XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Murder the Sun]

This was cool

So I thaught this was kind of cool I did think that maybe it being related to the sun that maybe you should have had more light Ray's or a beam of light and more shade in the birds outter texture would have been cool too but anyways just a few tips and opinions

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A few tips and ideas suggest

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[Zombie Coffee]

Haha nice

So this was nice I like the idea here of fresh coffee in the morning because it feels like one is dead in the morning so good connection there the art was good and the effects we're nice like the smoke or steam from the coffee maybe more of that or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra effects but not really by much

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[Rosa]

Cool

Another cool drawing by you with some nice linework and just a very good and alurring visual you have presented here for us I do think you could ad more to the background it was just too bland and you could ad a few props that would really spruce things up a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some props to the background or some colored design

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[Inktober 2016 (Day 02) - Sasha Grey]

This was cool

Well I have to say that this was cool love the form of her first and the expression on her face and the color is dry but works well I like it a very nice drawing here not sure you should change anything with this one but I like your work there's lots of talent that comes out of this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this piece

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[my icon]

Nice this was cool

So this was cool looks like a snake eye all though seems like you could have done more with the background maybe some texture in the background but overall this was pretty cool I like the work but could have more details in it anyways good job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background and eye detail

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[Vader Elevating Photography to Art]

Wonderfully surreal

Well we know Vader is the best of the galaxy, but wow what a unique way to use that idea of him and the elements from the franchise to create such a surreal piece of art. I love surreal things and thinking outside the box. I love what you have done here for that very reason of being outside the box. The coloring, the art design, the flow from one image to the next, all really impressed me and made we fall for this piece. You even added this paper like texture over the entire piece that I just love love. This one is now and instant fave so nice job here, I would only add maybe a folded corner border to go with the paper texture.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try one of those folded paper corner borders to really go with your paper texture

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[Attack On Titan]

Very nice work

This was cool I really like the two faces here and you presented them well I actually think if you added color or even just one of the faces in color that would be a real plus of things, maybe even the "RINGS" on the binder in color would be cool even, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color.

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[Bloodelf Rogue]

Nice work

Well wow what a great sexy little piece you have here, that kill she did, you can tell she was happy with that, but I wish there was more "BLOOD" on her skin and more "RED" to the blood, I get you went with a wash over of warm tones to make those colors more brown, but a deeper red would really pop with the essence of the game. I think your elf is well done and the smile and eyes are great, but I do wish the eyes had more glow effects to them, more of a mist haze over them like in the game. I love love the purple accents in the armour and the overall look here, but next time give it a bit more in effects to draw you in more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, you need more deep reds and effects inside the elfs eyes.

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[Zombie Fright]

Very welldone

Wow I have to say that this was very welldone, the "EYES" are very intense and love the blood and I think you could have added more "BLOOD" even would have been a nice touch you have here, this was a pretty brilliant painting and would love to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More splatter of blood.

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[Hand sketch]

Very awsome

Wow I have to say that this was awsome, I love the fine detail you put in the skintone and even every fine line here and there, the "NAILS" could have more of a glare on them though, just a nice polish that would make them glare from lighting or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare on the nails.

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