XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober Day 7 Lost]

Cool

Now this was cool I like the style here the fresh look and faded feel of it all guess this was a contest of some sorts but you went beyond that and made it something special a good piece here with a story to tell and that's exactly what I liked about this and don't think this needs any changes as you have a nice piece here

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A solid piece with some nice story behind it

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[BFF - Pg 001]

Cool

Another in the comic series you really bring it out and show the world that it doesn't have to be simple and mainstream you have nice characters nice frames and you mix color and black and white all together and make it work just right the story is not half bad either but I will suggest more color not all but props and pieces here or there that can really stand out and make this different from other pieces honestly you have already done that and that was pretty cool but anyways nice job here it looks fantastic and overall great job

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Some extra added color would be my suggestion

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[luma in cosplay]

Very nice

Your artwork is very unique and different I love the shine and bounce you ad to all your girls and you give them some flavor Wich is always nice I really could see you working on the background though as this one could have used some sort of city backdrop or something so nice job indeed try some things out

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Some backround work for sure a city scene or an open field

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[good morning]

Beautiful

This was very beautiful even the girl herself was great. Great soft colors all the way around I think you could use that back wall and put some props even lamps so you could use some bursts of light or other shading that could bring more shine to her hair as well it's a great piece though and like the detail.

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Make more use of the backround like ad props lamps lighting etc

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[the Java Maker]

Very unique

Wow I must say this one was out of nowhere and the creativity comes alive with every little etch and scetch that I see. Love how you have no bland spots. And you really created something nice and different here with some decent character here in a strange world would have liked some lighting effect some how but for what you do have here it's pretty impressive. I could see you putting some small creatures in the backround to bring out the backround much more to show off this exotic world and of course more table props and such would be a huge plus as well just something to think about in future works and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some little extra props and such here and there maybe even some bursts of light

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[Till Lindemann]

Oh wow

This came out really well the colortone on this alone is beautifully meshed with the plain backround but it seems to come around well I would like to see something done with the background but besides that your line work and drawing are a fantastic piece here and nice addition

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Something in the backround but not much

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DocWinther responds:

Thank you for your kind words and your feedback. Its very much appreciated

[Burst Open]

Love it

Oh this piece here is very nice I love how everything has it's own design here or mesh the colors came out just right and the sparkling stars on the girls dress are good but maybe the stars should be more brighter and more sparkly more jumping out at you but with that said that's all that I could see changing up

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More brightness on sparkling

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6khaos9 responds:

thanks, i appreciate the feedback and the kind words.

[Sugar]

Very good idea

This was a good outcome of things and glad you went ahead with this as notmany would have gone this far in depth, but very nice style. I really like the idea here of a clock crew comic I dont think I have seen one or a few before so its nice see one now and you did a great job and some very nice use of the comic frames and design of the characters, I hope you make more stuff like this it was pretty nifty. So some very good stuff here, A refreshing piece of art and design, and shows off the talent from within, and shows you really outdid yourself with this one.

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The frames were great but maybe that outter grey frame should be a red or green or something brighter.

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[Spectrum]

Cool design

And here was something that you could do with all sorts of stuff as this had some nice things flying around here and there, I love the center piece and stars that fly out, there could be some better lighting effects on the flying stars and center piece, but overall nice job.

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there could be some better lighting effects on the flying stars and center piece

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[Guardbreak Girl]

Nice

So with this one everything seemed to come into place with the colors the shadows, the lighting even the backround fit in well with this, so there wont be ny needed upgrades or changes to this piece as this one does not need any extra changes, those are the best kinds to have.

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These are the best kinds of pieces to come onto as this particular one does not need any improvvements or changes or even upgrades for that matter.

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