XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Notbad

So the animation was notbad but seemed Abit choppy I think you could have had more flow and bounce to the animation it was not fluid enough but I did like the drawing here and was really well done and well drawn so nice work on this piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more fluid animation

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PaddleTone responds:

Yep, this was an early animation that I did and it shows. Thanks so much for the critique!

[Gravity Falls Fanwork]

Notbad

I think this one isnt' too bad, I am just not that familiar with this series or cartoon. I do like the vector like background at the top, but I don't understand the background they are standing on, what is going on here? I am not too sure, the lighting here is almost a bit too bright, you lost some colors and lines over brighting them and washing them out in light. I would tone that down next time and try to use more sunburst and less bright beams that ends up washing the characters out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add less brightness to the characters, try different lighting effects as they seem washed out

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JessxJess responds:

That's fair, I appreciate the honesty! There's defiantly things to work on xD The feet always bothered me, but I try not to go back to old works and change them, I just try similar things in new works! I appreciate the feedback! I would recommend watching Gravity Falls, its a great show.

[Triforce!]

nice

A nice character here love those eyes and good expression on the face too, I think you could have had the armour "SHINE" and "SPARKLE" with some star sparkles or something just an idea and opinion ofcourse, but overall a great character here, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the armour.

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[The Gift]

ethereal

Well this gives off that ethereal feeling and element for sure, I do love the way the girl looks up as if she is looking to god or heavens or something bigger than her. I love the braid in her hair off to the side and the shading you used with blacks and whites works really well here. I do like the subtle background with bursts of speckles in the black background as if she is beaming or full of magic. I do think this could use coloring, or a version in color, just to see what you can do there, as I always love to see things in different perspectives.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try doing this with some colors next time but good job overall

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[girls waiting in the beach]

This was nice

So I like the character work for sure but have to say that sunlight was nice I think you should have more sunlight come down like a beam on the girls assets, but anyways nice work here it was a pleasure to review this and more of your work you are very talented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sun beam.

~X~

[Female Portrait]

Realistic

Wow this is just beautiful and so realistic. I am in aw of how much detailed you have placed into this, it almost looks like a real image or perhaps a 3D piece of art. I love the amount of shading and textures and coloring you have used here in this piece, it truely stands out here with those eyes and the nails just really work. I love the bursts of different colors in the background used and blurred off to give your focus on this main character. The hair too is a shining star in your piece and I do hope to see more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to improve on, I would not change anything

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[Sexy Girls from Ooo]

Nice

I like this I especily love the "VIBRANT" colors of the outfits and the backround work is just so amazing so nice job there the character work is amazing as always, and overall just a beautiful and amazing art piece you have here, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would just say make more stuff with these vibrant colors.

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[Fionna: love for the bubblegum]

Pretty nifty

So this design of the character is really nice work you have here love the lines and smooth curves you really bring out the nice style here, I really like how the character comes alive and its your talent that brings that alive so nice job indeed, look forward to even more.

~X~

[Ranamon: I can be sexy too]

Nice line work

So very nice linework you have here this was pretty solid stuff, I really like the way this has come about you bring a character to life those lines are smooth and make up the whole piece love the smooth curves even, very unique and quality design here.

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