XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Figure Drawing Practice 2]

Cute

So this was cute I do like the character here and like the backround on this aswell but wouldnt mind more depth in the backround, like maybe a city scene or something maybe just some color design or painting, anyways nice work here, great character form.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround depth.

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[A choice...]

Nice

I love seeing the two sides of art pieces like this and this was pretty cool I like the style dark vs light I think as a form of improvment you could ad some cracks in the brick but that's just an idea and an opinion of course anyways nice work here nice ideas here make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some cracks as a detail on the bricks

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amsyar555 responds:

Thanks! You're right, I should add more cracks to the bricks.

[Cloud Sitters]

This was interesting

Well this one was pretty interesting the faces do need more emotion though that's one thing I saw right off and I would say having more lighting from the sun would be nice like a light beam on the girls or something well there was a few tips and tricks

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun and light beam and more expression on the face

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[CAT EARS!!! :)]

Decent

So this was decent not sure what the second piece is but the first one with ears was notbad actually pretty cute and good charchter design too you should do more larger print of that one as for the second one just not sure on that one but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A larger view screen canvus of the character one

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[Deer stuck in HeadLights]

Nice and simple

So this was nice and simple you have some good ideas here with charchter design and whatnot you could use some background though as it was lacking a scene or something also some skin tone was lacking aswell but anyways nice work here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background and some skintone

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[Upside down]

Nice

So this was nice and yes upside down is ok and kind of cool I like the upside down view the hair was a nice color and the expression on the face was good there is not much needed here so I will refrain from pushing advice and suggestions anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a thing with this one

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[Dying for friends is nv forgot]

Wow

So this had some good meaning to it and I will say while there is not much on this one it does have some good quality and the background is bland I think you could ad some more drops and Even streaks of blood your blood color is already very good so go with it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More deep blood drops

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[Blood Devil]

Different

So this was kind of different I like it and this was different I like the reds in here and the darkness of it all these types of art stuff is always kinda unique and different kind of abstract but kind of not anyways nice work here and I look forward to seeing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's abstract at it's best so therefore no changes needed

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[Hisoka]

Very nice indeed

The paint style is really good and I like the view point here especially with him sticking out the cane I do think that you could use the end of the cane to your advantage such as adding a sparkle on the gold tip of it and that would really show the rest off well and something to think about for this awsome charchter piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on end of cane

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[The Zebra]

And interesring view

So the view shot on this is pretty good I like the front view here and you can really see the details of this and good work I like the style here I like the background but feel the could use more color variety in it so nice job there and make more like this one it's cool and unique

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome work but more variety of color in background would be cool

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