XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jub Jub Photoshop version]

Cute

This was a cute little charchter you have here love the little green furr love those cute eyes and that lighting is notbad I think you should have the lightning come out more like a beam of light dropping down just an idea and an option to ad some more to this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more beam of light comming down

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[Guilmon]

Nice charchter

So this was a nice charchter there is some decent detail here I would make the background a bit lighter or lighter texture and the flame could have a glow on it but really this was a decent charchter you have here with some nice details on it so nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above a few small changes

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[Gaige]

This was cute

Wow I honestly feel like this is my fave work from you the line work so smooth the colortone very well done and we'll placed the eyes jump out at me and the goggles are a nice touch and that's where I would actually ad some sparkle or glare come off the glasses

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare and shine off the glass goggles

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[Sketchy-Style Rachel]

Beautiful

Now that was beautiful that was just very alurring and even suggestive but that's ok I really love these original work of yours as these were pretty good very stylish even without color they are pretty good but some full color on these pieces it would be pretty amazing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill these with color

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[Daisy]

Very nice

So this one was nice and subtle but it was fantastically done the light color makes it just right the sunshine cute face makes it work even more the simple yet alluring look is beautiful so you have a nice and beautiful piece here make more like this I added this one as my fave

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more like this one

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[Sunshine]

Cool

So this was cool and kind of interesting with the hair design that's kind of unique I think some color added to this piece would be a blast and really look good very nice sketch here maybe adding some color and I some background scene of some type would be cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested a few tips would be some background color and color overall

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[Lissie]

Cool

So this was cool I think the suspenders was a nice touch and could have been colored and would have been a great addition so besides that this was well drawn very good detail and nice shades on this one love the sketch drawing here really nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be nice

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[Murder the Sun]

This was cool

So I thaught this was kind of cool I did think that maybe it being related to the sun that maybe you should have had more light Ray's or a beam of light and more shade in the birds outter texture would have been cool too but anyways just a few tips and opinions

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few tips and ideas suggest

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[Zombie Coffee]

Haha nice

So this was nice I like the idea here of fresh coffee in the morning because it feels like one is dead in the morning so good connection there the art was good and the effects we're nice like the smoke or steam from the coffee maybe more of that or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra effects but not really by much

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[Rosa]

Cool

Another cool drawing by you with some nice linework and just a very good and alurring visual you have presented here for us I do think you could ad more to the background it was just too bland and you could ad a few props that would really spruce things up a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some props to the background or some colored design

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