XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Success!]

Simplistic

So this was pretty decent and simplistic but you made it into something more, something with a good visual I like what you did with that crystal or orb, you should have that type of glow on the blue lines in the backround, but other then that this was a nice art piece and nice character work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some glow on the blue lines in the backround.

~X~

[Invader Zim]

ZIM

Invader Zim has always been a good show and the drawings have always been unique. I think for your fan art you've created a good use of lines and it is nice to see you used the robot elements here rather then just a simple "ZIM" drawing of him standing or whatever. I think there could be a background here, maybe of his house...and where is "GIR" we need to have him in here, there is no Zim without his Gir. Love the coloring, love the shading, love the positioning and all. Im not the biggest fan of this style, but I always keep the bias out of my reviews. But I must say this did catch my attention to some point so nice job on that part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You do need a background and Gir should be in there somewhere.

~X~

[A Demon]

Nice work

Wow I have to say this was some nice work, I like the darkness of this, and his staff that star at top of the staff could have a sparkle and shine on it though, and you could use some backround work on this one, but honestly you have some nice shades and nice structure on the character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work maybe some scene of darkness, and have that star shine or glow.

~X~

[Progress :D]

Unique

I like this idea here of showing your older art and doing it in a new way. It does show how you've grown as an artist and how far you've come. I love the details in each and the coloring. I find the new art should have had the same background, but for the newer piece you went with a circle. Is that to say you've come full-circle? I think you should have given a shot at the same background as the last one in a new way, but perhaps it did not fit in with your new more improved style. I love pokemon and I love this so good job and keep it up. Maybe many years down the line you can add a third piece to see how much more you've improved over the years. Sofar I like what I have come across, this type of style does great at times and other times its just so-so but again I like what I have seen here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe do the same background as the original art to really compare your skills but it is just as good as is.

~X~

[Oni]

Very artistic

This is some really good work that you have here, I like the deformed creature he is scary and I would never want to meet him face on, the backround is pretty good aswell, I honestly cant find anything to suggest for improvement on this one but I do have to say maybe a little bit more texture in that backround.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more texture in that backround more depth more little details

~X~

[Holocaust Remembrance]

Nice and red

So that seems like some chains under the hands I could see you making the chains more sparkly and shine and such all that good stuff but this was a cool piece of art with a nice meaning, I would ad some borders and or frames or even a window frame like you are looking in on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A window from would be interesting

~X~

[Gum]

Cool beans

you have achieved another fantastic comic episode here in this fine comic series, I am just amazed with all that you do on this series and you must be proud, love how this particular story has played out, and you bring that humor that is always a great touch of things so nice work there.

~X~

[Sword in the Stone]

Fantastic series

And here we are with another fantastic pice of the comic, I have enjoyed most of what you show us and with this submission you made me chuckle a bit so after all these entries you can still bring the humor and action and thats whats really important here, so nice work indeed.

~X~

[Food Bank]

A nifty piece

And here we have another nifty piece of a comic, you have shown us all that you enjoy this comic series as you put in the work and put in the numbers so nice effort all the way around and You can really see the characters evolve so very good stuff and nice humor in this one.

~X~

[My new avatar 2018]

Notbad

This Avatar isn't too bad, I love the unique eyes with the lines going inside him, like a life line being displayed. I love the colors and body shape of your cartoon with the beefed up torso and his hair. The hair has some good outlines with effects in the skin, hair, and outfit. I like the shines you added here and there on the body and overall. I think the background is simple for transitions but could use a bit more, than again, this is just an avatar so you might be trying to focus in on your avatar only. Decent flash here, would like to see this go even further with more detail, more effort and more of this unique style, just keep up the great work, and keep making these awsome art pieces. A Spiffy submission you have here you havve an interesting style that I have come to enjoy, Yoyr style is Defined in a unique way, so keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more of a background to this but fine without one.

~X~