XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Omme Cartoons & Friends in Gravity Falls]

Really good view

So this was kind of cool and the view shot was just great I do think that the sunlight could have come in more like a beam through the tree more glare on it too so nice job but more sunlight next time besides that this was pretty good work if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sun beam and more glare from the sun beam

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[Piranhacrab]

That was nifty

Wow I have to say that this was pretty nifty I like that you could make it look like that with the paper that was a good idea and creative so nice job there and very creative maybe ad more color brighter color to these somehow just an idea though anyways keep up the creative mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More creative stuff like this and more color

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[CountryCat]

Nice style

I like your work you seem to use lighting effects and such I think you could have left more sunlight in the background though and have it shine more on the elements but overall this was pretty good stuff I like your work hope to see more from you real soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects ofcourse

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[Herr Newsflash]

Really nice

So this was a really nice charchter you have here I love the dark feel of him seems like you could have shines more light even I could see you lighting up the body suit more and having a nice reflection from it but a good design you have here so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effects

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[Ape the Ripper]

Good charchter

So this was a good charchter you have here I like the blood on ground I think you should have more blood dripping and maybe a little something more in the background you have a good charchter structure here though anyways nice design

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[Speedpaint - Stephanie]

This was cool

I love the pink hair it really came out well and the piercings really came off well and this was a nice job the lacking background could use some work though maybe someone in the distance or something and the piercings could have a shine to them and maybe a sparkle off the end of the glasses

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle and some background stuff

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[Speedpaint - Grace]

Wow this was really impressive

Wow so very impressive I live the different shading on this the style is nice I think adding some lighting effects would be cool and some background work would be even better you have a nice energy about your work here some really good effort so keep that up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some lighting effects around her back of head and some background details

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[Veronica]

Cool

So this was cool I like the form and what looks to be glasses not too fond of the gradient look or filter but I do like the charchter work here so nice job here I like your style and look forward to even more from you nice detail nice lines etc keep making great art pieces

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would put a sparkle off the end of the glasses

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[Hashiru Miko in progress]

Nice

This was cool I like the progress work here these are really nice the start to ending is very nice your energy is really good I like the style here only thing I would change would be some fancy or artistic borders but anyways nice work on the progress style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fancy borders and or frames

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CarolinaRei7 responds:

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[Bird Horus]

Nice

And the finished project I am assuming it's nice and I do enjoy the coloring now I do think you could ad some background maybe some design or pattern of some sort but anyways this was nice job and some nice effort here so keep making more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just some background

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