XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[She-Ra - Cartoon PinUp]

Very nice work

So this was very nice work I love the old style look and visual here her attitude is amazing I do think you could ad some shine or sparkle on her crown that would be a nice touch just an idea or suggestion here so go with it and see where it takes off and such it's a nice piece though and hope to see more from you real soon anyways untill next time

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Some shine and sparkle on the crown

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HugoTendaz responds:

Thank you. I agree on the shine, it's a good suggestion.

[Patreon: I want to Catch you as my Gift]

Wow

You do some amazing work the form on the character is alurring and some really nice color here and some amazing lines everything looks very smooth the detail from the eyes and nose and all little features you have done well on this piece but anyways nice work here I really am glad to have found this piece it really stood out and look forward to reviewing more from you

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No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Buff Asuka]

Really nice work here

I like this and this was really nice work I like the muscles and even the black and white but I think a nice effect over black in white like some color and in this case the shorts and top could be a red or pink would accent the whole piece a lot better just an idea though

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Some red or pinkish shorts and top

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[Thief of Void & The Dream Weaver (page 2)]

Beautiful piece

Wow this was really amazing I really love this and I really love the deep art the deep charchter work and those borders that's what I tell alot of comic people to do and you have the right idea so nice work there the story itself is a beautiful piece of artwork so very good charchter work and it really does bring all the story together I really like this and hope you make more sometime soon cause I can't wait for the next one

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Those borders are already great maybe a glow around them

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AdventVoice responds:

Hmm a glow would be nice...Borders are very important and sometimes I think I have this OCD about lines, I get mad about my lines sometimes cause I want them to be oh so perfect. Again I blame my software for the digital lining issues...but there are awesome ways to compensate for poor programming.
I am glad you love this one. This story is very important to me and I hope I can live up to Thief Of Voids review of my works and continue to create pieces that bring Icarus to mind.
Your Head-Hunter is bad-asshat, though. She was so ready to do me in because she felt I did not capture her best side. I told her she will be seen again, but she is not going to be in every panel. She would like to be though.
As the story continues, you will see more of Thief of Void and the Dream Weaver as they discuss further what it feels like to be able to say, "I survived!"

[Connie the Alchemist]

Awsome

Well I have to say this was a beautiful piece here a good structure of the character a good amount of shine I would have to say that adding more shine like on the glasses and the green flame from the pot but overall this was some really nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow and shine as mentioned

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[Brigitte Lindholm]

This was nice

I wouldn't mind seeing more in the background it was a nice charchter a good pose good facial expression and overall a good charchter work you have here I do like the work here but would love to see some background detail or rather more detail in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail

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[Pet]

Awesome fish

The fish was really cool the character was notbad either very nice detail that you have in this whole piece even the background was notbad so a very good piece and I don't think this needs any changes as it is really a solid piece and I found it to be delightful piece of art work but anyways keep up the brilliant artwork

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No changes on. This one it fine as is

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[Dark Souls DS The Black-clothed Flickering Requiem]

Amazing work as always

And once again you have some amazing work here I really like your work here this was some really good work and amazing visuals the detail is stellar and the whole piece speaks volumes if energy and style so props to you on this beautiful piece of artwork here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[51 Black Panther and Shuri]

Very nice

And here was some nice work indeed I love the character designs I think that face print in the background could be improved with a glow effect on the outline of it it's just a suggestion but think it would show off the main piece much better and something to think about trying out

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Some glow outline on the face print

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