XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Naruto time]

Nice work

So this was cool I like the view shot you have him in this was pretty cool I think you can ad a glare to his eyes like a little sparkle to it but other then that this was pretty good work and you have some good structure on the character so it was all a plus here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine and sparkle on the eyes

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[Aged ice cream man]

That was nice

A nice drawing not sure why it's sideways but the line work could be smoother and the whole piece could have more depth like texture and color to it overall a good art piece here very well done so I have suggested a few things that I hope will help

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Upside right and some color would be nice

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[Shadow Priest Portrait]

Very nice work

I like the work here love the deep purples those eyes are pretty impressive I think you could put morenof a glow on them and some deep purple borders or frames would be nice even but I like what you did here love that color of purple here anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested some frames and borders and some glow on the eyes

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[Death]

A cute death

So this was a cute death art piece love the fresh colors and the cute designs just overall cute I think could use more texture and even some shine to this but I liked it and was pretty cool looking and a nice visual so keep up the decent work I will look for more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more texture and shine

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[Untraditional Art Comp Highlighters]

Very nice

This was a very nice piece here I like the finished product you have left for us and a well done piece and with those style of markers that's a plus in itself I would love to see you take this piece into a Photoshop program and add some effects that would really be a nice idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added effects would be cool

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[Highlighter Untraditional Comp WIP]

This was nifty

A nifty piece you have here I really like the art style you have here the progress of all four pics really come together and the showcase of progress is a nice option to show us the viewer so that's a plus and I really like don't think anything needs changing as it's a progress piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one

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[Wattpad IRL]

This was cool

I like the style on this one the colors are fresh and we'll done outline is nice and even that wording is pretty fantastic this was a fresh piece of art I can see you adding more colors in the background but this was still a fresh and nice looking piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more color added to the background

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[VVG W.I.P 2 (LINE)]

Notbad

And here is the middle piece of the drawing I like that you did three different versions to show off the progress now you should do a sort of portrait and show all the progress with all pieces together just an idea though regardless this was some nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a progress portrait

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[VVG W.I.P 1 (SKETCH)]

Oh wow

I didn't see this version but it's pretty cool the very start here and is nice work a nice style here and shows good idea of what is to come at this stage I would even sketch out some more detail in the background but overall this was really good of a start to the drawing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more of the background to it

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[The Green One]

I like the lighting

So the lighting effect that seems to come off the said of his face looks good it's done with different color use but it makes it look lighted up so I think you need to push some lighter parts of the hair like on side to the top to reflect the lighting effect but really nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added lighting effect

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