XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[StarTank]

Neat

Okay this one here is very neat and shows a good small animation. I think the use of color was an odd choice, very old-style browns and darker tones. The girl beside the tank is very cute and looks like she is thinking about something. I wonder what...but the tank intself has great details and textures and is good pixel art. I just wish this had more color going on, but that might be your point for future projects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a bit more color to this piece.

~X~

[Scurvy]

Nice character here

A nice character here, I like the shades on his face like if he is looking out a window or something the white backround I thaught could be different though, maybe some backdrop of a room or some scenery of some type, just an idea here to throw at you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work would be nice.

~X~

[Inktober Day 12]

Cool beans

And another cool inktober, this one had some color too I like that, it was kind of nifty the added color is cool and makes it come out a bit more so nice job there, Cant wait for next years as this would be cool to see again and all the random drawings and such. anyways nifty work you have here.

~X~

[Inktober Day 3]

These are cool

Well I have to say that these are really cool, I have never been too familuar with all the contests that go on here on the grounds but guess this was one of them and have to say this was nifty and kinda interesting to see differnt styles of drawings and whatnot, anyways nice work here.

~X~

[Marauder MK 2]

Funky

Nice robot you have going on here, but it does need a bit of work. I mean it is obvious you can draw and your robotic elements and parts you have put into this robot are very good. I just find the transfer of this to digital means a bit OFF. I mean, the background looks like you just dragged some lines around it with photoshop but didn`t actually use photoshop to digitally color in your art. I think next time you should give a try at more digital work if you are going to try to mesh them together. I love the sword and the glow it has drawn, but maybe put a shine and glow effect into that sword to really give it some pizzaz.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just try making more of a colored piece with photoshop

~X~

[Tricky in the Sun]

Very nice sun

Wow I have to say that this was pretty good, that sun beam is really bright and you have it beam down pretty good, I think more "CIRCLE" glares could be more spread out and such, but other then that this was a very good "3-D" piece anyways keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra glare circles around would be nice.

~X~

[Toxic Cloud]

Cool

And another entry of this fun yet emtertaining comic series how long does it take you to make one, I can imagine with all the color ones takes a bit anyways nice work here on this on those crazy characters of yours alwas in some moment or another lol, but anyways nice job as always.

~X~

[April Fools]

Beautifil piece again

And here we are with another great piece to the ever growing comic series you bring out the humor in every one including this one as I go thru these they get better and better so very nice work here and I really do look forward to even more from you on this fine and dandy series.

~X~

[Hands Practice]

GREAT

I think you are a very talented artist, don`t be so hard on yourself, your description sounded like you didn`t like this, but I did enjoy it. I think the hand was drawn very well and the other person taking it was drawn good as well, and the body you have drawn with it has great details, textures, and good line work. I do think it is a bit blurry from how you are showing this to us, so I would think maybe next time scan this art, do not take a picture of it, as the work is getting a bit lost in your camera`s blurr.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Scan this next time, and maybe add some color.

~X~

[Sloane Warrik]

Very nice

So this was a cool face or portrait I like the scar and the blue eyes, I think you should darken up the skin tone just a tad and show more blemishes and more "WOUNDS" and such just something that will represent a warriors face if you will, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should darken up the skin tone just a tad and show more blemishes and more wound and cuts.

~X~