XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[VVG W.I.P 1 (SKETCH)]

Oh wow

I didn't see this version but it's pretty cool the very start here and is nice work a nice style here and shows good idea of what is to come at this stage I would even sketch out some more detail in the background but overall this was really good of a start to the drawing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more of the background to it

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[The Green One]

I like the lighting

So the lighting effect that seems to come off the said of his face looks good it's done with different color use but it makes it look lighted up so I think you need to push some lighter parts of the hair like on side to the top to reflect the lighting effect but really nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added lighting effect

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[yuri fanart]

Decent

Well this was notbad pretty decent work as I said in the other one some smoother lines would suffice just fine some deeper colors and in this case some background detail those eyes I can see you adding a sparkle and shine comming off of them but nice charchter work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few suggestions made just above

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starbaka responds:

if you dont have anything nice to say donpt say it at all how could you say mean things abot my art??/ my colrs are DEEP an i dont like backgrounds becose its my STYLE!!! ٩(//̀Д/́/)۶

[mah oc~]

The character is notbad

Well the character work is not bad it's not perfect but has some good potential the colors are good and it can be better structured more smoother lines would be nice too these are just a few ideas that could really Improve on something like this anyways try some stuff out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some structure needed and smoother lines

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[dashero23]

Cute

Well this was cute you have a nice little charchter here and was pretty cute love the sharp design on this and that purple is a pretty deep color even so nice job there the rainbow beam was pretty slick I would suggest an idea to ad some glow on the rainbow beam

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A glow on the rainbow beam

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[TheNewDJ]

Cute

Well not sure what was going on with this piece but I did find that this was a rather cute one I like the smile and like the effort but seems like you could have had more to this for starters maybe some shine on the word and some lighting effect on the back end of this aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas above

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[Seasun]

Very Beautiful

Very beautifully done here just the pose alone and then this beautiful background is so great really nice work indeed that globe is a nice touch I would love to see more of a glow a radiant glow surrounding the globe would be nice just a lightning effect that could work well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a more radiant glow surrounding the globe

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[Fear of flying. Self portrait]

Nice drawing

I really like these drawings the sketch and a deep drawing very well sketched and it's a good expression on the face as it does show what is going on. I would love to see this done in some color though just a tad bit of color maybe even the window anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

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[Leohunter]

Wow impressive

Very impressive style here love the lighting effects I think you could ad even more shine and glow to those lighting effects there even that spark at end of staff could use more sparkling effect but a good design here nice color theme going on and overall great design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effects and sparkle effects

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[Vivienne - Zombie Hunter]

Very nice charchter

So this was a really good charchter I love how you had a full charchter here and like the blade I do think you can improve on the blade with some shine and sparkle to it nice work here though a good charchter all together very nice talent here but regardless it's all good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the blade or even go one step further and throw some dripping blood

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