XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dinky The Minotaur]

Really great charchter

Well this was a really great charchter I think the rings on the nips should have a shiny sparkle to them though but besides that this was a well done charchter of design very nice stuff indeed and I will look forward to even more so keep making great charchters

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and or sparkle on the nips rings

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[Commission - Free Milk]

Very nice

And here was something really nice the white furr is cool but you have a background that is white too and that doesn't seem to work all that well and I think you can improve on it with a different color base of background just some advice or an idea to help

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the color base of the background so it don't cross with white over white

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[mirrorbox]

This was cool

Nice work here I really love your use of color here the yellow wording over green backround was nice the shine could be better and more dominant on the tagging and the white border you have could be the same yellow ish as the tagging but other then that this was a fantastic piece of tagging work very visually great so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few changes and additional effects

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[Pandass]

Very nice work

Wow I must say this was a pretty good piece of work here what did you use? If I may ask as it has a paint style maybe some different marker but regardless this was a beautiful piece the art is so artistic and really looks good at first eye point so nice job here I like the work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes here as this was a nice piece of art very artistic

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[Mable Pixel art]

This was cute

Well I have to say that this was cute I like the art it's simple and not complicated it has some nice simplistic style here and you really show that simple side and that's cool now as for the background I think you could have added more depth and detail to the background as it was simple but maybe some shades and textuture would have been a cool idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shades and textures in the background

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[Alien Commission]

Wow

Wow this is amazing I have to say this piece was pretty amazing it's for sure becoming a fave of mine I love the shine the eyes are nice I would have the eyes light up more maybe even glow more but for sure something more then what they are

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas and changes

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[Selvi as Medusa]

Very nice

Well I have to say this one is one of my faves I love Medusa and you did a fantastic job on this one I think you can improve on this one like have the snakes eyes glow and for sure add some detail in the background and ad props so that there's a little more in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added background props and detail maybe even some design or pattern but also make the snakes eyes glow

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[Have a Juicy 'Ween]

Very nice idea

So this was a really good idea you have here I like it love the design as well a few extra added stuff like have the pumnkin glow from the mouth and eyes and more dripping off pink goo off the sides of the pumnkin more would be a nifty idea to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I suggested a few ideas here hope it helps

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[Holly's New Shirt]

Very nice

This was a very nice charchter I really like the view here I like that little glow surrounding her whole body my suggestion or advise is make the glow thicker and more radiant that would accent the character much better and some background detail would also be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added glow and some background work

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[Australantian Christmas]

Awsome

Wow the colors are so fresh on this one love the blues on this one love that flowing water I think this art piece is missing something though I think that there could be a sail boat in the background and some extra shine on the beach ball just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some suggestions above on some props and shine

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