XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Batman v Superman]

Haha nice

Wow this was really nice work you put some nice detail here and showed a good action scene here the sandwich was pretty good the text bubbles was another good idea even if I didn't understand but anyways no change needed here it's a fine piece of art and comic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed

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[Ketchup]

Nice logo

I guess these can be good for practice this one looks pretty good for an advertisement good use of the tomato and and good use of the font or wording I think more tomato should be in there but overall this was pretty good of a design here anyways nice idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More tomato

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[Fatboi]

Cool

So this portrait of someone came out well and looks good good colortone some nice expression on the face and good detail with eyes and such but overall I found this to be some good artwork here and if you added some background detail it would be a plus but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort for sure some design or some type of scene

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[2spooky4me]

Haha nice

So this was cool I like the vibrant colors the lacking background could use more to it maybe some streaks of color back there or something that could be placed like a pattern of some sort but something needs to be in place besides just the white background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background effort and detail

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[Aule]

Wow amazing

Wow this was amazing work some really nice lines you have here to really form some detail I think some extra shades here and even doing a color version would have been cool too but anyways nice job here really good detail and design anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shades and color even some background

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[Inktober 2016 (Day 03) - Jayden Jaymes]

Wow nice

Wow this was nice I love the frontal view here that was really cool and this was a nice stand up charchter she is large and in charge and she's not afraid to show it her lower tattoo would have been a good focus point and if colored res would have been nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make that tattoo red

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[Inktober 2016 (Day 01) - Naked Woman against the crime]

Now that's nice

Now that's some nice ink tober you really put out some nice lines and shades on this piece I like the detail and love the energy love the red goggles I think if you added a glare to the red goggles it would be a shinning moment

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare and shine on the goggles

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[Spanbob]

Nice work

This was nice work love all the cigs and stuff the character of SpongeBob was really good and I love the dark feel on this whole piece maybe some more small details in the background like cracks in the wall or some props back there would be pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props in the background and some cracks in the wall small detail stuff

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[Omme Cartoons & Friends in Gravity Falls]

Really good view

So this was kind of cool and the view shot was just great I do think that the sunlight could have come in more like a beam through the tree more glare on it too so nice job but more sunlight next time besides that this was pretty good work if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sun beam and more glare from the sun beam

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[Piranhacrab]

That was nifty

Wow I have to say that this was pretty nifty I like that you could make it look like that with the paper that was a good idea and creative so nice job there and very creative maybe ad more color brighter color to these somehow just an idea though anyways keep up the creative mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More creative stuff like this and more color

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