piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effects would be nice

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[Its windy out there]

Very beautiful

Now I don't give off fives very often but this one gets my five stars because the art was already good but the ideas like the paper birds the curved borderline and the artistic background color tone so for that alone this is perfect in my eyes anyways very beautiful stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
None what so ever this is a beautiful piece all on it's own

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[Warbled Bubberwing & Sour Jay]

Cute little guys

And here was some cute little charchter work they put a smile on my face lol but anyways adding more shine on there beaks wouldn't hurt and some type of background or back scenery wouldn't hurt either besides that this was a plus anyways nice charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on there beaks and some background detail

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Bertn1991 responds:

I'm happy to hear that this was smile-inducing. Thanks for such a nice review. Some more shiniest would've been a nice touch. Thanks again :-)

[Calm Before the Storm]

Awsome perspective

I love these kinds of perspective views and you did well with this one love the shades and everything fits just right. My only issue here was that for a sidewalk or walk way it should have more cracks more gashes to show time has not been good to it but very nice perspective

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks and gashes in walkway

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Bertn1991 responds:

Thank you much. I rarely ever draw traditional artwork, so this was nice to read. I'm glad you enjoyed my pencil work here. I think you're right, though. Some more cracks and scratches would've been a wonderful touch.

Thank you for the feedback <3

[Simgirls @ Rosebery]

Good poses

I really love this view shot you have going on here the shadows are nice wish the shadows of the characters themself was more dominant the character work is very well done smooth lines and it was just very smooth looking so nice job here very good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dominant shadows of the characters

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[Lineslessness]

Really nice

This was nice very gallery style here seems like that white backing is like a border I wouldn't mind suggesting an idea and it's just an idea but maybe some purple border or frame on the edges to accent the other purple background anyways nice charchter work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra border to accent the focus

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