XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hero and Pet // Work in progress]

Nice

Nice drawing so this was a nice drawing you have here wish it was a larger scale though it would be nice to be in some color even but regardless this was a nice drawing you have here and good detail even so keep up the good work hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger scale and or some color

~X~

[Sorry for spamming]

Ok notbad

So this was better then the other and I found it to be cool looking sprites are nice this one was still a little fuzzy but still enjoyed the effort you put in here you could polish this up with some improvement on adding a background or scene in there just an idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a background idea and some polish on the fuzzy look

~X~

[Eh.]

Different

Well this was different I like it and looks good but seems like it was fuzzy in visual so was not sure what was going on here but the visual was notbad and could seeing you polish this up a bit or something but a decent piece entry here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better visual as it was fuzzy

~X~

[Creeper In Pokémon Style]

Nice work

This was actually pretty cool some lighting changes wouldn't hurt but for the most part this was cool and is nifty seeing the creeper on here in art form a good piece of art if you ask me just needs a few changes on lighting effects and placed points but nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effect changes

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[Tommy The Tomato]

This was cool

I like the tomato here and what looks to be a crown on it's top that crown could have some shine and sparkle to it it's a nifty piece but adding shine to it would be something really nice here and it's just an idea something to think about anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the crown would be nice

~X~

[Planet Hologram]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the design you have here it was pretty nifty a good idea with the color but I think you need more color in there and more glow and the borders should also match the color theme as well these are just some suggestions for improvments

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few color and glow ideas to improve on this

~X~

[I EAT COLORS]

Nice

I like the use of color here and like the character work even the sun glasses with color is nice I do however think adding more depth to the character would be nice and more color to the character itself would be a good idea but mostly this was pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color and depth added would be nice

~X~

[WIP Wattpad IRL]

The start

Well this was cool the outline work here very good early stages of this piece the colored version is well-done so this early stuff is pretty impressive and shows the progress of it all so keep up the good work and good style I will look for more work from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this is a progress. Work piece

~X~

[Jack Lychoniuz]

This was cute

Well this was a cute piece you have here the character has charchter the background lacked but overall this was a nice piece I like the color theme but wish there was more theme to it like deeper textuture within it but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background on this one would be nice

~X~

[Shock Kasumi]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I like the drawing seems like some of the work can be more refined like lines and coloring ofcourse and the lines paper as background could be changed to regular drawing paper those are just some ideas to think about but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Suggested a few ideas above

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