XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 43]

Love the detail

He is kind of mean but he needs to get something done I lik how this one is going. So again very nice detail, the story on this one really took off, you really made the story jump out at you, you have a nice art style you have a nack for putting in some good detail, Love how this one starts off infact I love the ending even, so that is based on the story here keep that going its really solid stuff.

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[Oh Mai!!!]

Very cute

Now this was cute I like her expression but seems like you could have done more with her expression the light from the arcade could be brighter and beaming on her and maybe her skin tone could have more of a tan these are just suggested ideas it's actually pretty beautiful as is now so good charchter work here I enjoyed it hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things I suggested and may help improve on this fine piece

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[Connie the Street Fairy]

Amazing work

And once again you have made some amazing work some amazing drwan detail the wings are a great touch but maybe you should have some light come down and sparkle off the wings seems like it would work with all the dark and light effects in this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting comming off the wings to sparkle them

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[Commission - Armoured Renamon]

Wow just wow

Now this is just something really crazy good I love this gold look but you should give it a much more shine and glare and even sparkle to it it's just so well made the armor looks wickedly cool and you did an outstanding job on this charracter anyways ad more shine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine and sparkle to all that gold armor

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[Foot care]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the splatter and splash color drops that's a nice effect the character work here or portrait is very well done great look on her face too it's a beautiful piece all together so this was a great piece it should have some type of borders or frames though and that's just an idea for improvement anyways keep making artistic stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders for the edges

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[mr.gaspacho]

Really cool

I like this and think this was really cool I like the planets and sun but you have a very artistic style about you especially with this piece of art I like the texture of the paint style now what I would love to see you improve on would be the sun have it shipped and glow more maybe even a few other areas but really uou have an artistic style about your work and it's brilliant

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more brightness on the sun

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[Dark Phoenix]

Comic style

So this was cool because from the colors alone it reminds me of some comic style stuff really bright colors and those purple orbs of power are pretty nifty you should have those glow more to show off more of it's power but other then that this was good and solid work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing orbs

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hagarrastamnz responds:

hey there
thanks for the advice, i'm always trying my best and i really like when people give me feedback. i appreciate your help. i'm currently trying to improve on my anatomy so feel free to see some of my other works and share a thing or two with me.
thanks again.

[Mario]

Love it

I'm a big fan of Mario so this was a delightful Mario entry and a good visual of him loved what you did with the stasch but also love the deep colors now as a suggestion I think you can ad onto this with a frame or border like if it was a gallery piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad frames and or borders

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[GoooOOoooOOOoo]

Wow love it

Have to say this one was really good love the good and shine on this makes it very juicy i think as an added improvment to the invirment your could add some good dropping on growing just as an extra effect or something just thaught I would throw that in

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some good dropping around

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[Dinky The Minotaur]

Really great charchter

Well this was a really great charchter I think the rings on the nips should have a shiny sparkle to them though but besides that this was a well done charchter of design very nice stuff indeed and I will look forward to even more so keep making great charchters

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and or sparkle on the nips rings

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