XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[2B fan art]

Oh wow

So what you have here for us is one big swoop of eye candy nice detail and a great element of style. so that was a plus for me, the detail really shines. wow I must say this is something for an eye to admire, there is alot of beauty in this like the backround and reflects off the character herself there some nice focus points I do think that the "SWORD" should have much more shine on it though or a sparkle at the end. So you have done something here not a lot of people can do and thats show off the great talents in pieces like this and thats rare.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some shine in the sword and a sparkle here or there.

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Neferity responds:

Thanks so much!!!! actually this draw it's a little old hahaha I gonna redraw it ! I'll take your tips for it , thank you <3

[Absinthe]

Nice and creative.

Some very nice creative styles here and I like the idea of looking into this so with that sense of things I think instead of a frame you could ad a window like if you are looking into this world, but anyways you have some nice little mysteros things and some nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think instead of a frame you could ad a window like if you are looking into this world.

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[Chupa Cabra / Rabbid Rabbit]

Cute

And another cute piece or character but theres not much you can do more with this Im thinking maybe some "SHINE" on the belly but thats probably about it, overall this is actually a funny little character that you do have here and I think its pretty creative, so nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a shine on the belly would be cute.

~X~

[Darkeh]

Very nice

I love the design on this the yellow glowing circles on the left side you should do more stuff like that onto the right side they have a nice lighting effect, more mystical and stylish, and would make the whole piece look much better, but overall a nice piece of design and patteren.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the yellow glowing circles on the left side you should do more stuff like that onto the right side they have a nice lighting effect

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[JINKIES! Wallpaper]

Notbad

Well this was notbad but seems a bit on the plain side and could use for some more pattern and design within whole piece more oranges more browns just more design to it to liven it up and ad some sparkle as a whole just an opinion to better improve on a classic. But for what it is it's nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra design and pattern in there

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[3D Original Gameboy]

Very impressive

Now this was very impressive it is so life like to the real thing I should know I had a few of the real things but it's very well detailed and just so realistic down to the red light I'm thinking you could have had the red light blinking as it was always blinking for me lol but that would be a nice lil animation that would work well here but regardless you have presented a great replica you should think about doing the other versions as well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A lil blinking light could be a nice addition

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[Albedo- Overlord]

Beautiful angel

Now here was a beautiful angel over a blank slate the blank slate is what I don't like but you could all ways dress up the background with some sort of palish off color but not white since the angel is white to start off with and even a red or deep red would make this whole piece look very good and sharp

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A base color backround is needed

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[Bulletproof Vest]

Nice action

Nice action in this series of comics I love the action that you go from a to be and make it like a real story and movie here I think the only changes here would be in the blacked rooms have that light bulb beam a light or burst of light would make a nice effect for that ending scene and whatnot nice series though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects in blacked out room

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[Spiders]

Color

Love the color here not just on the characters but on the backround too when you use full color the whole comic just comes alive and brings light to the story even more with lots of focus and that's what you have done here no changes needed as always because you have great talent in all of these works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And once again more changes needed

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 2]

Cool

I should really follow these in order I was a tad confused on this part but as for the effort and style you did pretty good and you braught some nice detail to light with the nice color and detail to focus o work here but anyways as always a nice balance of comic here and enjoyed it for what it is any way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure with these as you have the comic style down pretty solid

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