XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SUKEBAN]

Hmmmm

Well notbad work here and a nice charchter here good structure even the background was decent now this one does tell a little story even the blood on the stick shows something happened so my suggestion is more blood on ground maybe even the can just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a few suggestions with blood and such

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[Rival Schools]

Oh very nice

Now this was cool I like the variety of things on this one lots of charchter styles and even a nice border I was not fond of the border being white you could really spice that border up with a design and a pattern within it but anyways nice work here I enjoyed this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some depth in the bland border

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[Kiss]

You have good talent

So you have some really good talent the color just meshes so well and the texture is just beautiful especially on the skin tone I really think you should make more then one piece because this is a beautiful drawing and colorfull but anyways untill next time keep up the positive vibes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like this

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[The Witch from Summer Cliffs]

Very nice detail

So this one was very cool looks like a lot of action going on and you can really see it in the storm and flame now as a suggestion the flames could be much brighter and much more flame on cause it could use more light up other then that this was really solid piece and I do look forward to more of your work so keep making fantastic pieces here on the grounds for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Light up the flame brighter much brighter

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[Lady Justice]

I like this

So this was very nice I really like this I like the blindfold and the sword and the other justice goblet now those two pieces I could see you adding some some shine glare and even some sparkle let the light reflection off them and let them shine but other then that this was a well made charchter very nice details anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sword needs some shine and the justice goblet needs some sparkle

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[Daphne]

Smooth

Now this was a very smooth piece it has a very realistic like-ness to the real Daphne very good charchter and also the background went very well even came off very well with nice detail I think you could ad more to the background design more shapes and or pattern styles but that's just a suggestion for improvement on this already beautiful piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more design and pattern in the background

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