XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inkling Girl]

This was cute

Well I have to say that this was cute you have some nice charchter forms here very smooth lines and just a good piece of work I do think you could add some background maybe some type of scene in there too but overall a good art piece here hope to see more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background

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Lunchables69 responds:

Thx for the feedback! I'll make sure to make the backgrounds a little less baren in the future.

[Nero]

Nice

This was notbad I do wish we could put some expression on her face though as there was not much at all so nice job here I like the character form it's good a nice detail and nice shades even I do think some background work is needed though it was Abit bland and lacking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background is needed or atleast some props

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[Boop]

Nice work

So this was some nice work I think the background needs more energy to it and more effort it could have some more textuture in background and more detail maybe even some props or something just an idea though the character was pretty good and overall a nice quality

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work maybe some props

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[Mara]

Simple and cute

So this was pretty simple and cute I like how simple this was and the girl is cute I think adding more deeper skintone would be a plus on things but overall this was good work I do like the style of this though so keep making good charchter work like you have here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more meshed skin with deeper colors

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[Bruce Greaser (no shades)]

Really cool

Wow I have to say that this was really cool I love the black and white style here you really pushed some nice little extras on this I just love these little charchter styles you do wish you did morenof these or put them in a comic type of some sort anyways nice charchter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A touch of color would be nice maybe just a little piece of color

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[Yoshi is Tired of Your S***]

Nice once again

This was cool and you can never go wrong with Yoshi the lines seemed to thick maybe might look better if you had smoother line work and some sort of background would also be key too and besides that a simple border or frame might be cool too anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work some borders and some smoother lines

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[Addict]

Very nice

So this was cool I like the sharp and deep color you use in this one and the eyes came out so well I think one change that could be an improvement would be the background red could use some texture some deep textures make it a meshed color anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture in background

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[Salvation]

Nice

This was cool I like this because it tells a small story here and has some nice visuals like the drop of water and on that point right there I think you can have some sparkle comming off the drop from sunlight or something that would be a nice effect and I would have his shell a different color so it don't conflict with dark backround

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have suggested a few changes to improve on

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[Marty-O the Plamber]

Oh nice

I like your style of art I like the abstract feel of it it really has this van go feel about it but it's good and could even be better so nice effort nice detail and nice charchter form I think you could ad some background though that would really Improve on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added background would be cool

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[Fat Guy]

Lol funny

So this was kind of cute the creep fat guy wording could be more better like a text don't or something but other then that this was a decent charchter some parts can be more polished up like linework and such I like the character work though anyways good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved wording

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