XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magic Crotchet Hearts]

Different

Okay so you dont normally see this type of thing, but it did catch my eye and made me think. I love the pink thread you used and the fact you made more than one to display to use. I think you did some good effort here as you dont see any errors or blunders in the work. I wish you put maybe a border or something around it to showcase the photo in a more artistic way, so you had your art in the photo and the photo itself being art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Border on this would really give it something extra

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xXDani91Xx responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I love using pink, white and purple thread the most. I like your idea about the border. Maybe I will try it when I get back to crocheting more one day. :)

[Skull]

Cool

I think this is pretty cool, it has a matellic look to it so in that aspect of things I think you can improve on a few changes here like give it much more shine and glare, and also make the canvus much bigger that way you can much more dteail to this. but honestly this is pretty nifty work here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you can improve on a few changes here like give it much more shine and glare, and also make the canvus much bigger that way you can much more dteail to this.

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[Daynight]

Very nice

I like the differnce its a nice change to have from night and day. So this was a good visual and all rolled up into one big entry of some nifty things, you have delivered some unmatched creativity and quality aswell, I had a good pleasure reviewing this.

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[Untitled]

Haha funny

These ones you do with trump are always kind of funny, I also love that just the scarf was in color, you expressed it well with the visual here, so nice job here on this one, I have seen a number of Art pieces come through here and there, And this one is not perfect But I do like the elements on this one, While not perfect but you have shown that what you have here does work, And you do get your idea across the board.

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[Fire Mage]

Rage

You can feel the fire and rage and evil in this character here. It reminds me of my REGULAR friend and her emo mood swings. I love the face she is making with that big ass evil smile WITH TEETH!!! The boobs going out like that draw your eye in a sexy way and makes you want to see her more. The fire background fits in with the fire mage aspect. I think you need more glowing effects here on the fire and spell. I love the small wetness on her face and her overall outfit is sexy hot, fitting with your fire theme. Great job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think more glows in the fire and spell would make this pop

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[Chromish]

Decent

So not sure what this is, its pretty nifty though and is kid of unique in its own way, I like the "GREEN" element here I do think the canvus could be much larger though so you can ad more detail all around and see more of the detail close up, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger canvus would be nice.

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[MMXVI]

Nice

This was cool, a good sketch if i say so myself I think some added color on this would be nice even if its just part like the 2016 or the fire itself, but besides all that this was a nice drawing and or sketch you are talented and your work only gets better with time and progress so its been a pleasure to review your work.

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[Some sketchin']

Very nice

Now this was a nice sketch lots of great character work here love all the detail and how each one is a bit different then the other they all have character, now this is something that would really look good in some color, maybe even adding a frame or border on it would be cool, and accent the characters well.

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[Dikachu]

Lol

Now how does one catch that? hhahahahaha I think this is great, it gave me a chuckle and smile. I love your use of "BALLS" and the coloring of the balls with the yellow dick shafts lol. I think you are skilled at design by turning something cute into a dick, literally. I love the coloring and all, but you do need a background, maybe a giant vagina or another pokemon that is a body part? Just an idea here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more stuff in your background, you need a giant vagina

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amandadarko responds:

Thank you so much lmao. Well they are just doodles. Whenever someone commissions something they can choose to have a background. This is an example to get people interested.

[Livia]

Nice character

So this was a nice character, I like the flames from her hands and love the slight shine from her arms overall a decent character you have here really nice work here, some of the "JEWELRY" could have more of a shine on them, and the "FLAMES" could have more of a glow on them, but other then that this was some good character work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some glow on the flames, and have the jewlery shine and sparkle

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