XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mermay Day 9]

Awsome

So this was cool

Another cool character, I absolutly love the lighting effects on the chest area and such I do think that you should have more lighting effects like on that sword or even some sparkle shine just something more to it, but besides that this was a well designed character very nice indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and lighting effects.

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[Mermay Day 13]

Very nice

I like these ones with all the ocean life and such, this particular character was pretty nice the "HEART" was a good idea, theres lots of blue here so maybe some sort of sparkles here and there to reflect off from the character to the backround would be kind of a nifty idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something to reflect the deifference from backround and character blues.

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[Betsy Bruiser]

Very nice work

So there was some good details in this one and it really shows off your talent and detail here, I was highly impressed with the visuals here. Wow some nice work here I like all the poses and like all the style and detail in this one as for improvment not sure, but you have some amazing work very good structure on character design here, Anyways this shines with delight very fun stuff to review here. I was pleased to review this piece it just shows off really well, so hope you make more fantastic stuff like this soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think its fine as is some extra flashy sparkles and effects wouldnt hurt either but all is good in my eyes.

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[Too Fast gif]

Hmmm

Well this little toon was okay, not really a toon or animation, but art gif, but I can see you making it a series out of this if you just keep going with it. It needs more and it needs to be a bit faster. The style of the "SONIC" character really is spot on, you can draw very well, but you need more context, we all know he goes around and gets rings, but you can do so much more with this. I think since you have the basics of the character down and your background fits the mold too, you should give an idea to making this a short animation in full.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this into a series

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[Nidorina+Rapidash=Nidodash]

Another cool fusion

So you have another cool fusion here I really like the spikes here and the horse form was good too all a good dinner but again I think adding a background that reflects where they fusion or come from would be a really good background element anyways nice piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some background element

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[Sandslash+Magnemite=Magneslash (Pokemon Fusion)]

Oh cool

Pokemon fusions are always cool just like this one is I really like the tone of color like the grey parts and such that was cool and very good depth to the color tone I do think you could ad to the background as I was lacking some background detail or even some props and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background as it was lacking just a tad

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[Hero Pet Challenge]

Very nice drawing

This was cool and very nice drawing love the color too and that flame is good but think the flame should be brighter and also adding some background would also be nice atleast some scene of some type but besides that this was a good entry piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work in this one

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[Undertale]

Very cool

Wow I have to say this was really cool the pixel work is good and the characters are very nicely done I do think adding more polish like shine to them would be a plus on things just a little idea though but anyways nice work here keep it up and keep it going

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small polish

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[This match will get red hot!... Now go!]

Cool

Now this would be a cool battle and yes it will get pretty hot very good charchter work here some nice form and the perfect pose for battle between the two so nice work there and a good form indeed so nice entry here with these two beautiful ladies make more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really no changes here

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[The Great Ero-Sennin Mutenroshi Happosai]

This was cute

Well this was a cute piece you have here I like this charchter and the big eyes made it so adorable so nice little details there but I do believe that the background is lacking I like the design back there but maybe some scene backdrop would have been cool anyways nice submission

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work is needed like a scene of some type

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